OC Character Thread 2 (This thread is now locked, please use the OC Character Thread 3 above)

Note: North Star, and basically anypony affiliated with Star Caravans is made for a Fallout, or Fallout Type setting

Name: North Star

Race: Earth Pony

Age: 32

Mane: Dulled Gold

Coat: Felt Green

Cutie mark.: A white, eight pointed star

Distinguishing Features: North carries a scar on his cheek from taking a talon to the face, and a large mark in his side from taking a shotgun to the hip.

Specialty (eg. special spells, unique powers etc): North Star, renown bounty hunter, expert markspony and frontierspony. North knows very well how to survive and kill, most likely at the same time. He is a deadly match with any weapon, even his bare hooves.

Weaknesses: North is an admitted alcholic, a recovering addict from both Steady and Buck, and suffers heavily, emotionally, from failure or loss.

Occupation: Bounty Hunter/Game Hunter/Caravanner

Gear: North's selection of personal weaponry ranges from his personal, custom build Lever-action Rifle, a pair of lever-action shotguns, a .44 Revolver, and a knife & hatchet combo. He keeps the smaller of this selection holstered between his scavenged Pre-War SWAT armor and his black duster. He's also often seen with a hat, black to match his duster.

History: North started as a runaway from an estranged family after meeting his biological father in a bar, and then witnessing his death to radiation poisoning. In the years following, North became the sheriff of a budding settlement, watched as it burned to the ground, started as a caravan guard, was knocked unconscious during a raider ambush, settled with the surviving caravanners in an abandoned Stable, and stood firm in defiance as a crazed Talon Mercenary overloaded the Stable's reactor. After surviving the resulting radioactive explosion, North wandered the wastes until he found the courage and the caps to start up his own Caravanning business: Star Caravans, which he heads to this very day.

Personality: North is typically seen as the stereotypical cold sniper, and in most cases he is, but when he isn't behind a rifle, North is a caring, protective stallion, willing to put himself on the line for the sake of his friends and comrades. When he's behind a bottle, North is much more brazen and headstrong, and often believes he can sing like his brother.

Current Home: North can be spotted either on the trade route or blazing a new trail, but can reliably be found at his home where Star Caravans calls it's HQ in the Equestrian Heartlands

Misc: North's drink of choice is Whiskey, most often without ice. North also has a minor-moderate fear of fire.

Name: Cloudy Dreamer
Race: Unicorn
Age: 18 [may shift a bit for the purposes of an RP]
Mane: Dark blue and quite long, though it is normally a big ol mess of bed-mane, when properly brushed out it actually hangs remarkably straight and hangs right to the ground... though he's more likely to just stuff it into a hat.

Coat: light blue with cuddly long fur and some white on his muzzle that forms a circle on his snout when viewed from the front.

Cutie mark.: His mark is a bit ambiguous, seen as both a white pillow or a fluffy cloud depending on who is asked.

Extra details that aren't needed but are nice to add:


Distinguishing Features: That moon-shaped blotch on his snout, and often wearing a purple Beret that keeps his messy ass mane out of his face.


Specialty (eg. special spells, unique powers etc): He seems to have a specialty for 'persistent' magics, reffering to things that don't require the user to constantly channel it, such as enchanting and runes. Other magics seem to have a habit of backfiring, which is actually a great unfluence in why he looked into pesistent types of magic, though he adores 'experimenting' to try and make new magic anyway, it frequently just blows up in his face to rather comical affect, though usually not harmfully so. He is particularly curious about his own rather un-unicorn ability to stand on and interact with clouds like a pegasus, despite not having wings. He doesn't personally know it yet [or might depending on age changes in an RP], but his ability to interact with clouds and weather are born of a sort of half-breed syndrome, putting him between a unicorn and a Pegasus, and is also somewhat responsible for his difficulties with normal magic that calls for steady focus.

He has a wild imagination and interesting dreams, which help him with being a good story-teller, exercise his inventive nature, and occasionally quite the problem solver.

He is an extremely active dreamer, though that normally wouldn't be a big deal, his seem to include a pretty steady flow of precognitive dreams, even if they are most often benign and simple. They tend to become trigger memories that he'll just suddenly 'remember' after a series of cues just 'click' for him. The oddity of his dreams 'did' attract a certain pony's attention, being the patron of dreams afterall, and he enjoys the insightful dream-talks with her.


Weaknesses: The Spectacular streak of spell-backfires amongst what many would consider 'simple' spells.

He's not in actual control when one of his dream memories is triggered, his mouth runs off without him, and in the case of some particularly strong dreams, he might simply slip into acting it out.

When he's not especially 'active' he tends to be unusually lethargic, the type of pony to flop and nap just about anywhere, or get lost in day-dreams while dozing off.

[copied from above, because it applies here as well technically] He doesn't personally know it yet [or might depending on age changes in an RP], but his ability to interact with clouds and weather are born of a sort of half-breed syndrome, putting him between a unicorn and a Pegasus, and is also somewhat responsible for his difficulties with normal magic that calls for steady focus.


Occupation: Well, he fancies himself Ponyville's Resident Story-teller and Dreamseer, though not an 'official' job, he does occasionally wow somepony into giving him a tip for being helpful or especially enetertaining. He occasionally takes up the chance of 'foal sitting' and using some of his more fanciful stories to keep them entertained and out of trouble.


Gear: Standard Bag of holding, often chock full of scrolls and papers, writing utensils, notebooks, things he keeps around so he can jot down notes at a moments notice because he knows he'll probably forget it by the time he gets home. He also keeps a collection of his own smaller enchantment experiments in it, like his patented 'boom-shoes', Putter-ring, or cloud-maker.


History: For the most part Dreamer is just a normal pony born in ponyville, just, a 'normal pony' who happens to have dreams that predict things for ponies. He's known to explore a lot, and thanks to his preference for wandering about at night he tends to be pretty good at sneaking around. For the most part though, nobody really knows what the hell he does at night, since most other ponies are fast asleep when he gets to wandering, but he has shown a habit of staying awake sometimes for 2 or 3 days so he can still be around during the day to help ponies. It is not an advertised fact, but he also 'moon-lights' as a Friend of princess luna... honestly, his specialty involves unique dreaming, It'd be pretty far-fetch'd that she would 'not' notice him.

Otherwise though, he's mostly known as that one weird colt who naps everywhere, predicts weird stuff, and occasionally makes something explode...


Personality: Dreamer is typically quite friendly and open, not shy about opening his mouth either as he tends to spout random things to other ponies when his memory strikes up such as reminding them suddenly where they'll find that missing book or the bits they dropped.

He 'is' a bit odd in that he prefers to be awake at night for various reasons all his own, and can occasionally be seen if any pony actually happens to be up at the right time of night... yet he manages to still be present during the day while finding time to nap here and there or maybe even out-right sleep walking sometimes.


Current Home: He lives alone in a small house on the edge of ponyville, with a basement full of stuff. Though he's there rarely enough it may be more accurate to say that his 'home' is anywhere he can plop his head to sleep for a bit.


Misc: He's an acceptable cook, likes to sing or hum to himself, and tends to have a perpetually sleepy look except at night. He also likes to drink recreationally, and luckily is a nice drunk... his favorite drink is 'moon'shine, hur hur.

Name: Nicole 'Column Hooves' Evermore
Race: Unicorn
Age: 35
Mane: Solid Blonde
Coat: Lime Green
Cutie mark: None
Extra details that aren't needed but are nice to add: Bright Green eyes.
Distinguishing Features:
Specialty (eg. special spells, unique powers etc): Access to minor chaos magic and a small hammerspace pocket.
Weaknesses: Can't push her magical boundaries, as her chaos magic will express itself in unpredictable ways, often inflicting at the very least minor property damage.
Occupation: Hotel Owner
Gear: Nothing
History: Nicole Evermore was born to the unicorn mare, Spell Write, and the Earth Pony Sweep Swift on the day of Discord's reign in Ponyville. Fearing for their foal, as soon as she was born, they fled to the city of Manehattan.
As she grew up, they knew something had happened to their foal that day, but they just couldn't place it. It came to the front when she went to school. It turned out her magic, outside of basic levitation and short range teleportation, never had predictable results. She began hearing a voice, the Nightmare, offering her power, but she turned it down.
This prompted the foals to mock her, repeatedly. She began hearing a voice, the Nightmare, offering her power, but she turned it down. This eventually pushed her over the edge though, causing her to snap. During the event, her eyes changed color to yellow and red, and all the students and the teacher fled the room.
Her parents were called in after she calmed down. When the teachers found out about the circumstances of her birth, she became a Nonperson in the school. Teachers wouldn't call on her, students wouldn't talk to her.
Then, one day, a unicorn stallion calling himself Mr. Lance approached the family. Claiming to be a master of Chaos Magic, he began mentoring Nicole Evermore in controlling and using her magic.
Over the next three years, her abilities and skills grew, until she hit 14. Then she hit some kind of block. She just couldn't make any more progress. Then Mr. Lance took a weeks vacation to Ponyville, leaving her to her own devices. Desperate to improve in anyway, she tries her hardest to pass the block. Her struggles again draw the Nightmare to her. Now the Nightmare promises enough power to make Mr. Lance proud of her. Nicole readily accepts and is given a small fragment of the Nightmare's power.
When she tried to channel the power, it reacted catastrophically with her own Chaos magic and blew up, sending her back through time to long before her birth.
Unable to send herself back, and her link to the Nightmare shattered in the blast, she's since spent the last 20 years catching up to the current point of history again, becoming the owner of a small hotel back in Manehattan, 'Column's Comforts'.
Personality: Motherly and always looking to help.
Current Home: Sleeps in the attic room of her Hotel.
Misc:

There it is... Please let me know if I should change anything minor... I'm kind of attached this backstory and I apologize for it being so... Over the top...

Mx. Thinkamancer wrote:

Name:  Miracle Worker

It's been a very long time since I've had to say this, but while your character's history can be a mystery to all other characters, it can't be a mystery on the sheet. Anyone who reads, especially me, has to know what the character's history is or I can't give a fair evaluation. Please fill this in, because the rest of the character is golden and has no issues.

shadowphil666 wrote:

Name: Dingy
Personality: he very kind when not around ka's gang. very polite and soft spoken except when a fight breaks out. then he get loud to be heard and want to solve things peacefully. cares for his crush deeply though doesn't show it. when meeting others ponies or non ponies he often nods respectfully at them. though he might stare at non ponies cuz he very curious about them but is polite enough not to ask. he doesn't shy away from others but get annoy really quickly once they ask about his eyes. he a very good listener and like to help if there trouble. though he don't reveal where he from. his first loyalty is to ka and his gang after all.

Alrighty then...
1. You need to do a grammatical revision so this is fully readable, although I was able to make enough educated guesses to evaluate it.
2. If he's been in Equestria for any length of time, he should be familiar with it.
3. No, he cannot use any weapon. The most accomplished fighter cannot simply pick up and use any weapon they choose because even among swords, there is no two swords that are perfectly identical.
4. What is "pony kung fu"? "Kung fu" is a general term for a state of mind or a code of living your life, like the samurai bushido code. It isn't a fighting style, movies like The Matrix notwithstanding.
5. Remove this "know attacks that not from equestria" nonsense. If a pony is capable of doing it, the knowledge of how exists in Equestria.
6. Having odd mannerisms isn't a weakness. It gives him no disadvantage and thus doesn't count.
7. What abandoned castle in the Everfree? Are you talking about the one built above the Tree of Harmony, where Twilight and her friends visit often?
8. Your history is about half history and half just random information about your character. Remove the random information and make it a history. Also, expand it to explain where he comes from and how he came to ally with this Ka, and what happened after he got to Equestria.
9. What "gang" are you talking about? A demon has a gang? And the Princess of Friendship living just outside the Everfree hasn't wandered in to drop a mountain on him? This is simply not credible at all.

Basically, Shadowphil, you need to revise your sheet for grammar, revise it to reflect my issues with it, and you have to better formulate how this Ka fits in because there's no way a demon could be hanging around that close to the Elements of Harmony without a beatdown for any length of time. If you need help fixing things, the front page of this group has links to all of the admins on the site, all of whom can help.

SilverKaizer wrote:

Name: Quick Snap Buckly

Approved.

Someonewithapen wrote:

Name: North Star

Approved, for the appropriate settings.

Shoryu wrote:

Name: Cloudy Dreamer

Approved.

Name: #4330715, often abbreviated to Fifteen.

Race: Changeling.

Age: 9, roughly equivalent to early twenties.

Mane: Technically just an extension of his head... crest thing that flops over to one side.

Coatshell: Standard for changelings; dark gray.

Cutie mark.: None.

Distinguishing Features: Apart from his pseudo-mane, nothing really sets him apart from the rest of his kind.

Specialty (eg. special spells, unique powers etc): Being a changeling, he's naturally skilled with disguise magic, and is decent with hypnosis spells. However, apart from that he's fairly limited in his magic; telekinesis and a basic light spell are the only other things he knows how to do. Basically, his most powerful defense is not being found in the first place.

Weaknesses: Like most changelings, #4330715 has a noticeable lack of empathy especially towards ponies; this has bitten him in the flank several times when he's tried to maintain a disguise. Also, as mentioned above he knows basically no offensive or defensive magic, making his horn and fangs his only real way of defending himself.

Occupation: Security guard at some hospital in Manehattan.

Gear: an old Royal Guard jacket (think WWII-era US Army) he got at a flea market; he wears it a lot off duty since Manehattan's frickin' cold. He is aware of the irony in wearing it.

History: #4330715 hatched in Chrysalis' hive, and during the time between reaching maturity at about a year old and the 2012 Canterlot invasion he spent the majority of his time away from the hive pretending to be ponies and doing whatever other stuff changelings do. Just before the invasion, he was sent to infiltrate a Royal Guard base in Manehattan and ensure that they had no indication an invasion was coming. Although he succeeded, the attempted takeover of Equestria didn't; the second he read about the failure he noped out of the base and proceeded to, under another pony's identity, "go legit." As he was still awaiting further orders from his Queen and needed to pay his rent somehow, he applied for about ten different jobs; the only place to respond was a hospital offering a crummy security gig.

He somehow managed to keep his identity secret for around two years, only revealing it on accident in an incident involving another changeling, a box cutter and a mild concussion. With about ten ponies watching. Still, with several hours' worth of explaining coupled with the general low amount of bucks given by Manehattanites, he managed to keep his job.

Personality: Not necessarily friendly, but not quite into "total dick" territory, lying somewhere around "I'll talk to you but only because you ponies are ridiculously social." True to his hive-based origins, he doesn't have much tolerance for inefficiency and always feels like he should be doing at least something. "Relaxing" isn't really in his vocabulary.

Current Home: A tiny studio apartment in Manehattan; a bed is crammed into one corner and the rest of the room is full of... stuff. Crappy drawings, home-built radios, any kind of project that takes more than twenty minutes to complete.

Misc: Fifteen stays fed mostly by posing as various ponies' SO's over the course of about one weekend a month. He once accidentally built a radio transmitter that somehow interfered with the changeling Hivemind, giving him the magical equivalent of tinnitus. Also, he's a terrible cook. Goes with not having to eat.

Nicole Evermore wrote:

Name: Nicole 'Column Hooves' Evermore

Approved! ^_^

4330715 wrote:

Name: #4330715, often abbreviated to Fifteen.

Heh... this amuses me. Combined with the fact that it has no red flags, I'll give it an approve sticker.

Name: Nuva Zula
Race: Zebrasus (Zebra/Pegasus)
Age: 19
Mane: black & white striped mane/tail
Coat: goldenrod with black stripes.
Cutie mark.: a skull with a flower
Extra details that aren't needed but are nice to add: Some sky blue eyes
Distinguishing Features: Definitelly her stripes

Specialty:
The use of some zebra magic taught to her by her mother. Namely, the use of voodoo dolls and the creation of potions. She also has the ability to speak with some departed spirits.

Weaknesses:
Her illusions are only created using potions and they honestly are only good for heat-of-the-moment situations or making a quick getaway. And prolonged usage only makes the illusions worse. She's also prone to giving in to temptation.

Occupation:
Traveling potion maker.

Gear: A small dagger with which to defend herself, a tent to live in, potion and doll making equipment, and a cart to carry it all in when she travels.

History:
Nuva Zula is the result of a teen-fling between her mother, a Zebra, and her father, a Pegasus. Because her father was never around to help raise or support her, she has grown a resentment for him. Whenever the other children's parents came to school, they would have both a mom and dad usually. Nuva was raised by a single mother.

Growing up, she was taught how to defend herself with deception and illusion. She fancies herself a master at the art, even if it's not quite true yet. While she can still perform most basic combat maneuvers, facing off against anyone that could see through her illusions or block her magic would put her in the loosing bracket.

Personality:
Nuva is not your typical zebra pegasus hybrid. She is extremely independent and is mostly only interested in what will benefit her in the long haul. She's not afraid to use her young age and "exotic" appearance to seduce others into doing as she desires.

Current Home:
Wherever the wind takes her.

Misc:

Alpha P wrote:

Name: Nuva Zula

Approved.

Name: Fargo

Race: Griffon

Age: late thirties.

Mane?: Doesn't exactly have one on account of being a bird cat, but his feathers are pure white with light brown tips. His head feathers are short.

Coat: light brown, short hair.

Cutie mark: Griffons don't have those.

Distinguishing features: He's tall, and big even by griffon standards. He's muscular though his fur and feathers don't make it too obvious. His eyes are light grey.

Specialty: He has a preference at hand to hand combat where he can take advantage of his size. He's fairly competent at using spears and other pole arms. He tends to give good advice (or at least thinks he does).

Weaknesses: Fargo's a bit slow when it comes to running or flying, can act too quickly without thinking things through, and can't settle down or relax easily. He gives into pain extremely, and tends to not pace himself, often leaving himself tired before anyone else. He has a hard time taking orders from people younger than him or who he thinks lack experience and really needs someone he can respect in charge of him.

Career: He has a hard time sticking with any employer, and tends to work either as an armed escort, guard, or really anything where he is protecting someone.

Gear: This really depends on whoever he's working for and what they're willing to equip him with, though he will almost always come stock with a helmet, a wooden shield with a metal rim and spear. Regardless though, he prefers heavy armor and polearms and will always have a Green cross painted on his shield.  

History: Fargo grew up in a slum as part of a big family. He was a middle child but his older brother was always gone and his father left them. He ended up being the one who helped take care of the family with his mother. He eventually took up a job doing the one thing that actually payed well that didn't take much preexisting qualifications. He became a soldier at a young age. He thought it would be fine as his country was at peace and he needed the money to help keep his family going. That eventually changed though. Things became less peaceful, and eventually he got sent off to fight for his homeland. He eventually deserted after going through a lot that he doesn't like to talk about. Ever since then he's more or less been off on his own doing freelance work and trying to make enough money to get by, while helping people out as much as he can in the process.

Personality: Fargo is old and a bit jaded, but he tries his best to help people as much as he can. He tries to do what he thinks is best, and can sometimes have problems with authority because of it, and has a hard time committing to things. He can be blunt about things, and isn't one to hide how he feels. He tries to do as little harm as possible whenever possible.

Location: He doesn't really settle down often, so it varies.

Name: Arch Magus

Race: Unicorn Seraph

Age: 3075

Mane: Long, navy blue.

Coat: Light blue.

Cutie mark.: An open book with an electric blue ball of flame above it.

Extra details that aren't needed but are nice to add: He's the second oldest of the currently-living Seraphs.

Distinguishing Features: The massive, jagged scar that can be occasionally seen running across his chest and down his abdomen.

Specialty (eg. special spells, unique powers etc): Raw Magical Power is this stallion's specialty. After being reincarnated as one of the Seraphs, his mana pool and raw magical power multiplied by a massive amount, allowing him to accomplish a great many things through magic, as well as being one of the few Seraphs to attain the rank of Lord, which only the most powerful of Seraphs get such a title, the last one capable of leveling a mountain.

Weaknesses: While magically powerful, Arch's physical prowess is...limited. Though he looks fit, his body is very weak, the stallion most likely capable of being overpowered by a mere child, as well as having quite the glass jaw.

Occupation: N/A

Gear: Long, flowing white robes, with metallic gold trim at the edges. Though the edges are also lightly frayed.

History: Arch was born within Canterlot long ago to a very large military family, and throughout his early years, up until age 25, he was raised and taught to fight and use his magic for offensively, defensively, and for utilitarian purposes. The next decade of his life was devoted to the guard, but after a job went wrong, and the stallion got hurt...Things went bad. By the time the medics got to him, he had lost far too much blood. But the next week, the stallion was reincarnated, with only a jagged scar to mark his death. A Seraph of Honor. He met other Seraphs over time, each time recognizing their unique traits. Several in particular, over the years, became his friends. a Seraph of Justice, one of Mercy, and one of Purity. The four Seraphs came together every few ears to catch up, always with new stories to tell, but after three thousand years, Arch was rather distant from the others of his kin, only the Seraph of Purity is capable of finding him at all times, even if he had spells to hide his prescence. She was always there to make sure his head stayed on straight. Though nowadays, the stallion finds himself hunting down undead, and destroying the ones who pose threats to others.

Personality: Arch is a very kind stallion, and is always very honest to those he considers friends.

Current Home: Canterlot.

Misc: He enjoys tea.

Name: City Lights

Race: Earth Pony

Age: 18

Mane: Long, purple and light blue, with a part.

Coat: White, well maintained.

Cutie mark.: Small purple microphone.

Distinguishing Features: Her violet eyes, and mane, which is very well taken care of. She has a reputation for being a looker.

Specialty (eg. special spells, unique powers etc): She can (somewhat) sing and dance. Not entirely unique, but City Lights has the gift of gab and is usually able to talk her way out of most situations.

Weaknesses: She's got a bit of an ego. She doesn't really like to do rough things, and doesn't like being dirty or sweaty. Due to her slight frame, she isn't really able to hold up to other ponies in physical feats. She has also never received any training with weapons.

Occupation: Formerly a singer/dancer, now looking for any type of work.

History: City Lights was born to upper middle class parents in Manehatten. They always doted on her, and because of this she isn't used to ponies telling her no. City always fancied herself a singer, and when she got her cutie mark, she was sure that was her destiny. She found herself working at a rather seedy bar in Manehatten, and learned how to dance and wait tables as well. Unfortunately, she wasn't as great of a singer as she fancied herself. She wasn't happy with her job (and neither were the customers) so she quit her job and left Manehatten.

Personality: She can come off as very obsessed with herself. City is very prim and proper, but there may be a wild pony lurking way down beneath her well kept exterior. Around new ponies, she can seem a little quiet, but once she knows them, she will open up. She prefers more mare oriented activities, such as spa trips and fashion, to masculine pursuits. As such, she doesn't like to get messy. Music is her real passion in life. She admires the Royal Guards, but would never dream of joining them.

Current Home: On the road.

Misc: Her favorite drink is lemonade, and she loves chocolate!





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Fargo wrote:

Name: Fargo

As Substitute Character Admin, this sheet is approved... Though I must point out the following:

>>He eventually deserted after going through a lot gak he doesn't to talk about,

>>enough money to get buy while helping people

Just some minor grammatical errors in the history that I wanted you to fix for yourself.

BronzeFog wrote:

Name: Arch Magus

Approved.

CityLights wrote:

Name: City Lights

Approved.

Name: Clockwork Owl

Race: Pegasus

Age: 27

Mane: Light Gray, short and combed upwards in the front

Coat: Light Brown

Cutie mark: A gear with mechanical wings on the side of it.

Extra details that aren't needed but are nice to add: His eyes are a silver color.

Distinguishing Features: Most of the time he has a mechanical owl resting on a shoulder pad on his shoulder and a mechanical mouse resting in his mane. He also has goggles over his eyes.

Specialty (eg. special spells, unique powers etc): Though he can’t fight for himself, he can give his owl a command to do so for him and it will do so with ferocity.

Weaknesses: He is not physically strong and is a rather slow flier. He also doesn’t know how to fight at all. He has the tendency to get sidetracked easily.

Occupation: Librarian and Inventor

Gear: A mechanical mouse being powered by a small gem and a mechanical owl with sharp talons and wings also powered by a gem.

History: Clockwork was always a strange colt when he was young. When he was in school he would always sketch in a notebook, always wanting to build things and experiment. His best friend, Scarlet Trails, always told him he was an odd colt, but that she’d help him be odd anyway she could. He was always grateful for her friendship.

When the two became 12, Clockwork found a little injured mouse in his backyard. He ask Scarlet to help him nurse the mouse back to good health so that it could have a chance in living. During that time, he grew attached to the mouse and decided to keep him as a pet, calling him Reginald. His friend told he once more that he was an odd pony when he said he was going to keep the mouse as a pet.

One day, his parents thought it would be a good idea to get him a pet owl as a birthday present. That was not the best idea, however. Almost immediately after it was out of it’s cage, the owl tried to get the mouse and eat it. Clockwork put away his mouse in somewhere safe while he dealt with the owl. The owl was put back in it’s cage and everyone was happy. His family decided to keep the owl, but always put it away from the mouse. They didn’t have any trouble with the owl from then on and Clockwork named him Peter.

Time past and Clockwork got older. His mouse Reginald had already died and Peter also died. He wanted another mouse, but one that could live as long as he did. He went to work on making a small mechanical mouse with some help from his old friend Scarlet. She helped him with the magic portion of the mouse and he made everything else. In a few months time, he made himself another Reginald that could walk and have a bit of emotion thanks to Scarlet.

He then started to want another owl just like Peter. He went through the same process with the same help from his friend and together they made his old pets, only this time Peter didn’t have the urge to kill Reginald much. There still is the occasional times where Peter tries to bite down on the now metal mouse that is Reginald. Clockwork wants to blame that all on Scarlet who seems to have given the mouse and owl the personalities of his old pets.

Personality: He is strange and kooky but he’s all around fun to be around. He can be extremely stubborn at times, but he’s a great and smart pony.

Current Home: Trottingham

Misc: His mouse is named Reginald and his owl is named Peter.

Star Sentinel wrote:

Name: Clockwork Owl

You're an odd fsh. But character approved.

It's been a long while since I made my last edit, so I'll just make a new submission.

Name:Melon Blast
Race:Pegasus
Age:17


Mane:Lime green, mane style is like Fluttershy's and tail style is like Rarity's
Coat:Red
Cutie mark.:Game controller

Extra details that aren't needed but are nice to add:Eyes are blue, they have blue glasses
Distinguishing Features:Their coat/mane & tail colors is reminiscent of a watermelon.

Specialty: Game design and gaming. They have a pendant that looks like a blue flame that allows them to engulf their hooves in flames.
Weaknesses:The flames take 1 second to charge. If the charge is interrupted using an attack, they deal major damage to themselves.
Occupation: Game Designer

Gear:Glasses and the pendant
History: At birth Melon Blast was gifted a special unique pendant from his mother to serve as a charm to protect him throughout his life. It was specially crafted as a celebration to his birth. Melon Blast had a brilliant mind, though his brilliance shown when it involved things like gaming. This showed quite early in his life and he quickly had gotten his cutie mark much faster than most of the other colts and fillies at the time. His protective mother insisted for him to take up martial arts as a hobby, mostly as a means to have him able to protect himself, but Melon Blast gladly took it, mostly as a means to use as reference ideas for his own games, so it was a win-win overall. Melon Blast went to well off schools dedicated towards game making, to which he has gotten a full-ride scholarship for college when he finished his current level of schooling.

Personality:Very happy-go-lucky and carefree. This gets them into trouble. A lot.
Current Home:Manehattan


Credit to Heartstring for helping me fix it.

Name: Cherry Fizz

Race: Pegasus pony

Age: 32

Mane: Forest Green, styled halfway between Pinkie's and Berry Punch's. Think soda.

Coat: Rosy red.

Cutie mark.: Black cherries.

Extra details that aren't needed but are nice to add: Tends to use familiar terms, such as "hon" or "darling", with almost anyone (when she's in a good mood anyway).

Distinguishing Features: Speech pattern, slightly pudgy build, small wings (this is an injury, not from birth. She can fly, as they are healing well, but not easily).

Specialty (eg. special spells, unique powers etc): Candy-making, sales, communicating with changelings.

Weaknesses: Her weakness varies depending on the relationship. If she sees the person as a friend or someone she can rely on, she trusts them completely. Otherwise, she hides her motives, and may devolve into hostility.

Occupation: Makes candies for her small business. Oddly, is not as good at math as one might expect. She is also often called on by the government when the changeling population starts acting out, which, fortunately for her family, is very rare.

Gear: Carries a book of recipes, a greatsword from her fighting days, and a locket with two pictures: one of her husband and children, the other her older sister and brother-in-law.

History: Heads up, this is an AU.
Eight years ago, she crossed paths with a refugee changeling named Silver Lining. He was too battered to attack her, so she took him in until he could survive on his own. This was extremely bad planning on her part, not only for the danger simply of his presence, but also his circumstance. An hour later, she had managed to sneak it into her house, only to be attacked by the Queen (remotely, of course). They both survived, but her wings and a large portion of her home had been burned. She arrived at the hospital with her memory of the incident wiped from her mind.
She spent the next few weeks piecing together what had happened with the help of her sister, Lemon Drop. She discovered that Silver had been put in prison, and tried to get him to tell her about the incident. He wasn't sure about whether or not this was a good idea, as he knew she would likely get involved with the affairs of the Hive. Of course, that only made her more curious, and decided a deal would be better than nothing. With more than a little protest from the changeling, she dug through every book she could find on changelings. Unfortunately, there was only one, and that was only theoretical. Even worse, she drew the attention of the Mantis Uprising.
The Mantis Uprising was an organization dedicated to overthrowing the current changeling Queen, Obsidian. They had discovered that she had been killing off Worker drones by the masses, which was why Silver had to run. He had been moments away from his execution. Obsidian had also banished Chrysalis when she found out the former Queen had survived the Canterlot invasion, and covered it up ever since.
The two of them were pulled into the organization under the orders of Mirage, one of the other escapees and the leader of the Uprising. She trained them to fight on the front lines, informing Silver's importance to the Queen: some of the worker drones were "mutts", gifted with powers native to other lands and species. Silver was a Mirror, able to reflect his appearance, transformed or not, on another person and control them. Obsidian's job was to weed them out, but instead of just killing them, she was performing experiments to replicate their powers, picking only the most resilient by putting them through termination spells. At this point, Mirage refused to let them leave. Obsidian was defeated, but Mirage took over in her place.
Unable to bring her down, Cherry had no choice but to go to Celestia, who opened Equestria's gates to the changelings (highly supervised, of course) until she backed down. Mirage and her followers tried to attack Canterlot again, this time with the entire willing population. Cherry and Silver fought on the front lines again, but this time on Equestria's side. The war didn't last long, as most changelings were happy to defect as long as they had food.
Years later, Cherry's candy business moved to the capital city, which had begun the central hub of this era of peace. Changelings were accepted, begrudgedly at first but more so as time passed. She eventually married Silver, and they currently have a daughter, Sparkling Cider.

Personality: Quirky, intuitive, and very proud of herself. Not necessarily book smart, but still fairly intelligent. Gets hurt easily when someone she trusts proves unworthy of said trust, although often bitter if she doesn't. DO NOT intentionally get on her bad side, because she will be vicious if provoked.

Current Home: A suburb of Canterlot.

Misc: Can be played as optimistic or more tolerant of those in her bad side. Can also be played in her fighting years.

Name: Alpha Protocol
Race: Pegasus
Age: 32
Mane: Dark red with a yellow stripe.
Coat: Crimson
Cutie mark.: A single page of paper with all of the words seemingly blacked out.
Extra details that aren't needed but are nice to add:
Distinguishing Features: He has multiple scars and some piercings on his left ear and wings.

Specialty (eg. special spells, unique powers etc):
Alpha is savy with the spy business. He knows how to find information the right way and what hooves or claws to keep it out of. He also knows a bit about creating gadgets such as small scale explosives.

Weaknesses:
Because of his scars, and piercings, he is easily recognizable to anyone who has seen him before, which would render a disguise useless.

Occupation: Freelance Agent

Gear:
Carries a short blade for when situations get violent, and an even smaller spare in case he looses it.

History:
If there are only two things true about Alpha, it's that he gets into what he's not supposed to, and he likes the ladies. Oh yeah~.

Since he was a young colt, Alpha enjoyed getting into trouble and being places he didn't belong. He would eavesdrop on conversations all the time. He was brought home by the Guard on numerous occasions. After school, he joined the military for a short while in the intelligence division.

Somepony somewhere soon realized that this was the wrong place for him to be if they wanted to keep any "secrets". He was captured, interrogated as a spy, but then hired as one instead. Alpha worked the next few years as a government funded agent which took him all around the continent.

He soon quit working for the government, but I'm sure you know what happens to Spies who try to quit. He was hunted down for a long time and almost killed in the Office Bombing of Staliongrad.(Read about it in the paper) Barely escaping with his life, he went underground for the next two years. Keeping himself out of harm's way as much as possible until he eventually found and killed the ones that tried to kill him.

Personality:
Alpha really likes to get where he doesn't belong and snoop around in other's business. He also enjoys promiscuous relations with classy ladies, as well as the occasional interrogation.
Current Home: Manehatten

Misc:

Melon Blast wrote:

Name:Melon Blast

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