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Twentypando96 wrote:
This is my oc named Infinity
Age: 18 (pony years)
Gender: Male/Stallion
Species: Unicorn
Abilities: Can perform any type of spell and any kind of magic without fail.
Cutie mark: an infinity sign that changes from black to purple.
Likes: Loves to best other ponies in magic duels and competitions, music, loves to sing, loves to build things and creating stuff, drawing.
Fav song: Tonight Tonight, Hot chelle Ray
Dating: Chibi. (My other OC)
Info: He is very tallented when it comes to creating and building things. He also has a disability called aspergers and has a very high temper. He also has a curse layed upon him called the End Curse, which allows him to turn into a beast called the Chaos Dragon (End Dragon for short) if he stays angry for more than 5-10 minutes. The only way to cure him is a song sung by someone he loves the most (meaning Chibi and his sister Thunderspark).
Quote: Keep cool and never back down.
Sibling: Thunderspark (younger sister)

OP here. I'm not the character admin, that's Dualthrone, but I'm here to tell you that this sheet is not the one we use (which is on the first page of this thread in easily copyable form) and as such it is missing vital pieces of info. Please fix this.
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Twentypando96 wrote:
This is my oc named Infinity

This is DualThrones, the character admin. The admin ObsidianPony is correct here.
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Name: Azrael Azazel

Race: Earth Pony
Age: 34
Mane: Dark grey
Coat: White
Cutie mark.: A caduceus with a bladed rod.
Extra details that aren't needed but are nice to add:
Distinguishing Features: Azrael's body is "decorated" with several brandings (yes, the kind you make with a branding iron), the largest and most prominent ones being on his forehead, the back of his neck, his lower forelegs, and on the fetlocks of his rear legs. The brands on his limbs all face outwards, and are thus hard to conceal without some form of attire (not that he'd want to hide their glory).
Specialty (eg. special spells, unique powers etc): Azrael was and somewhat remains a thespian by trade, though his connections within the industry proper may feel the need to distance themselves from what he is now. Still, everything he does is as much as show as that of the greatest of actors strutting and fretting upon the stage, and he has become quite skilled at keeping around a flair for the dramatic.
Thanks to the not-so-innocent reasoning behind his brandings, Azrael can do a single, specialized kind of magic despite his earth pony heritage: conjuration. This spellcasting is limited strictly to non-magical, obvious trinkets, and the set of artifact weapons in the Gear section of this biography.
He has a good memory, and a working knowledge of dark magic, occult rituals, and arcane artifacts from his time spent gaining his current powers, as well as a decent knowledge of how to act and speak publicly (adding in snippets from famous plays doesn’t count as cheating, right?).

Weaknesses: Azrael is incredibly unstable, mentally and emotionally, and anyone who's actually trying could probably manipulate him into doing whatever they wanted, so long as they could convince him that they're not evil (aka, that you're on his side). Moreover, his obsession with the theatrics of everything can be used against him: an offer to do something like monologue, or a challenge to his style would be just two ways to distract him from what his focus ought to be, despite his normal acclimation to such things. Definitively breaking his narrative can very much leave him lost and confused as to what was going on, though doing it twice in the same way would likely be a bit of a challenge.
He’s crazy, and he doesn’t really understand other ponies too well, and is likely to make assumptions and not anticipate things like loyalty, or kindness, or sheer determination from anyone who isn’t himself.

Occupation: Thespian/Holy Vindicator of the Great Inquisition/Murderous psychopath

Gear: As stated in Specialties, Azrael's ability to conjure items is limited. All of his conjurations are active magical effects, and while difficult to dispel, can be dealt with by proper antimagic or anything similar. Additionally, while any piece of equipment is summoned, a specific set of his brandings will glow with a bright, red-orange hue. Through the weapon progression, each Wing is specifically associated with one of his brands, but all the brands that came before it also glow. In addition to the weapons below, Azrael has been shown the able to summon a full-body cloak; a broom and a mop, both literally covered in wing decals; a shield; a plate, bowl, and utensils of decent but not great quality; a full, frilly maid’s outfit with little fake wings sticking out the sides to go along with the mop and broom; and the most amazing toothbrush in the world, soft as a feather while stiff enough to do its job, and do it good. Many other objects are likely possible, though his extraneous conjuring is fickle and seems to be prone to pranking him (i.e., the maid’s outfit. As a final note: any items besides the first 4 Wings are summonable only at GM discretion, even the things I just listed here, which are just examples anyway).
The Seven Wings:
 


History: Azrael has lived a long and rather unfulfilling life. As a late, late-bloomer in regards to his cutie mark, he spent much of his young life being mocked for his lack of a cutie mark, until he started wearing clothes constantly to hide the lack of one. While he always had a fascination with reading, his willingness to meticulously study and memorize large works made him an ideal performer at a young age, and when he eventually graduated from school, still with no cutie mark, he found himself drawn to the dramatic arts.
Of course, that sort of happy life was just too good to be true. Years into his profession, long having given up hiding his lack of talent, Azrael woke up one night with his cutie mark stamped on his flank, he suddenly felt like he knew what he really wanted in life. That his cutie mark was telling him exactly what he needed to do and how to do it.
And so he did it.
He read books. He learned everything he could about power, and strength, and darkness. He took power from those who had it, grabbed the universe by the reins and made it his whorse, and began his own personal inquisition against the darkness in the hearts of all ponies. Not with words, as is the traditional method of dealing with such demons, but with the sharp edge of a blade.

Personality: Azrael is an abnormality in psyche, afflicted with a deep psychosis. He is utterly delusional, and has convinced himself that he is some sort of holy warrior, sent down to mete out the ultimate punishment to wrongdoers. Ostensibly due to the number of times this illusion has been shadowed, he's built thick walls around his personality to protect himself, inducing a form of dissociative personality disorder on himself.
The persona that is most outward, essentially his 'default' state, is unaware of the other personalities, and is referred to by them as "Cherubim". In this state, he acts relatively normal overall, and does not overtly display signs of his delusions. He's extraverted and incredibly grandiose about everything (which does wonders to hide the fact that he's completely off his rocker. When the guy who's always exaggerating things says something crazy, he's just being metaphorical.)
Second on the list and existing largely to protect himself from the darkness of his own actions is one called "Archas" by its brethren. This persona is a self-serving, self-absorbed sociopath, and while not entirely insane, the only "people" he cares about are the other personalities in his head. He is the part of Azrael that accepts that he's a hypocrite and a monster, and when the others are faced with undeniable proof of this fact, he rears his head to keep them safe. Typically, when he's coming out, Azrael's already been backed into a corner, and all should know what happens when one backs a rat into a corner: he bites.
Third amongst them and the last "full" personality is the Archangel, "Cimeies". Callous and uncaring as to the lives of others, Cimeies is driven by one thing and one thing alone: righteousness. He sees evil everywhere in the world, and the only method to solve it, as he sees it, is to utterly destroy it. It is to this persona that Azrael falls when faced with such evil, or when on his great crusade against it. He cannot grasp how his actions could possibly be construed as evil themselves. After all, good ponies would never kill good ponies, and since he's a good pony, the only ponies he kills must be evil.

A deeper look into Azrael's personalities, and what binds them together, would reveal a prevailing force among the three of them. Although all of them refer to it as "Me", or otherwise in the first person, there are clearly some thought processes that are directly shared between all three of them, remaining constant and cognizant of every experience each personality has faced. It's not clear what exactly this thing is, but it certainly isn't normal for someone with dissociative identity disorder to have this sort of thing in their head. This voice in his head seems to be the source of most of Azrael's insane thoughts, and is certainly where his sadistic tendencies come from.

Current Home: Vagrant. Psychotic mass-murderers don't have time for permanent housing.
Misc: Just a hint for people wondering about those nasty personalities in his head, just say it out loud with me: “Me first, please.”

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Name: Azrael

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Name: Inanus "Bell" Bellitudo

Race: Earth Pony

Age:25

Mane: Long, pale grey.

Coat: Pale, bone-white

Cutie mark.: A very intricate eye-shaped-and-etched piece of onyx, with amethyst at the iris.

Extra details that aren’t needed but are nice to add: Extremely dark purple eyes, but both pupils and irises are paled slightly.

Distinguishing Features: She always walks slowly and carefully.

Specialty (eg. special spells, unique powers etc): She is the daughter of a noble family, so she has a lot of money. Her ears are very sharp, a little better than the average Thestral's.

Weaknesses: She's blind. And rather small for her age.

Occupation: N/A

Gear: A dark grey and black scarf. and an Amulet styled after her cutiemark that has an enchantment to let her predict when something is about to bump into her, or when she is about to run into anything.

History: Bell was born and raised in Canterlot, but lived a quite sheltered life, because of her blindness, and only started to have friends in her teen years, but most were the sons of other nobles trying to get a match for money, and her parents cut off connections to those nobles, letting Bell only have friends with non-nobles, because those friends would not immediately recognize who she was, and more specifically, how rich she was. Around age twenty two, she started getting into volunteer work, mostly donating because she wasn't too much help, being blind. Nowadays she can be found at different cafes, chatting with the employees easily and humming to herself, not having much else to do or any friends who aren't always busy.

Personality: Kind, caring, and never judges anyone. Very friendly.

Current Home: Canterlot.

Misc: Never goes anywhere without her scarf or amulet.
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Name: Little Red

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Name: Inanus "Bell" Bellitudo

I sad at this character, at least a little.
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Name: Adamant Aegis

Race: Unicorn

Age: 23

Mane: Long, braided, dark grey and electric blue.

Coat: White.

Cutie mark.: A sword broken in half next to a golden castle tower.

Extra details that aren’t needed but are nice to add: Likes to test herself.

Distinguishing Features: Her nearly unmatched skill with defensive magics.

Specialty (eg. special spells, unique powers etc): Barriers, conjured wall, shields, armor. Anything defensive, she's a natural and has skill with it. Her barriers and conjured shields, however, can only block Magical or Physical, one at once, unless she wants to waste a crap ton of mana, and do both. She's still experimenting on ways to use her magic, too.

Weaknesses: Though her defensive magic is very powerful, it comes at a price, symbolized by her cutiemark. Her offensive magic is near the strength of a foal's, and useless unless staring a small fire for camp.

Occupation: Royal Guard.

Gear: A set of Royal Guard Armor. A kite shield.

History: Adamant Aegis was born to a militaristic family in Canterlot, and immediately trained from the age of eight to become a soldier. Her father even kept piling sandbags onto her barriers each week of training, once a week, until she gave out and was buried, letting her dig her own way out and restack the sandbags nearby, neatly. Eventually she was able to handle the strain of thirty sandbags on her barriers without to much strain. Her life until age twenty was dull, lonely, and quite boring until she entered the guard and trained even more, making a few friends and felt the training was nothing because of her early-in-life headstart. Three years later, she's still a guard, and happy with life, content on being able to kick ass and take names, the bane of most barfights.

Personality: Friendly, loyal, caring, and helpful. But if you're maliciously mean to someone, and she sees it. She's cold and easily annoyed by that pony.

Current Home: Canterlot.

Misc: Allergic to chocolate.
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Cynthia Clause
Name: Cynthia Clause

Race: Earth pony

Age: 23

Alignment: Good

Mane: Long, flowing, silver

Coat: Dark red

Cutie mark.: A bundle of paper, a pen laying across it.

Distinguishing Features: Cynthia is a relatively beautiful mare, all long legs and gentle curves.

Specialty (eg. special spells, unique powers etc): Cynthia is an administrative genius, able to organise just about anything. In particular, she is able to shut down plots to manipulate the throne for profit or personal gain. Many an ambitious noble has had their plans foiled before they even had a chance to start. Further, while she might not be the greatest in combat, she does know her way around a knife.

Weaknesses: Ultimately, Cynthia is just a normal pony. She has no special resistance, and can be struck down just a easily as any other pony. She is also an introvert to some degree, and prefers the company of one to many.

Occupation: Cynthia is currently employed as Celestia's personal secretary, and has been for many years.

Gear: Cynthia carries very little gear persay, not intending anything combat related. She does carry a small knife, but for the most part she sticks with business suits.

History: Cynthia doesn't know her birth parents, having been left in a box with the words 'illegitimate spawn' scrawled across the side. There, she was rescued by an old stallion on his way home. There, she was raised by Sharp Wit, a proficient lawyer with a kind heart. Sharp taught her justice, the law and how to work the courts as she grew up, and it was he who named her Cynthia Clause, after his late wife and the daughter he'd always wanted but never had.

Cynthia loved her father, and upon his retirement, she looked for several jobs. Her father used his connections and friendship with Celestia to gain Cynthia a position as her secretary, though he would never let her know. Cynthia took to the job like a duck to water, and has enjoyed working for the princess ever since.

Personality: Cynthia is a kind-hearted mare, and she is also quietly-intelligent. She also has a strong sense of justice, but does not act on it as much as she would like to.

Current Home: As befitting her position, Cynthia has a small room in one of the lesser of the wings of the Royal Palace.
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Name: Adamant Aegis

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Name: Cynthia Clause

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Name: Myna Ethos Kings, aliases Professor Raven Quill and Nurse Starling

Race: Changeling

Age: Late twenties

Mane: Changeling frill

Coat: Chitin

Cutie mark.: None

Extra details that aren’t needed but are nice to add:

Distinguishing Features: Damage to horn, crack along chitin on face and neck

Specialty (eg. special spells, unique powers etc): Myna is skilled in many types of medicine, from minor injuries to emergency procedures to invasive surgeries.  She has an excellent memory, allowing her to recall and mimic appearances and voices near-perfectly.  She is as excellent an actor as any changeling, and specializes in playing doctors.

Weaknesses:  Severe damage to her horn has weakened her magic, limiting her to telekinesis, basic energy spells, minor healing and transformation.  Myna has very little in terms of physical abilities, and is quick to panic when in personal danger.  Especially around dragons and other lizards.  She also has a horrible work ethic, and tends to be easily sidetracked.

Occupation: Former laboratory grunt, travels as a medic and part-time confidence mare

Gear: Medicine, fake medicines, and a set of saddlebags which she keeps supplies and bits in.

History: Myna Ethos Kings is one of Crow Ethos Kings' adopted changelings, who chose them to work in the lab while he was away.  Myna was excellent at medicine and calming test subjects, but her laziness made it difficult to do good work in the lab, and often created dangerous situations.  The final tipping point was when she didn't bother to read the notes on how to deal with one subject, a large reptile, and she looked it in the eye.  The creature was enraged, and attacked, damaging Myna's horn and face.  She was kicked out of the lab as soon as she recovered, and left to fend for herself in the urban jungles of Manehattan.

Myna adopted a few aliases over time, using them for different situations.  Eventually, they were filtered down to two: Professor Raven Quill, a confidence mare who sold snake oils, and Nurse Starling, a volunteer at a local hospital.  Eventually, the Professor's patients caught up to her, so Starling resigned from the hospital, Myna packed her bags, and she went off for more opportunities to stave off boredom and make a few bits.

Personality:  Myna is passive in most situations, usually looking for some way to profit out of a situation.  Her ideas of "profit" are emotions to feed off of, bits, or just a bit of fun.  She tends to jump into things, and focuses on a single goal at a time.  She tends to hide behind characters, using whichever one she can get along with ponies the best with.

Current Home:  Base of operations in Manehattan, but she lives mostly on the road.

Misc:  Myna has two main disguises she uses:

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Name: Professor Raven Quill

Race: Pegasus

Age: Mid-thirties

Mane: Silver, kept medium length and combed back

Coat: Dark blue

Cutie mark: A small herb pouch

Extra details that aren’t needed but are nice to add:

Distinguishing Features: Usually wears a black two-piece suit

Specialty (eg. special spells, unique powers etc): Appearing trustworthy and friendly, making medicines

Weaknesses: Panics when called out.  Medicines often have side effects.

Occupation: Confidence mare, specializing in fake medicines

Personality: Professor Quill is played as knowledgeable about all forms of medicine, and able to prescribe any necessary "treatment".  She remains upbeat at nearly all times, excepting when she is helping a patient, where she puts on a more confident, knowing character.

Misc: Used as Myna's default form during ordinary social interaction and potential business ventures.

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Name: Nurse Starling

Race: Unicorn

Age: Late forties

Mane: Red, kept very short and spiked up

Coat: Light blue

Cutie mark.: A small bird with a bandaged wing

Extra details that aren’t needed but are nice to add:

Distinguishing Features: Noticeably overweight, wears a nurse cap

Specialty (eg. special spells, unique powers etc): Healing fresh injuries, keeping ponies calm while treating said injuries

Weaknesses: Physical ability

Occupation: Nurse

Personality: Starling is played as swaying between stern and no-nonsense, and kind and matronly, depending on which helps more.  She is extremely annoyed when things go wrong, or in an unexpected way.

Misc: Used by Myna during times when there are going to be a lot of injuries, but also for social interaction if she thinks it would be more fun that Quill.  Claims to have a talent for veterinary medicine, but ponies "are close enough."


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Name: Midnight Rose.

Race: Thestral

Age: 25

Mane: An icy-blue (Greyish blue). It is average length at the front, often shifted to the left. At the back, it goes down to the middle of her neck. Midnight’s tail is the same colour, and average length.

Coat: Midnight’s coat is a very dark blue. At night time, this colour allows her to blend into the night well.

Cutie mark: Midnight’s Cutie Mark is a silver dagger (not including the handle) with blood on the tip of the blade.

Extra details that aren’t needed but are nice to add: Bat-like wings. Cat-like eyes. Ears are fluffy, and look pointy (similar to bats). Inside her mouth, she has 2 sharpened teeth, or ‘fangs’ as they are commonly referred to.

Distinguishing Features: Midnight is small for her age, many see her as still in her late teens or early 20’s instead of 25.

Specialty (eg. special spells, unique powers etc.): Midnight is an extremely good assassin, capable of finding, stalking, and killing her targets without them noticing her. She is extremely stealthy by nature. She is also quick and agile, having training herself constantly and being small for her age. Ability to see at night, higher than average hearing ability.

Weaknesses: Can be ‘disabled’ by high-pitch noises due to her sensitive hearing. Her eyes can get irritated if they are exposed to the sun for long periods of time. She is fragile and a single heavy hit can take her out of a fight, but not seriously hurt her. She is absolutely terrified at the prospect of losing her wings, and is willingly to do almost anything in order to keep them if they are threatened.

Occupation: Midnight is currently a member of the Lunar Guard in Canterlot. She also works as a part time bounty hunter in a local tavern when she is off duty.

Gear: While on duty, Midnight wears her full Lunar Guard armour. When she is off duty, Midnight wears a dark cloak, as well as customised light armour that is painted grey. She is armed with a small, arm-wielded crossbow. She also is armed with daggers and smoke grenades.

History: Midnight was born before Nightmare Moon’s return, and was seemingly normal in all aspects. Her family was well respected in their community of Manehatten, and everything seemed good for the young mare. At least, until she found her love for adventure. Often going into backstreets and districts with bad reputations, Midnight found the darker side of life fascinating, and disregarded her parent’s warnings about it. It was only months later, Midnight had found a small crew that she tagged along with continually, committing small level crimes such as theft and breaking and entering. This continued until they encountered a rival group. A fight broke out, and in the aftermath, Midnight and only 2 others from her crew had survived, and taken by the rival gang. Midnight vanished to Manehatten for an entire year; her parents filed a missing ponies report. She was found a year later, bruised and with broken bones, coated in blood with a dagger in her hoof. She’d killed her way out of the rival gang’s hideout. She re-entered school and passed with average marks. It was around this time when Nightmare Moon returned, and became Princess Luna.
Weeks later, Midnight was working as a bounty hunter, taking out any target she could to make money, making a name for herself in the criminal underground while keeping allusive from the guards. This continued for a few years, until she was set up and escaped with her life. After that, she realized that she needed to find a less dangerous line of work that allowed her to do as she pleased. Naturally, she applied for the Lunar Guard. After surviving basic training, Midnight continued her bounty hunting career, using her authority to gain addition power while hunting down her targets.

Personality: Midnight is reckless and deceitful; she’ll often lie in order to get what she wants. She doesn’t have trust issues, and if she finds if some pony gets along with, she’ll stick by them. Often times she’ll manipulate others before ditching them entirely if they don’t make an impact on her, because she wants to be with ponies that’ll get along with what she enjoys. Social awkward, the filter between her mouth and brain isn’t the strongest sometimes when she is angry. Her biggest fear is losing those she cares about, since she doesn’t make many friends due to her reckless lifestyle. She is used to being alone, doesn’t mean she likes it all the time.

Current Home: Midnight currently lives in Canterlot in a local tavern. She occasionally stays in the Guard Barracks, but that’s only occasionally.

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Pseudologia Fantastica wrote:
Name: Myna Ethos Kings, aliases Professor Raven Quill and Nurse Starling

I've got a curiosity, one that will in no way impact approval: if she's adept at medicine, why would she risk playing a fake? It seems like that's bizarrely risky when you can offer real medicine and not have to worry about victims coming back to string you up.

Anyway, this character is approved. I initially reached for my machete when I thought you were putting three characters into a single sheet but the other two "characters" are mere disguises so it's OK.
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Name: Midnight Rose.

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Name: Indicus

Age: 50 looks 35 (he aged slower than normal after twenty due to the strength and nature of his magic)

Gender: Male

Species: Thestral

Appearance: Wears a hooded steel and leather armor with a cowl to cover the face.

Fur: dark grey-black

Mane/Tail: dark grey

Eyes:Brown

pointed horn and possess fangs

Cutie Mark: A dark Dagger through a Minotaur's skull

Personality: Reserved,strait forward

Backstory: Born in the small town of West Clairson, apart of the country Thalemn. Indicus never knew his father or mother but instead was later adopted at the age of three by a Griffin and pony that lived there. He was given the name Indicus, a Griffin name by his adopted parents.

Through his childhood he was quiet and obsrved everythig around him, thus making only a few friends. He even accedently snuck up on his friends multiple times earning him the nickname Shadow Dancer. During that time he also learned how to use his magic. Later bcoming the Aprentice of a old unicorn that took notice of Indicus and taught him how to control and use shadow magic.

He was eighteen, when he left his home to sign up for the Thalemn special forces more specifically the Marines. At Nineteen he completed all his training and was officially part of the Marines. He received his Skill Mark (AKA cutie mark) during his second deployment, a stealth operation and his first kill from stealth.

At the age of thirty, he retired from the Marines, and returned home, hoping to relax after twelve years of seirvice during which he was a commander and lost some good friends. Now away from the conflicts and drawing his pention.

At thirty-two, Equestria got its Lunar princess back, and she was looking to recruit for her branch of the military. He recived a letter saying that she received his dossier and was inviting him to be a squad leader. He refused for many years.

Age thirty-five, his parents were robbed and killed. They were given a funeral the next day. A year later he joined the Lunar Special forces to help him forget.

Age thirty-nine he resigns from the Lunar special forces after losing even more of those in his squad. A month later he gets recruited into the Assassins guild, having nothing to live for he accepts.

Age forty-five he achieved the rank of Master Assassin.

two months later he splits from the guild and takes contacts himself as a lone Assassin.

Other: Dislikes race based terms and obvious puns like anypony, viewing them as stupid and narrow minded

Most used weapons: Hidden blades on his wrists and one foot long collapsing blade.

Also possesses (Dose not use too often) a powerful wooden recursive bow capable of penetrating both layers of griffin and Minotaur plate and chain mail and going deep enough to kill or severely wound partially due to enchantments that amplify force for two hundred uses before a recharge is needed.[/b]
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Name:K'likikk- Clan Name, Pyrus Frost-Pony Name
Race:Thestral
Age:Colt approximately 8
Mane:Dark brown, front is similar to Derpy, back to Scootaloo
Coat:Grey
Cutie mark.:None
Distinguishing Features:Ice blue eyes
Specialty (eg. special spells, unique powers etc):N/A
Weaknesses:Absolutely loves Pears to the point of distraction
Occupation:Hopes to become Lunar Guard
Gear:N/A
History:K'lik was born to a Unicorn mother and thestral father. His father is currently a Lunar Guard member, though not one of high rank. He spends most of his life in the caves beneath the Castle of the Royal Sisters, where his clan has been homed since Luna's banishment. Since her return, however, his mother sometimes takes him to the nearby town of Ponyville.
He grew up practically worshiping Princess Luna, and spends his time pretending to be one of the Lunar Guard.
Personality:Wears his emotions on his sleeve, so to speak. Loves playing and having a good time. Hates doing chores, and loathes bath time.
Current Home:Caves/Ponyville
Misc:

Edit: Added numerical age.


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Indicus wrote:
Name: Indicus
Backstory: Born in the small town of West Clairson, apart of the country Thalemn. Indicus never knew his father or mother but instead was later adopted at the age of three by a Griffin and pony that lived there. He was given the name Indicus, a Griffin name by his adopted parents.

Where IS this West Clairson, and what is Thalemn? I applaud creativity but your imagined city and country don't even follow the pun-oriented naming scheme of the MLPFIM universe. So I need better information here.

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He was eighteen, when he left his home to sign up for the Thalemn special forces more specifically the Marines. At Nineteen he completed all his training and was officially part of the Marines. He received his Skill Mark (AKA cutie mark) during his second deployment, a stealth operation and his first kill from stealth.

OK, I applaud creativity but you're talking about your thestral being part of a highly specialized branch of a navy. Moreover, the Marines are not regarded as special forces; the special forces of the American Marines are the Recon Marines and of the navy the Marines are attached to, the S.E.A.Ls. Even more generally, marines are a specialized branch but not special forces. You need to revise this.

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At thirty-two, Equestria got its Lunar princess back, and she was looking to recruit for her branch of the military. He recived a letter saying that she received his dossier and was inviting him to be a squad leader. He refused for many years.

So Luna was recruited retired soldiers from another nation for her forces? o.O

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Other: Dislikes race based terms and obvious puns like anypony, viewing them as stupid and narrow minded

OK, so he objects to a very current and common term in canon Equestria. This is... odd.


OK, before I approve this, I need a helluva lot more detail about this character. Answering my questions and concerns would be a large help.
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Thak wrote:
Name:K'likikk- Clan Name, Pyrus Frost-Pony Name
Age: Colt

I require a numerical age from you.

Other that that.. this is the most bare-bones character I've ever approved. And yet there's nothing wrong with it that prevents approval apart from a lack of a numerical age. Fill that in, and this character is approved.
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Name: Astral Eclipse
Race: Harbingers
Age: 34 years but in reality she is about 104 years
Mane: Black stone that covers from the top of her head to the lower back of her body. Green lines of astral energy dance along her mane but a line of black stone ridges starts at the top of her head and slowly follows down to her back.
Coat: The top half of her body is covered in the black stone with green lines of astral energy weaving its way across her stone like flesh. The other half of her body is more normal; soft brown fur make up the rest of her form with a lighter brown, closer to tan, on her chest.
Cutie mark.: A single blue star that has both a red ring and a blue ring around the star. Sparkles come off of the star while lines of energy from the bottom point to the star.
Extra details that aren’t needed but are nice to add:
Distinguishing Features:Her face isn't much like a pony's face anymore as it has been covered up by the black stone to the point that instead of teeth there are sharp fangs outside of her face to make up for the teeth she no longer has. Her mouth is filled with astral energy so whenever she opens her mouth it glows  green lightly. Instead of eyes there are two sockets that glow green with astral energy. The dark stone is no stronger then chain-mail and only covers one half of her body. Two serrated wings stick out of her sides and helps her fly.    
Specialty (eg. special spells, unique powers etc): Having powers over the astral dimension but very limited because of their relations with the magic. Needing a focus point for this every spell they try to cast they need either a staff or wand. Being able to cast four spells but some are somewhat powerful if used in the correct respect. The first spell is arcane orbs, powerful bolts of energy that cause damage to a target by inflicting energy on them. The second spell is an imprisonment spell that does much the same but traps the victim in a place far away from any dimension. The third spell is to create a sanity crystal. The sanity crystal is a astral energy tool for any harbinger to enhance their power to make each spell to do more damage or learn a spell from an enemy but they can only have one. The fourth spell is to sacrifice the crystal to release the energy in a cataclysmic reaction. The power is then magnifier by how intelligent they are but they will be caught in a powerful hit that would be signaler to being hit my a sun but the force is not there as she causes the sun to rain down on them. More like it would be like standing next to a sun    
Weaknesses: Without the staff she can't use any of the magic she has but she can still provide astral energy to any amount of actions she does. Her legs and her lower body are always unprotected by the black stone.
Occupation: She is mostly an astrologist but she will defend the knowledge she knows at all costs.
Gear: Her only gear is the staff she carries.
History: Being part of a race that had been watching over a deep rift in the world they slowly began to spend their time learning about the world about them but Astral Eclipse was different then the rest of her brothers and sisters. The high priests decided that she would be made into a powerful guard that would watch over the rift for all the time she would live but she began to work she was slowly being changed by the rift.
As she was being changed by the rift she began to show powers that were unlike the others that were growing up. Once that she began to gain those powers from the darkness that was below her. One time that she went down into the rift she found a staff that would be hers. The staff wasn't that good for her sanity but she grew to like her powers.
over time she began to move away from her world towards Equstria where she began to work on the world that she had come upon.  
Personality: She is very cold but she is willing to get along if this situation helps her in any way.
Current Home: Canterlot castle
Misc: SHe works closely in the library to gain all the intelligence she can.
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Two Sides of the Coin wrote:
Name: Astral Eclipse
Specialty (eg. special spells, unique powers etc): Having powers over the astral dimension but very limited because of their relations with the magic. Needing a focus point for this every spell they try to cast they need either a staff or wand. Being able to cast four spells but some are somewhat powerful if used in the correct respect. The first spell is arcane orbs, powerful bolts of energy that cause damage to a target by inflicting energy on them. The second spell is an imprisonment spell that does much the same but traps the victim in a place far away from any dimension. The third spell is to create a sanity crystal. The sanity crystal is a astral energy tool for any harbinger to enhance their power to make each spell to do more damage or learn a spell from an enemy but they can only have one. The fourth spell is to sacrifice the crystal to release the energy in a cataclysmic reaction. The power is then magnifier by how intelligent they are but they will be caught in a powerful hit that would be signaler to being hit my a sun but the force is not there as she causes the sun to rain down on them. More like it would be like standing next to a sun

Once again, you don't define practical limits to these powers. Also, you list out and explain powers as if you're playing or designing a computer game. This is a freeform RP chat so definite powers are a little outside the wheelhouse.

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Weaknesses: Without the staff she can't use any of the magic she has but she can still provide astral energy to any amount of actions she does.

What effect does this astral energy have?

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Occupation: She is mostly an astrologist but she will defend the knowledge she knows at all costs.[/quote]

She makes predictions based on star positions but will defend the knowledge she knows at all costs? This must be a scrambled syntax problem because this makes no sense whatsoever.

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History: Being part of a race that had been watching over a deep rift in the world they slowly began to spend their time learning about the world about them but Astral Eclipse was different then the rest of her brothers and sisters....
...Over time she began to move away from her world towards Equstria where she began to work on the world that she had come upon.

I need more, LOTS more. More about the race. More about this rift. More about how the staff isn't good for her sanity. More about how the rift changed her. More about how she came to Equestria. Just... more. You leave so much out that it doesn't make sense.
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Name: Overmorrow

Race: Unicorn

Age: 34 (1034 technically but did not live the thousand years)

Mane: Icy Blue with a streak of black going through it

Coat: Orchid purple

Cutie mark.: A constellation in the shape of a crescent moon

Extra details that aren’t needed but are nice to add: Almost always has a blindfold over his eyes.

Distinguishing Features: The aforementioned blindfold. In addition he almost always has his technically antique sword in a sheathe at his side, ready to pull with his magic.

Specialty (eg. special spells, unique powers etc): Overmorrow was granted the ability by Nightmare Moon to see into the dreams of others, increasing his skills as her personal assassin by being able to find traits to exploit.

While his blindness has greatly compromised this skill Overmorrow is an exceptional sword fighter. While he can use his magic as a form of echo-location to sense his opponents even without his eyes it is still far less efficient. Still he knows enough to be able to fend for himself and to demonstrate to other guards various techniques.

Weaknesses: Obviously, his blindness. While he can use magic to induce a form of echo location this is imprecise and does not allow him to make out details. His dream invading ability can also be repelled if the victim becomes aware of his presence they can simply expel him from the dream with a thought.

Occupation: Formerly Nightmare Moon's chief assassin. Now a trainer to the royal guard.

Gear: Carries a uniquely forged sword with a white and midnight blue handle and the sun and moon engraved on each side of the blade. The sword itself doesn't have any magical properties but is expertly forged and balanced, even by more modern standards.

History: An old fashioned soldier who Luna took a shine to due to his constant insistence on taking the night shift back before there was an official night guard, Overmorrow was fiercely loyal to Princess Luna throughout his service; when Princess Luna did finally lose herself to the entity known as Nightmare Moon, Overmorrow was committed to obeying her regardless.

When Nightmare Moon foresaw that her planned attack on Celestia may end poorly she made an arrangement to trap several of her most loyal followers in the dream realm in suspended animation, to be revived when she returned if she failed or when she defeated Celestia.

While obviously Nightmare Moon was banished her servants lay dormant in the dream realm until Princess Luna finally returned; the princess of the night returned to where the followers had been sealed in the dream realm to check what their status was. Overmorrow was the only one of the followers whose loyalty to Princess Luna took priority, whereas most of the others were only interested in personal gain or were dedicated to their hatred of Celestia.

Overmorrow was subsequently released while the other members were given the option to either pledge allegiance to the two sisters together or be imprisoned, choosing the latter. Overmorrow has since been put to work by Luna training the Royal Guard.

Personality: Overmorrow is an old fashioned warrior, who lives strictly by a code of honor. As such he is extremely proud in his work and is fiercely loyal to Princess Luna and Princess Celestia now; even the slightest insult to the two is likely to produce a tense reaction from him.

While he is often accused of having no sense of fun or humor, especially when he must work with Hoodwink, he does have a sense of humor but feels it improper to show as such when he is on duty which is almost always in his minds eye.

His friendship to Princess Luna was initially in question upon his return from the dream realm but since then has settled back into the friendship as if the millenia of separation never occurred, and along with Twilight Sparkle he has remained one of the few ponies Luna is able to unhesitatingly call a friend.

Current Home: A guest room on the fourth floor of Canterlot Castle.

Misc: The most common blindfold he is seen wearing for his eyes is a dark purple rag with the image of Celestia and Luna in a circle commonly found in history books. It is in fact a rag of Overmorrow's dress uniform which was shredded during a changeling attack during his original service to the throne.
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Name: Overmorrow

Approved, with some English on it (with all due respect to the fact that the player is English).
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Name: Enigmatic Void
Alias: Spymaster
Race: Eidolon
Age: 2000+ years
Mane: His mane was weaved into a diamond shape pattern with each strand of the diamond either raven black or dark purple. Cascading down his form in a blanket type hood the mane that is his hair ends flows lightly by his sides. Like a stormy sea the mane rises and falls with each movement.
Coat: A flowing mixture of pink, dark purple and raven black covers his whole body. No pattern can be discerned because the colors replace one another and move around on his body. though his coat ripples once in a while.
Cutie mark.: Simply put it is the shape of a nebula with billowing clouds of purple ionized gas with two stars peering out into the darkness.
Extra details that aren’t needed but are nice to add: Eidolons are born from the very nebula itself, just 483 million miles from the moon by a large cluster of asteroids and a gas giant. Many astrologists call his home, The Helix Dark Nebula for its strange veil around the brown dwarf.  with that they have no vital organs or main structures that hold the Eidolon together. The only thing that keeps him alive and keeps him together is a gem in the shape of a elongated rhombus. Another thing to add is that he can be any of the races at his will since he had no defined shape.  He can knows enough about the pony body to land disabling blows against them with his hooves. He is made out of a material called Dark Sand; looks and feels much like obsidian glass but isn't that strong. Being held together by the crystal he can shape the dark sand in any way he wishes as long as it doesn't harm him in anyway as well as his focus point can't change.
Distinguishing Features: Two purple-pink eyes glow spectacularly. Another thing to note about him is that his face as a long black line running down from his head across his left eye.
Specialty (eg. special spells, unique powers etc): Being a creature of space he has learned how to shape vacuums to the point he can make them. Either a bubble or wall can be created anywhere from thirty feet long to inches long. Pulling objects and creatures together with the force of a gale or licks of air.
He can summon visages of the enemies he fights as they pass through a wall of intense light that do reduced damage and take more damage then the original being.  
He has complete control over the dark sand to form any melee weapon he needs or wishes but not life, soul, or heart. The dark sand can be sharpened, blunted, pointed, and curved to make melee weapons of any kind while having the same strength as him.
Weaknesses: Being forged from dark energies of the crystal and the dark sand he cannot stand in direct sunlight otherwise he would be reduced to something similar to an earth pony. Since that crystal is his focus point any damage to the crystal would cause massive damage to him as if someone was running their weapon across a pony's heart, the crystal is no stronger then quartz. He tends to avoid fire or powerful heat sources because as black sand heats up or gets close to 25 C it becomes liquid-solid so it becomes easier to hit and break because of its liquid nature. Anything to with sun-based magic instantly weakens him to a state of a regular pony.
Occupation: Rouge Spymaster that serves the highest bidder; with some time ruling over a black sand fortress far away.  
Gear: Having only more of the dark sand in a bag he can form any melee weapon he needs as long as it isn't living, magical, or spiritual.
History: Forged out of the heart of a dying star, the dark purple gem Shal'as was thrown free of its celestial prison. A powerful wisp was living in the gem as it was a powerful being locked inside. Forced to drift in space for eons, the magical wisp within the dark purple gem began to catch the eyes of some more evil characters but whenever someone would touch the dark gem it would disintegrate them into a pile of dark sand for there was no way to control the power within. Fearing what this could mean that a doomsday could come upon them. They cast the gem back into space where it had come from. This same pattern continued for eons till the gem fell into the heart of a dark nebula.

Within that nebula there was life stirring but having a hard time starting out for the material of the nebula wouldn't be able to support any solid object being made of gas and dust. The gem began to gather dust and gas together. Out of the dust/dark sands came a single life and that life was Enigmatic void. Starting out into the void of space without purpose and given existence for no reason he drifted away from the nebula till he landed on the moon of Equis. To his displeasure he ran straight into the lamented Nightmare Moon. She hurt, tortured, and mutilated his mind in order to make the perfect weapon out of him. Enigmatic void ran away to the nearby planet of Equis, away from the wrathful gaze of Nightmare moon.

He ran and ran, fleeing to the ever free forest to seek peace from all that had happened to him. Ponies lived nearby and He watched from the shadows to further understand all those about him yet his hesitance to socialize with others was affected by Nightmare moon's terrible actions. Growing up the powerful being within the crystal began to exert its powerful abilities upon Enigmatic void. Becoming more powerful with each and every day caused him to spiral out of control as a fight over his will began between him and the being within the crystal. After a thousand years Nightmare moon was returned back to Luna where she ventured to the forests to seek out the being she had sinned. Healing part of his mind she cursed the being within the gem to protect the frail mind of Enigmatic void but his mind would never be safe.
Personality: Broken in half by the actions of Nightmare Moon; the first half of his mind is a child-like mind that is innocent and trying to learn all he could about the world around him but that child grew up. Kind in heart and wanting to help others he can but hesitant to talk to others. As that child he loved the idea of a spy or rouge so he trained to be such. Though he is willing to do what he can to keep others alive.

The other side of his mind is a dark monster that has ingrained in the more child like side. The monster made him more violent and unwilling to get along with others. Bitter and angry at everything his want and greed for money caused him to break others. Hurting and killing as he went along with the spy. When the two half minds come together power is at its highest. The first side is the more helping and kind hearted with the other the darker and eviler.
Current Home: The Chalagith nebula fortress that rests in the middle of the Ever Free Forest
Misc: Be wary of offending him since he can't really control his more evil side. Though seems like a god he is quite weak thanks to his body and mind ripped asunder during his time with Nightmare Moon. Broken, lost, and utterly confused about the being trapped within the crystal.
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Pencil Doodle

Pencil Doodle


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Join date : 2014-11-02
Age : 27
Location : England

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Name: Pencil J. Doodle

Race: Unicorn

Age: 25

Mane: Spikey. Burgandy with a light red strip

Coat: Milky brown

Cutie mark.: HB Pencil mid-drawing

Extra details that aren’t needed but are nice to add: Pencil Doodle is very introverted, yet he can become aggressive if someone annoys him. He much prefers his own company, but when it comes to his friends (what few he has), relatives, and ponies that actually entertain him, he can be tolerant.
He tends to act witty and sarcastic in most situations; whether he is trying to be funny, get a point across, or just trying to mask emotion.
He has a simple philosophy: "Any problem can be solved if you simply stop caring about it."

Distinguishing Features: Shorter than the average stallion. Has heavy bags under his eyes, as well his left eye being glass

Specialty (eg. special spells, unique powers etc): He isn't a very skilled magician, though he has the ability to manipulate the light in whatever area he's in on a small scale; it helps with his artistic ability

Weaknesses: He has the emotional stability of a child who's just seen their dog get run over.

Occupation: Freelance Artist

History: Pencil Jonah Doodle was one of two siblings born to a working class family in Canterlot. He had a small family, consisting of his earth pony elder sister, earth pony mother, and unicorn father. This little family went through many hardships in their time, but perhaps the most hard-hitting was when Pencil’s dad ran out on him for reasons that weren’t very clear. Of course, Pencil was still quite young at the time, so the personal effect on him was almost non-existent; although on a larger scale, the damage was clear. With one less pony to bring in income, their mother struggled to keep them afloat; often working hard hours or extensive shifts just to feed everyone. The absence of parental figures caused Pencil’s sister to develop independence at an early age, but as for Pencil himself, he simply hid himself away; isolating himself from others under a demeanour shyness.
As the years went on and as Pencil grew older, their situation did gradually get better. Their finances became less of a struggle, and starvation was no longer a constantly looming threat. However, what they went through was not forgotten.

The anti-social mannerisms that Pencil developed caused him to become a sort of misfit in his school life. He preferred his own company rather than hanging out with other kids, and when interaction with other children was required, he often failed miserably at it. He became a notorious teachers’ pet, feeling that they were the only ponies he could ever trust. His short frame and strange mannerisms also lead him to become an easy target for bullying.
It was safe to say he didn’t like school very much.
Despite his devotion to his teachers and subjects, he was never the smartest of foals either. He got good enough grades to get by, but never excelled in anything like so many others seemed to.
However, he seemed to have a knack for drawing. He was often caught doodling during class, whether they be cartoons, tessellating patterns, or even scenic sketches. As time went by, his artistic skills only continued to improve; art became his strongest subject, and sketching became his favourite past time. It would seem that it was the only thing he strongly cared for.

After getting through school with passable grades, he decided to enrol in college with a major in fine art. He said his tearful goodbyes to his mum and sister, before packing his bags and leaving for campus. He spent the next few years living in a small dorm with a music theory major. He was one annoying bastard; always playing classical music when he was trying to draw or sleep. At this point, his life mainly consisted of classwork, eating, trotting around school grounds out of boredom, more classwork, and attempting to sleep. It was nowhere near as fulfilling as Pencil had envisioned in his head. After his second year, he threw up his hooves in defeat and decided to become a college drop out. Of course, his mother wasn’t happy to hear the news that her child had flunked out of something as silly as an art degree, and his sister had moved out ages ago.
Pencil was essentially left homeless.

Using what little money he had saved up, he bought himself some art equipment and a tent to sleep in. He applied whatever he had learnt in his life to making money. His primary source of income became drawing caricatures of ponies at the beach or at whatever amusement park would take him on as a temp.
Eventually he gained enough money to move out of his tent and into a rundown little cottage in Manehatten, taking on more sophisticated commissions from whoever wanted a fancy little drawing.
To this day, Pencil still lives in that cottage.
Pencil talks about his experiences with pride, feeling that in the end, they have made him a better person. Sure, some other mishaps have happened along the way - such as that one time he stabbed himself in the eye with a pencil - but that's just part of the ever-twisting journey that is his life! Although he tends to lie about coming from a working class family, simply because his heavy Canterlot accent makes him sound posh.
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