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PostSubject: Re: OC Character Thread 2 (This thread is now locked, please use the OC Character Thread 3 above)   Sat Dec 12, 2015 1:03 am

Name: Hawke Moonstrider
Race: Feathered Kirin
Age: 22
Mane: Medium length, Dark red
Scales: Charcoal gray
Cutie mark.: N/A
Extra details that aren't needed but are nice to add: Gentle giant most of the time.
Distinguishing Features: His yellow scale pattern
Specialty (eg. special spells, unique powers etc): Can breath fire like most kirin, possess incredible strength and combat prowess.
Weaknesses: Vulernable against cold and ice based magics.
Occupation: Member of the Royal Guard for the Dracotalon kingdom of kirin
Gear:Hardened leather armor, a shield, spear and sword.
History: Hawke was born to a blacksmith and a dragon hatcher in a settlement closer to the capital of Dracotalon. At a young age, he stuck around his mother in the hatchery, watching over the eggs of the dragons that nested there. While he was there, a young dragoness found his childishness amusing and took to conversing with him when he would come by. This dragoness seemed to rub off an honesty on him, as she would always be able to detect any untruths he would tell, and she would always call him out on it. As he grew older, he began to gravitate more towards his father, who took him on as an assistant in his shop. He helped to sell weapons and armor, watching his father forge them from metals pulled straight from the ground.
   He went to a reputable school to learn the basic skills one needed to make a living in Dracotalon, reading and writing, history, a bit of geography, basic math skills. He found it all rather boring, and his opinion of it was voiced numerous times. And then, he went to see his first battle in the colosseum. He became infatuated with combat and the warrior lifestyle. From that point on he dedicated his time to learning to fight like professional warriors. His dedication payed off and he began to enter tournemants, earning wins and losses, impressing crowds with his skill. He joined the royal guard to better hone his abilities and started to move up the ranks, his skill with a blade earning him position after position. He now holds the rank of Warrior Chief, looking over a squad of his own.
Personality: Hawke is about as straightforward as you can get. He’s not afraid to share his feelings on something and will just about always tell you the truth rather than sugar coat something to make you feel better. He won’t normally lie, instead just staying quiet rather than be dishonest. He takes his career as a warrior seriously, learning as much as he can and taking in different techniques from the many he goes up against. He is honorable in both victory and defeat, never disrespecting his opponent. No matter who they be.
Current Home: Dracotalon
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PostSubject: Re: OC Character Thread 2 (This thread is now locked, please use the OC Character Thread 3 above)   Sat Dec 12, 2015 1:34 am

And now for Knightmare's Mama, Toriel Wylder!

Name: Toriel Wylder

Race: Asmodean [half-succubus, half-cherub goat-person]

Age: Unknown[assumed at least 1000]

Mane: white

Coat: white

Cutie mark: none

Extra details that aren't needed but are nice to add: The following image is being used for proportional details:



Distinguishing Features: 'Mood Ring' eyes, secondary canines, PIE

Specialty (eg. special spells, unique powers etc): Cooking, fire magic[white-coloration for attacking and green when healing], 'Succubi Seduction'(her ability to charm others into lovemaking through touch and even sheer proximity if she can exploit the other's latent lust well enough, feeding off their latent energy for sustenance). 'Lover's Wrath'(those only pretending to love her or harm her unnaffectionately in lovemaking will in turn feel the pain against them, leeching harshly on their lifeforce instead). She can also sustain herself a bit by innocent affection as well, especially children's.

Weaknesses: Prefers non-violent solutions and is generally not one looking to kill which may make her hesitate at a crucial moment, can't stand seeing children harmed, and as a part Succubi monster she will become both physically and emotionally weakened if she goes for too long without any affection, be it by lust or innocent affection.

Occupation: Nanny, Theodore's Mom, Boss Monster?

Gear: Fancy robe, endless adorableness, the survivalist's cookbook.

History: A distant relative to the former king and queen of the monster kingdom of 'Underground', Wylder's early life was left unrecorded, most records of her past destroyed at her own request due to events down the line involving tragic family and political problems she'd rather not associate with.

For over a millennium, she lived for the most part in a simple lifestyle, working as a Nanny time and time again, particularly for single parents that couldn't take care of all their offspring well; She also did her part to give her brand of 'special care' to the parents themselves to ease their tension. Otherwise, things were rather unremarkable, until one day, a day long awaited and coveted by the monsters of 'Underground' had finally come when a Saintly Child had broken the barrier between the monster and human realm. This grand event allowed them all freely into the human world once more, where she would continue to live as she always had, including her 'special care' for humans as well.

As time passed, however, things would take a terrible turn for the worse when the world would slowly fall into chaos caused by a Demon Child's rampage, and since then she well and truly lost all contact she might've had to the royal family and close associates, never knowing their fate since. She took to a more reclusive life for a time.

After things had changed so drastically, she came to yearn some permanent company of her own, especially when she remembered having seen her relatives raise an offspring, and adopt a child lovingly during simpler times. As her luck would have it, she eventually stumbled across young Theodore Williams during one of her outings and, having helped with his suicidal tendencies, worked towards making him a healthier, happier child, taking him as her own; She also adopted the first name of Toriel ever since, a fond reminder of one she looked up to for being such a kind caretaker herself before things turned sour.

Nearly 2 decades later of meeting Theodore, she's finally moved out of their reclusive home, onto the ship known as 'The Langoud', where her son now works as the team's engineer. She serves as the 'mother' of the team, making sure everyone remains healthy, including fellow mother Joannah Johnson[whom, like many mad scientists, often forgets things like 'sleep' and 'food].

An accident during one of the tests, however, resulted in herself, her son Theodore, sister-in-law Doctor Joanna Johnson, daughter-in-law Tytanna, and their pet, Haley, in wandering the multiverse, trying to get back home as they went from portal to portal, realm to realm...

Personality: As typical of those of her kin, she is a loving mother who cares for everyone around her, but won't hesitate to blast any child-abusers[reasons be damned] with a gigantic fireball, followed by a flying triple flip kick to the balls. Has a passion for cooking a variety of odd foods, including snail pizza pie among many odd yet delicious recipes.

Current Home: Alongside her son[much to his glee/embarrassment]

Misc.: She's quite the avid and willful lover, and at a height of 8'0 she's larger than life as is. She is also, in fact, based on a What-if of Undertale's Corrupted Good Ending...

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PostSubject: Re: OC Character Thread 2 (This thread is now locked, please use the OC Character Thread 3 above)   Sat Dec 12, 2015 4:48 am

Sir_Knightmare wrote:
And now for Knightmare's Mama, Toriel Wylder!

Name: Toriel Wylder

[11:29:42 PM] Dual Thrones: Well, I'll leave this in your hands Market. You have my carte blanc to approve the character if you feel like he's done enough to it.

After discussing things with Dual as well, this sheet shall be approved as is, HOWEVER... Yes, it should be noted this is barely approved as per the group rules and mine and Dual's standards after discussion; I am not as daft as a few others recently have come to believe.

Knightmare, I do still wish for further refining over the character as a whole as you've mentioned me an idea about a similar concept you had in mind before Undertale came along, but with this approval, you have reason to make your own changes and flavor freely within the group as it gets more use once you've found a style with it to really call it your own.(Granted, any changes you make to the sheet have to be made aware by me and/or Dual of course.)

P.S.: I don't know how many remember, but I also had a thing for making some Tutorial threads with the purpose of trying to help some people test out concept characters or details to eventually make them into more refined characters or details. To the few reading this that have already come to me to complain about this sheet, or feel they have reason to complain in general(you know who you are, and I am not amused), try actually Roleplaying with Knightmare yourselves instead of avoiding him, and see if you can actually do a better task of HELPING him refine his RPing skills within the group as I intend to do ANYWAY instead of butting in on things that has nothing to do with them. "Either put up, or shut up."

To the rest who hopefully have more tact, Knightmare is still relatively new in the group and not in many threads yet. Please try and get to know him better and his ideas, as for as much as I spend time with the group, I can't help with everything any more than anyone else can. I'd really appreciate more constructive pro-activity. On that matter, a few other members are still new and relatively unknown, so try approaching them as well, they aren't hard to find if you go looking for them.

EDIT: 12/15/2015 : As of this moment, my efforts to aid Knightmare with Toriel Wylder's sheet has reached it's limit. Should anyone think there's more they can improve upon that we can't, feel free to give it a shot.


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PostSubject: Re: OC Character Thread 2 (This thread is now locked, please use the OC Character Thread 3 above)   Sat Dec 12, 2015 5:01 am

Sir_Knightmare wrote:
Name: Theodore 'Knightmare' Williams

Since the Toriel has (kind of) approval, I'll approve this as well.
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PostSubject: Re: OC Character Thread 2 (This thread is now locked, please use the OC Character Thread 3 above)   Sat Dec 12, 2015 5:03 am

Alpha P wrote:
Name: Hawke Moonstrider

Approved.
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PostSubject: Re: OC Character Thread 2 (This thread is now locked, please use the OC Character Thread 3 above)   Sat Dec 12, 2015 1:25 pm

Thank you both for the approva, and I will continue working with Market in regards to Toriel, along with potential improvements for the rest of my ragged clan of troublemakers

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PostSubject: Re: OC Character Thread 2 (This thread is now locked, please use the OC Character Thread 3 above)   Sat Dec 12, 2015 10:17 pm

Name: Amery.

Race: Old god.

Age: 1342

Gender: Female

Mane: Silver, always brushed and combed.

Coat: Snow white, thick and fluffy. There are few things better to cuddle in the cold.

Cutie mark: As an Old god she doesn't have a cutie mark, but the front of her body is covered in red markings to specify that not only she is an Old god but more specifically a wolf Old god. Red means preditor, and the pattern stands for the mastery group.

Extra details that aren't needed but are nice to add: She's blind, but unless you look into her eyes, you likely wouldn't notice.

Distinguishing Features: Amery has wolf-like ears, tail and her red markings that she covers when out in public.

Specialty (eg. special spells, unique powers etc): Dew to her age she developed a simple form of magic that allows simple perception of her surroundings and movement of objects. Having the fortune of being a wolf Old god she was able to compensate her lack of sight with her hearing and sense of smell.

The fact she is an Old god grants her spontaneous transmission to those who think of her, dream entrance to those around her. She also has the main skills of all 3 main nature Old god groups and all the type abilities owned by the predators.;
Eithrial Growth: the ability to force plants to grow. The ability itself is rather limited in that it won't be making any forests spontaneously appear, more along the lines of making smaller plants grow in the span of minutes.
Eitherial alliance: the ability to call upon animals to protect her.
Eitherial knowledge: the ability to know the targets health and condition upon physical contact.
Amery has a 2 part ability that first off lets her find a target, then it allows her to move at an unreal speed to the target.

Alternate History powers: (These powers are only usable in her wolf form which only exists with the second and optional part of the history)
With the exchange of pony blood or consummation of her bound object, she can morph into her wolf form which is a 12ft tall silver wolf, her pony form can be achieved with no exchange.

The forest's howl: this ability is only posable in her wolf form. She sends out a shockwave that can widely vary in power based on the abundance of nature nearby for nature manages to amplify the ability and whether she is in her wolf or pony form. So while there is no nature about, the effect might knock someone back, but when a forest is all around, it could level a large area and materials up to stone. Amery can also vary the power of the ability on certain targets to a limited extent. Expanding on the example where everything in the area was flattened, the few allies that were too close to Amery might only be knocked out while the enemies would most likely be killed.

She also has the ability to make someone freeze in fear in her wolf form.

Weaknesses: Amery has lost many friends, this makes her less likely to try and befriend anyone and everyone. She also has no desire to be seen as a god which has happened before to many Old gods. If her bound object is destroyed she is destroyed with it. Amery's also fairly weak and feeble in her pony form, and could probably be overwhelmed by most ponies.

Occupation: she is guardian of the animals and plants around her, she also is a matriarch if some being near her needs guidance she will do her best to help them or help them help themselves

Gear: The clothes she wears, the lily of which she shares a life line with and the two lunio coins she kept from her past life.

History: Far to the north and over a 1000 years ago, a small mare lost her life at the young age of 15 and her name was lost to the annuls of time. At the time of death however and deep within the great forest, something rare happened. An Old god was born into the wolf grouping, a 15 year old mare given the name Amery by the wolf Old god commune.

Young Amery grew up with them as a wolf Old god, mastering her ability's, guiding lost travellers and even giving the food if needed. But the sedimentary lifestyle was never for her and she started travelling at the age of 130. Soon she found herself in equestria around the time of the nightmare event. She travelled to the east and put out forest fires created by the chaos, but left after being attacked by a village for her makings. After this happened 3 more times, Amery decided to cover the marks up.

Amery continued assisting ponies and other beings over the centuries in her travels. Aiding the lost and weary, helping the forests when the need arose, a clam life for the long lived Old god with very few of these events making enough of an impact on her for the mare to remember.

Alternate continuation: (This half of the history is only to be used by this character in certain games where it has been approved by the GM as it effects more than one aspect of the character.)
One encounter though managed to stick out in her long string of memories, the only time she nearly died. Some creature from the nether realm managed to find a way into the mortal lands of equestria and the large blue abomination sought nothing more than death and destruction. Amery was close by when it emerged and found it shortly after its first victims.

Without a second though, Amery charged the beast in her pony form, but was both figuratively and literally crushed under the beast. Some more nearby ponies came to her aid then, one luring the monster away while the other began tending to Amery's wounds. Before he could get much progress done though, the beast turned back and charged the doctor. Once more, without a second thought towards her own safety, Amery threw herself in the beast's path and threw up a shield. In her weakened state though, the monster managed to send a spike straight through the shield and her. Before it could deliver a finishing blow though, a sorcerer who'd been alerted by the creature's presence showed up to seal it away.

Amery blacked out however at this point, and for the next few days it was really touch and go on her condition as the doctor tried to keep the Old god from dying. Amery however wasn't bound to anything and as such she was still weakening despite the wounds healing. So as soon as she could walk, Amery left the hospital and wandered into the local market to find something to bind herself to. Amery's eyes fell on wheat first and in that moment she was certain of it being what she was bound to. It was common, easily replaced, and edible, making it perfect for the mare so she bought some and stored it in a small rabbit skin bag to bind the wheat, and as various related grains, to her. With the bond made, her existence became tied to the wheat and so long as some of it survived, so would she. That bag she keeps with her now, as the lonely Old god continues traveling and offering her aid where she can.

Personality: Amery is loud and demanding, determined and proud. She's certainly not subtle, letting any and every pony know when she is jealous or unhappy, unless her pride is in question. She is imperialistic in nature and her actions along with her clothes could cause her to be mistaken as nobility, but if asked will simply replies “no child” or something similar.

Virtue: lawful good

Current Home: After leaving the shrine she has just wondered around and can now be found in mid Equestria although sometimes, she ventures out to other countries.

Misc: She has strong will and stronger charm, often she will use this to get what she so desires.

Old god: In the lands to the north of Equestria, where the summers rarely exceed 13*c and the winters drop down to -40*c, the landscape is a blinding white. This is käslolösmark, a country covered by an expanse of forest. The legends here tell of how when one had proven to be pure, and worthy, they will be reincarnated within a commune as a, what the locals call Old god. The Old gods well resemble their previous life at the time of death or at least what they would have looked like if they hadn't died. The Old gods resemble animals of which suits them best and upon arrival they will join their respective group. In this new life the Old god will have no memory of their past and will be brought up in there new “family's own ways”. An Old god is immortal but it is not invulnerable, the Old god can be killed and if they are not bound to something they will fade to nothing with not even tauturus to save them. Old gods have a complex history, so to avoid mass confusion, in the times before ponies, the creatures now known as relics existed and dwelled within their own pocket world, they consisted of 4 types the sexually aggressive ‘succubae’, the chaotic ‘devils’, and the caring and animalistic ‘elves’. Feeling tired of this land after many millennia they took to escaping, after creating the means of their escape (a bond to our world which will drag the relic back apron ‘death’ to reform and health.).They found themselves in a world much different to the one they had lived in before, there was tall green things and fluffy excitable things. Above all else they came across “intelligent” creatures, and with support, could be capable of great things. The elves rejoiced at the chance to nurture this race but the succubus and devils saw them as the perfect source of magical energy, that some would call a soul, the soul for the relics was the perfect food source, it was much longer lasting than food, of which was, for the relics, lasting near a minuet due to their masses of magic use. The elves saw this and saw how all life had this and replenished it, they determined that they could syphon it off and live of that. The succubae, though less caring than the elves, still believed that killing them as a food source was a bad idea and fed off of their semen which also contained a small amount of this energy. This worked well, but there was one group that did not agree, the devils cared not at all for the sanctity of life of this race that called themselves ‘ponies’. They saw only food that the others would not accept except a few succubae. They attacked and terrorised the ponies, and fed off of them. The elves powered by their symbiotic relationship with nature, took action and forced them back to whence they came, but they did not scrutinize, the culprits to the elves were both succubae and devils alike. The elves forced all of their relic brethren back leaving only their own kind. The elves were changed over time due to exposure from nature, they became more pony like and more animalistic, slowly drifting away from the race they once guided, they went from being seen as gods to their new name, the Old gods, myth and legend alone, the now Old god learnt they had a problem though, they had disconnected from their old home world and when they died they just died, not tauturus, but the void. They knew there kind would die soon if they did not plan so they started looking for those worthy, those pure in heart to take their place, this being the main way Old gods are born.
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PostSubject: Re: OC Character Thread 2 (This thread is now locked, please use the OC Character Thread 3 above)   Sat Dec 12, 2015 11:44 pm

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Name: Amery

Approved. Smile Glad to give you a wolfpony of your own, wolfpony.
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PostSubject: Re: OC Character Thread 2 (This thread is now locked, please use the OC Character Thread 3 above)   Sat Dec 12, 2015 11:45 pm

after so long, i may cry ;w;

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