OC Character Thread 2 (This thread is now locked, please use the OC Character Thread 3 above)

BronzeFog wrote:

Name: Frenitida

Approved.

BronzeFog wrote:

Name: Axis Vorto

Approved.

Name: Wildfire

Race: Pegasus

Age: 24

Mane: black

Coat: Yellow

Cutie Mark: Burning flames, red.

Distinguishing Features: Blind, eyes & eyelids melted and face covered in scars from an acid attack by the class bully in science class at age 19

Specialty: Writes poetry.

Weaknesses: Easily scared, spent 5 years in an abusive care home in Canterlot from 19 - 24, where the staff regularly physically and mentally abused her. Now lives on Stallion Island, Manehatten with a herd of 4 other mares as she slowly gets over the abuse of the past.

Occupation: Reserve firefighter in canterlot pre blinding, works as a firefighter in manehatten with the aid of a flight suit which incorporates a headset which provides altitude and distance via an earpiece.

Wildfire wrote:

Name: Wildfire

Race: Pegasus

Age: 24

Mane: black

Coat: Yellow

Cutie Mark: Burning flames, red.

Distinguishing Features: Blind, eyes & eyelids melted and face covered in scars from an acid attack by the class bully in science class at age 19

Specialty: Writes poetry.

Weaknesses: Easily scared, spent 5 years in an abusive care home in Canterlot from 19 - 24, where the staff regularly physically and mentally abused her. Now lives on Stallion Island, Manehatten with a herd of 4 other mares as she slowly gets over the abuse of the past.

Occupation: Reserve firefighter in canterlot pre blinding, works as a firefighter in manehatten with the aid of a flight suit which incorporates a headset which provides altitude and distance via an earpiece.

Another tragic character... *sigh*

OK, my only real issue with this is that you've provided no history for her. I require such a thing.

http://www.fimfiction.net/story/252923/wildfire-lighting-the-flame

here's some history

Wildfire wrote:

http://www.fimfiction.net/story/252923/wildfire-lighting-the-flame

here's some history

Sorry, but that's not quite what Dual means. If you go and look at the template sheet in page 1, or just about any other sheet that's been completed and approved for that matter, you'll see that they all have a History section showing a summary of a character's life. It doesn't have to be a novel, just something everyone can read along with the sheet quickly for proper reference. If you feel it would be difficult for you to make it into a paragraph or two of history minimum, then write what you can... Just try to avoid writing too much as that's what RPing is for.

Name:Dust
Race:Unicorn
Age:23
Mane:Red with darker red streaks
Coat:Dark blue
Cutie mark.:A sword with the snakes of a caduceus
Extra details that aren't needed but are nice to add:
Distinguishing Features:
Specialty (eg. special spells, unique powers etc):She has incredibly powerful healing magic, able to heal most non-mortal wounds if she has the energy.
Weaknesses:She is overly trusting, meaning that she can be easily manipulated. She also has an extreme aversion to humans. (See history)
Occupation:She is a doctor, which is unsurprising due to her powerful healing magic.
History:There was once a human. He was fairly normal, nothing too out-of-the-ordinary. He went to high school. However, he was bullied with no end in sight. Their parents were not particularly...cordial...either. The human that would become Dust was rather depressed as a result, just trying to get through high school and meet half-decent people at college.

One day, while being harassed again, he was shoved into a seemingly solid statue... and came out the other side as a mare. In the Crystal Empire. After the initial shock of the location, gender, and species change. After figuring out how to walk, she tried to explore the palace but was quickly arrested. Once explaining the portal, however, she was sworn to secrecy and released. They have lived in Equestria for several years now, not wanting to return to Earth. She was much more comfortable in Equestrian culture.
Location: Crystal Empire or Canterlot, depending on the canon

Misc: [REDACTED]

Cynicalwhovian wrote:

Name: Dust

Approved.

Name: Ice Hearth

Race: Dragon pony

Age: 12

Mane: Fuchsia pink in colour, with one half resting over her eye while the other side swirls up. At the back, the mane stands up in jolting spikes down to the base of her neck, getting progressively smaller as they go.

Coat: Lavender blue and very soft to the touch. Scales adorn a few portions of her body, namely her shoulders, where the cutie mark would be on the flank, and a row of 6 go down her spine.

Cutie Mark: None

Extra details that aren't needed but are nice to add: Ice naturally chills the air around her in relation to how shy and scared she's feeling, the more extreme the feeling, the colder it gets. Ice also has horns, but isn't capable of casting magic with them.

Distinguishing Features: Ice has some small scale freckles, back pointing horns, and a long scaly dragon tail. The tail has tufts of fur spreading from the base of the tail to midway pointed towards her head, and it ends in a larger tuft of fur. On her hooves Ice has 3 sharp retractable claws and longer tufts of the same soft fur.

Specialty (eg. special spells, unique powers, etc): Ice can breath fire, and is highly resistant to the cold. Ice's blood also petrifies foreign organic material upon contact, excluding those of close blood relation.

Weaknesses: Ice is shy and introverted, getting scared exceedingly easy. While physically strong for her size, she's rather strictly non-violent and lacks any knowledge on how to even fight.

Occupation: While Ice isn't paid for it, she cares for any and all animals that would require her assistance.

Gear: A stone bandage wrapped around her left foreleg/hoof

History: Daughter to a pegasus mother and frost dragon father, Ice had a rather unique upbringing. Though her before school years was spent utilizing a knack for communicating and understanding animals, a talent that had her outside most of the time. When those fleeting years passed though and the time for school came, Ice was terrified. She'd barely met any pony prior, and those were of her own volition.

If being a 'new kid' wasn't bad enough, Ice also faced bullies based off her unique looks, and soon became accustomed to retreating into her 'shell' when the insults and tormenting came. Eventually, the bullying negatively effected her school-work and it wasn't long after that Ice was pulled from public classes to be home-schooled. While Ice didn't care too much for her schooling to be continued, being home-schooled came with the benefit of granting her easy access to the White tail wood she was so fond of. After lessons each day, Ice took to exploring the woods and befriending the animals that lived there.

By 11, Ice had a large portion of the wood known, memorized and could traverse it with ease. Which only compounded the shock of when one day Ice was walking along a path, only to unexpectedly trip. Her hoof and snout were already beginning to throb as she looked back to find the obstruction, and the shock of what the obstruction was sent her fleeing behind a tree. Said obstruction was a mare and her guitar, and she took to trying to coax Ice out from behind the tree despite the steadily declining temperature caused by Ice's fear. Eventually though, Ice was coaxed back out from behind the tree and the mare with the guitar began inspecting the extent of the dragon pony's injuries.

Ice had a nose bleed and a decent splinter in her left fore-hoof, both of which were bleeding. While Ice held a tissue provided by the mare to stop the nosebleed, said mare was already seeing about removing the splinter and bandaging it. After the sliver of wood was extracted as painlessly as possible, the mare began bandaging up Ice's hoof. Soon after she finished and looked up to smile at Ice, she found a stone tissue being passed back to her. The mare didn't have time to even look down before the bandage was also turned to stone, something that has loosely sat on her hoof ever since the day it was placed there.
After that incident, Ice started carrying around a first aid box and re-enrolled in Ponyville school to which she currently goes.

Personality: She's shy recluse and often hiding from social interaction.

Current Home: A cottage with her father on the south side of White tail woods. The trek to school has her crossing the Everfree forest, or following a river to Ponyville

Misc: Despite the timidity, Ice is a big fan of metal, grunge, alternative metal, hard rock, progressive rock, avant-garde metal, nu-metal and similar genres. She however would never outwardly show her interest in such music though, and the only hints towards this passion would be the occasional mumbled lyrics of such songs. Doctors have also told her she has a high risk of acute haemorrhagic epistaxis outbursts, and while she has no idea what that is, the doctors seem worried. surprisingly she finds safety and comfort in the high altitudes.

Unity Wolfpony wrote:

Name: Ice Hearth

Approved.

Name: Legal Tender

Race: Unicorn

Age: 26

Mane: brown

Coat: grey

Cutie mark:  http://upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/commons/1/12/Basic_arithmetic_operators.svg

Distinguishing Features: None

Specialty (eg. special spells, unique powers etc): Mathematics


Weaknesses: Nothing in particular, Legal is a rather normal pony. Her weaknesses are normal pony things. Like spiders, and heights.

Occupation:  Ponyville’s budget manager. (Town hall’s accountant)

Gear: She always keeps a group picture of her family, taken when she was younger, on her person.

History:  

The story of Legal Tender began much like many others.  She was the product of a rather loving unicorn couple, who couldn’t always give her everything, but,  always seemed to try regardless. The three lived fairly happy normal equine lives in the town known as Ponville.

Ponyville was Legal’s home for the majority of her foalhood. She came to know many of its inhabitants. The town was so small, it was hard for everypony to not know one another. Life for the young Legal was not one of extreme luxury, but, it was full of caring friends and family members.

Then there came a time where Legal Tender had to bid her family farewell. You see, being the small town Ponyville was, it lacked the proper educational facilities to instruct the mare in her passion: mathematics. Indeed, ever since the day a younger Legal earned her cutie mark during an algebra exam, she had loved maths. Of course, not as much as she did her friends and family, but enough that she would leave them for a few months at a time to pursue higher education in a Canterlotian school. Of course, Legal would always visit whenever on break. This served to placate the moments of severe homesickness she felt whilst away. Still, they existed.

Life at the ‘Canterlot School For The Mathematically Inclined’ wasn’t as homely as it was in Ponyville. How could it have been? Ponyville was her home. Never the less, she made a group of close friends, settled into another routine and life went on. Graduation day was a happy one for Legal, many of the ponies of Ponyville, along with her parents, attended the ceremony. They cried tears of joy as she rose to claim her diploma… Sure, she might not have graduated first in her class, but that didn’t matter. They were both so proud of their little girl.

Legal Tender returned to Ponyville with her family and friends, their train car full and merry. As she settled back into life in the small town, she was approached by its mayor, Mayor Mare, with an offer to become Ponyville’s budget manager. The previous manager would retire later that year, and, Legal was to replace him. She gladly accepted the offer. That night, both she and her parents had dinner with the mayor. That was a night Legal Tender fondly remembers.

About a year into her position as Ponyville’s budget administrator, her father passed away. He was an older pony, and time had finally claimed him. Legal Tender had never cried so much as she did the night of her father’s passing. She mourned his loss for a few weeks, moving in with her mother for emotional support.

Time heals all wounds, as they say, and after a few weeks off duty (The mayor had given her two off for grief) she returned to her post. Life was once again back to normal, although she missed her father, she had come to understand the fact that sooner or later, everypony died.

A few weeks after that, Legal Tender encountered a rather shy stallion during one of ponyville’s budget meetings. Noticing that he kept glancing at her, only to shy away when she looked back at him, she approached him after the meeting had ended. The two shared a laugh, and Legal ended up asking him out to dinner.

The two grew very close, just as her parents had before her. Three years of courtship quickly passed… and Legal found herself at the receiving end of a marriage proposal. She, of course, accepted, and one month later… they were wed.

Legal Tender’s wedding proved to be the second happiest day of her life, oh the tears of joy her mother shed that night… her baby had finally grown up. The occasion was only marred by the fact her father wasn’t there.

Tender and her stallion moved into a house of their own in Ponyville, and they live fairly comfortable lives…

And such is the story of the unicorn budget administrator, Legal Tender, to this date.



Personality: Legal is a rather loving mare, holding family and friends close to her heart.

Current Home: A house in ponyville

Misc:  Figured you could use something normal, and, not pointlessly heart-breaking for a change, Dual.

Sharp wrote:

Name: Legal Tender

Specialty (eg. special spells, unique powers etc): Mathematics

OK, I'll stop you right here because this character is officially overpowered.

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Misc:  Figured you could use something normal, and, not pointlessly heart-breaking for a change, Dual.

<3


If only you hadn't made her so overpowered, Sharp!

...character approved anyway...

Name: Dr Three.

Race: Automaton

Age: 70 biologically, with his chassis being 1 year old.

Mane:N/A

Coat: Dark green.

Cutie mark: N/A

Extra details: He doesn't have feet. Or legs. He only actually has a magically powered crystal that's constantly casting a telekinesis spell on him, allowing him to float around.

Distinguishing features: design wise, he is basically a sphere with a brain in the center, an eye on the "front" and two arms with claws on his sides.

Specialty (eg. special spells, unique powers etc): He is rather intelligent-mechanically for the most part-as he built the machine he currently resides in. The machine in question is very durable, able to take considerable damage before even denting, due to the metals being magically reinforced. His claws are also fairly strong, able to do some damage.

Weaknesses: If he is pried open and his brain is removed, he will die in seconds. Also, he's not actually designed for combat, so in those situations his effectiveness is very limited. Finally, the crystal allowing him to float, despite lasting for a very long time, doesn't last forever, and if it dies, he has no form of transportation, and he cannot "refuel" the crystal on his own.

Occupation: Automatoninist. Which is a self bestowed title.

Gear: None, sans the previously mentioned crystal inside of him. And his brain.

History: Dr. Three was once a pony, by the name of Gear Head. He originally was born to a family consisting of scientists, both of whom persuaded him to pursue a life of science, and were, as a side note, very boring. He inherited that aspect of his parents, and also heeded their advice and studied to become a scientist. He spent all his time studying and testing, planning to become greater than his parents. He begun this by expanding upon his families theories of powering technology through magically enchanted crystals. He did this by forsaking caution, unlike his parents, and conducted several tests personally. It took several years, but he eventually created his first machine- a simple automaton, who served little purpose, named One. In the process of creating the machine, however, he was exposed to experimental, unstable magic, which had a profound effect on his mind, causing him to pull a complete 180 in personality, making him into an unstable mad-man. He aspired to create great machines, ones that would eventually overtake the "fools" who called him mad. It then took many years before he could create a second machine, his "magnum opus", as he called it. A machine destined for combat, one that he planned would lead his mechanical army once it was done. And so, at the age of 60, he sent his magnum opus on a test drive. It was destroyed by the ponies of the town he sent it too. This angered him beyond measure. To make matters worse, the prolonged exposure to the aforementioned unstable magic gave him a sickness that would shorten his life-span. But, he refused to allow himself to die, and worked tirelessly to create a machine that would allow him to continue living, via brain surgery, as well as a machine that could actually do the surgery in question. He built the surgery machine first, and tested it whilst creating his new body by kidnapping two ponies at a time and having it perform brain transplants on them both. In case they died, which many of them did, he would just kidnap more. Eventually, he created a new body, and planned to put his brain In it as soon as possible, mostly because he was dying. He had planned on testing his surgery machine once more, just to be certain, but didn't quite know how long he had, so he threw caution to the wind and did it without further test. It took less than 2 hours to do, and turned out to be a success. Mostly. In the hastened process, he had lost most of his memories, and almost lost his personality. When he awoke, he looked around his old lab, confused as to what happened. He was interrupted from figuring it out, however, as he was beset upon by several ponies from the aforementioned village, looking to serve justice. He managed to escape without much damage, and took a day to remember what happened. All he could recall was what he did for a living. And so, he took the name of the number on his back-as, when he was a pony, he would number all his creations; all three of them- and set out. He didn't know where he was going, he just knew he couldn't stay.

Personality: Before he transferred his brain, he was very egotistical, quick to anger, megalomaniacal-referring to himself as a god for creating artificial life-and very hammy. After the transfer, he mellowed out quite a bit, though he still does enjoy being in control, and is very convinced of his own importance. He doesn't get angry very often anymore, however; only when someone insults his intelligence, or calls him mad. That's when his old anger resurfaces, as well as his hamminess. He is fairly sociable, however, and enjoys the occasional getting out just to interact with townsfolk. However, under all that resides a deep seeded want to take over Equestria, through any means necessary; as long as those means involve robots. It typically doesn't surface, but if one mentions a villain that nearly succeeded, he gets jealous, and he is constantly creating plans that involve machines and taking control of something.

Current Home: None.

Misc: He, both as a pony and a robot, is terrible at naming things. He got it from his parents. Also, currently, he has created 8 plans for taking over areas, and is working on plan 9.

Dieteticchutoy3 wrote:

Name:Plamie 'Sharie' Sherbert
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Name:Zephry Hazel Sherbert
(Making these two for Dragon Souls Island Survival Sign-up)

It has been brought to my attention that, some way, somehow, these characters have gone unchecked for months. As I cannot in any way find anything remotely absurd about these characters, they are now approved for use in the group even if they were made for a particular thread.

Chappy wrote:

Name: Dr Three

Creepy. But I'll approve it.

Name: Absent Silhouette

Race: Thestral

Age: 45

Mane: Straight and black with a long fringe that can cover her left eye when brushed down; has a streak along the left side which is dyed blue with a pattern of stars, to match Princess Luna.

Coat: Gunmetal Grey

Cutie Mark: A vault door

Distinguishing Features: Bears some scars after her years in the guard, most notably a gash running underneath her left eye caused by a slash by the changelings during the invasion of Canterlot.

Gear: Uses the Armor of the Alicorns for her duties as Vault Guardian; outside of that duty she still has and is permitted to use her night guard armor (with insignia removed) and her old spear and shield.

Specialty: Wears the powerful Armor of the Alicorn, a full suit of armor colored in white and gold; the armor is imbued with a fragment of magic from every living unicorn, allowing Silhouette to mimic the powers of the alicorns at the skill and power level of a learned unicorn. Understandably this armor is not allowed to leave Canterlot Castle; it is blocked behind a magical barrier which only Celestia or Luna can unseal and the armor will physically lock up if Silhouette leaves the castle in it without Celestia or Luna's express permission.

Even without the armor however, Absent Silhouette is an experienced and powerful combatant, specialised in using an enemies momentum against them and trained to take on multiple opponents at once; she was trained for uneven odds due to her position as the guardian of the Canterlot Castle Vaults and Royal Burial Chambers, and she does so with lethal efficiency.

Weaknesses: Silhouette is skilled but without the Armor of the Alicorns is essentially a normal pony in peak physical condition; threatening but manageable by an equally skilled foe. In addition with Silhouette having devoted so much time to training to be a guard, her flight skills are average to below average depending on the day. 


Occupation: Royal Guard, specifically assigned to guarding the most heavily guarded vaults of Canterlot Castle containing some of the most dangerous and powerful artifacts in the kingdom, in addition to the burial chambers for members of the royal family.

History: Silhouette joined the guard at the relatively late age of 24; most recruits join straight out of school or college for training, while Silhouette struggled to find her place in life, turning to the guard after a failed attempt at a career in business; despite her older age and some misgivings over thestrals at the time, Silhouette quickly silenced those doubts and trained her hardest to earn her place, including constantly throwing herself into the most dangerous and/or exhausting of routines to show her worthiness, though this did lead to her having to sit out with injuries more often than most.

After four years of loyal service Celestia offered Silhouette a promotion, moving her out of Canterlot itself to be in charge of guard duty on important transport trains; it was there she met her eventual husband, Holiday Road, working as a warehouse worker taking supplies off the train. The two of them began dating after several months of spending their lunch breaks together during shipment days.

When Luna finally returned from her banishment it was decided that Silhouette had proven herself over the years worthy of the position of the Vault Guardian position; while she initially hesitated due to having a family now, Silhouette eventually accepted the position and now divides her time between her duties and trying to be the best parent possible to her children.

Personality: A warm mare with a caring personality, Silhouette has always been something of a "team mother" as the other guards would call it, patching up injuries and looking after the new recruits, giving encouragement when needed and pushing them when they needed that more than a caring word to show their best.

Silhouette tries to keep work and her life as separate as possible; she rarely takes off her helm on duty and never since becoming the Vault Guardian, even her children are unaware of the full extent of her job but that's mostly by necessity due to some of the vaults themselves being top secret, they only know that she works as part of the guard.

Above all Silhouette adores her family; she and Holiday Road have been happily married for over a decade and a half and the two of them fawn over their children to no end. Silhouette is especially close to her eldest son Road Block, who wants to take after his mother and join the royal guard, which Silhouette is happy to help him prepare for as long as he promises to do well in school too.

Current Home: Silhouette currently lives with her family in a manor house provided by the princesses for the pony holding the title of the Vault Guardian, which is as close to Canterlot Castle as the layout of the city will geographically allow.

Miscellaneous: Silhouette has a tattoo which reads Matris Postremo Donarem in small handwriting style text on her left side; this same phrase is engraved into the inside helm of the Armor of the Alicorns. Silhouette got the tattoo when she found the engraving to commemorate her new role.

Name: Holiday Road

Race: Unicorn

Age: 37

Mane: Straw colored, usually kept short and scruffy

Coat: Seafoam Green

Cutie Mark: A globe

Distinguishing Features: Has an unusually sharp horn with a much more defined point than is usually natural.

Gear: Typically little, for his days working the trains he usually had a jack and wrench in case of malfunctions on the doors or other parts of the train.

Specialty: Has experience working around trainlines and due to his experience as having to unload important shipments he has dexterous control over his natural telekinesis, able to use it with great finesse and control on multiple tasks at once; this is very useful around the house as he now uses it.

Weaknesses: Has no combat training of any description unlike his wife and is a pacifist by nature.

Occupation: Formerly a trainline worker, now works from home as a holiday planner for rich Canterlot families.

History: Holiday Road grew up in a poor family in Fillydelphia; the family was close despite the poverty, which was something that Holiday Road continued when he eventually had his own family. Since the family had trouble keeping the money flow high, Holiday Road was required to get a job quite early, landing a job cleaning the local train station at 15 after having lied about his age.

When a job opened up to work as a shipment unloader, which paid much better than a cleaner, Holiday again lied about his age to get the job. He was found out relatively soon by his supervisor but the supervisor agreed to vouch for Holiday since he had proven himself to be rather good at the job and he was willing to work long hours that the other stallions were more reluctant to work, so he continued to work at the old train station unloading luggage and business shipments.

When he turned 19 Holiday was offered to move out to Canterlot to work at their freight train station where he would deal with deliveries directly to and from the castle. He agreed and departed to Canterlot, still sending parts of his paychecks back home to support his family. 

When he was 20 and supervising over a shipment of sculptures for that year's Grand Galloping Gala the stallion met the guard in charge of watching over the delivery, Absent Silhouette. Since the two of them were usually working together as Holiday was in charge of unpacking the shipment while Silhouette was checking it on the crown's behalf, the two of them quickly began spending time together in their off hours; after roughly six months of this Holiday worked up the guts to ask Silhouette on a date, an offer she happily accepted.

The two continued their relationship before marrying just under two years later. Silhouette had also in the meantime sent a large amount of her savings to Holiday's family anonymously; when Holiday found out was when he was convinced Silhouette was the mare he wanted to marry. 

Since getting married Holiday has taken up a different job organising holiday destinations from home on behalf of rich Canterlot families, with help from a business stallion by the name of Fancy Pants in getting started. This new home job not only allows Holiday to finally come off work without being tired but also means he can be a house husband for his and Silhouette's three foals, since Silhouette has to work long hours and cannot work from home in any reasonable fashion.

Personality: Due to his poor upbringing Holiday Road is very non-materialistic and wants for little, much preferring to make new friends or see new places to commit to memory than to get some expensive gift (for this reason Silhouette's birthday and anniversary presents are usually a holiday to some exotic or fancy location rather than something physical, since she knows Holiday will love them). 

Holiday Road learned from his parents to always value your children as highly as you would want to be valued, as such he devotes a great amount of time to not just making sure his children eat properly, behave and do their homework but also to making sure to put time aside to play with them, especially when Silhouette has time off and they can play as a family; trips out to the park are very common in their household.

Holiday is usually a very laid back stallion with an easy going approach to life and a friendly attitude. As could be expected though this vanishes very quickly if his children are insulted or even worse threatened in any way; despite Silhoeutte's status as Vault Guardian, she will insist Holiday is far scarier than her if he feels the need to defend his children.

Miscellaneous: Holiday has a mild case of tourettes syndrome which causes him to have a physical tic of tapping his left rear hoof five times in rhythm. Because of this he sometimes has trouble sleeping.

ObsidianPony wrote:

Name: Absent Silhouette

Approved, with bells on.

ObsidianPony wrote:

Name: Holiday Road

Approved, with bells on.

Name: Ko'tan Kadai

Race: Thestral

Age: 31

Mane: Jet black

Coat: Dark Charcoal

Cutie mark.: Firedrake Head (http://warhammer40k.wikia.com/wiki/Salamanders?file=Salamanders_Banner.jpg)

Extra details that aren't needed but are nice to add: N/A

Distinguishing Features: Kadai has lighter markings around his eyes and muzzle, generally a slow gradient the closer to his eyes/muzzle.

Specialty (eg. special spells, unique powers etc): Kadai specializes in two handed weaponry, where he prefers the battleaxe above all other weapons. Having mastered the two handed battleaxe, his combat prowess is remarkable upon the battlefield.

Weaknesses: The element of surprise and dirty fighting. Kadai expects to fight a fair fight. He finds the battles to be more adequate and fun.. unless when he is made angry. Kadai has a short temper in which could be used against in, in which he becomes rather reckless. He also has a fear of the supernatural. ie: Ghosts

Occupation: Commander of the small mercenary group he had formed called; Aegis.

Gear: Two handed battleaxe, full Nightmare era-plate armor, phoenix blade wing exo (an exo suit that supports golden phoenix feathers fashioned like lethal daggers on the edges of his wings).

History: Ko'tan Kadai was born within a small Nightmare Guard encampment that had a small force of Nightmare Moon's loyal servant soldiers part of the First battalion. However, the encampment had been found by Royal Guard forces, and was razed to the ground by the overwhelming forces. Both of the young Thestral's parents were slaughtered as they tried to put up a futile resistance against such overwhelming odds. Fortunately, the little foal, among with two other younglings, was forced into one of the newest recruits that was being trained; Private Pyriel.

Ten years later:

Kadai had been pressed into the Lunar Guard ranks, as his parents were formerly apart of their faction, it only made sense to raise the young foal with their ways and beliefs. To their surprise, the young foal had showed potential to lead, and to be effective within combat. There was only one problem. That anger.. the anger that the orphan had stored within him was almost uncontrollable. He had been told his parents were killed by the Royal guard. Why would they do that? They would pay. He had sworn to wipe the entire Royal Guard from the face of the world. However, a newly promoted Captain had taken him under their wing. Captain Pyriel began to raise the young foal, and shape that anger as a tool to be directed at his foes, and only his foes. Funnily enough, when given the choice to choose a weapon to train with, the foal had pointed out the two handed battleaxe. From then on, the little foal was to be trained as a Vanguard soldier for his evident brutality.

Fourteen years later:

Ko'tan Kadai had rose through the ranks of the Vanguard, as apart of the Fourth Company, to the rank of Lieutenant. Being a veteran of several campaigns, the stallion began to become infamous with that two handed battle axe. He carved his way through the thick of fights, enjoying the thrill of the hunt, as blood painted his armor, and the looks of shock stared up at him before he cut them down. Upon the battlefield, Kadai was a ball of anger, unleashed by the Lunar guard. Here, he could let his emotions out, and direct them as a tool to smite down his foes.

Present:

After a reckless incident within the Lunar ranks, Kadai was forced out of their faction. Furious, he created his own private military in which he recruited several officers within the Lunar ranks who had stayed by his side and were loyal. Deemed a heretic, and mad with corruption, the former Lunar Lieutenant fled to his home city of Neighagara Falls where he set up his camp of operations where the name Aegis is the new major military faction. Also worth mentioning; He is in an open relationship with a bat ballerina named Uproar, in which he shows the highest amount of affection to. Nobody messes with his Uppy. [/b]

Personality: Kadai is quick tempered, and overzealous. When the stallion is pushed, he will stop at nothing to destroy whatever made him mad. Be it sentient or not. However, there is a completely different side to him. That.. soft chewy core. When one gets close to him, enough to receive his affection, he becomes a soft hearted stallion. Despite his corrupted motives, he will stop at nothing to protect those he loves. He is extremely affectionate, and loves affection..

Current Home: Neighagara Falls

Misc:..He is cuddly, because soft fluffy bat chest.[/b]

KotanKadai wrote:

Name: Ko'tan Kadai

Approved.

Name: Thriamvos

Race: Polemistic Unicorn

Age: 37

Mane: Short, dark rusty color.

Coat: Light, stony grey.

Cutie mark.: A spear crossed over a shield.

Extra details that aren't needed but are nice to add: His eyes are a light shade of orange.

Distinguishing Features: His very tall and muscular stature.

Specialty (eg. special spells, unique powers etc): Thriamvos was born, raised, and still lives as a warrior. He is very physically strong and is great at using his shield as both a defensive and offensive weapon. He is also very good at using any form of melee weaponry, but has only mastered spears and hoof-to-hoof. He also has expert aim when throwing spears or javelins, rarely missing his targets, unless they are moving quickly. The stallion also, since he is a unicorn, has a rather massive mana pool and can negate levitation or telekinesis used on himself. This stallion has also learned a very versatile technique that he calls, rather simply 'Steel Skin'. As the name suggests, it gives his skin steel-like qualities, hardening them to be capable of taking stronger hits and withstanding more than his normal body could.

Weaknesses: Since Thriamvos is a very physical fighter, he never learned any magic beyond telekinesis and charging objects with mana. His only defense against magic is his shield, so magical attacks will still hit him hard. He also has no real way of countering a flying opponent besides throwing his spears at them. Thriamvos also rarely knows when to back down, even having tried to take down dozens of opponents all on his own. While using his Steel Skin ability, Thriamvos is completely incapable of moving the parts that are hardened by the technique. Steel Skin is also a drain on his mana pool, making him have to conserve mana and use the ability sparingly, as well as magic not being defended against as well as physical forces are.

Occupation: Mercenary.

Gear: Thriamvos has two enchanted steel bracers, the left one is enchanted with a storage spell for his shield, the right one is enchanted to be able to create any form of spear out of mana so long as Thriamvos charged it with mana, be it on the spot or charged earlier on. The stallion also has a plumed steel helmet that is enchanted to cast his face in shadows, but allow his eyes to glow from beneath it, purely for cosmetic reasons. As for armor, the stallion only wears a leather belt, sandles, and iron-studded battle skirt.

History: Thriamvos was born in a mountainous country called the Polemistis, a nation known for it's powerful armies and it's extremely tough terrain. Thriamvos was raised as everyone in Polemistis was. He was raised all his life for combat, being taught hand-to-hand and trained to be strong and endurant until age sixteen, when he was given the choice of weapons to use. He chose his shield and spear. After that choice, the next ten years of his life were devoted to mastering everything there was to know about using a shield and spear in tandem. The last two years of that mastery were quite literally in the heat of battle, as another country had decided to declare war, and sent an army in to destroy the Polemistis. And, well, to the Polemistic Population...War and battle are not what they are to others. To these warriors, battle is just their form of party and revels. Thriamvos was no different, he fought and laughed like a demon, working together with his kin as a single, deadly force. Even outnumbered three to one, Polemistis stood firm. After a few years, Thriamvos himself decided to leave his country, and he boarded a ship to Equestria, his thoughts on nothing but the dragons that dwelled there, like he thought about fighting one. A month later, he was in Equestria, and he put his combat skills to use as a Mercenary, and began to travel the country. But he never ran into the type of fighting that he used to revel in, so he ends up bored plenty of his time nowadays.

Personality: Thriamvos is loud, out-going, and always up for a sparring match or brawl. He may be cocky or very confident at times, but only because he is very sure of himself.

Current Home: N/A

Misc: He likes to bake.

BronzeFog wrote:

Name: Thriamvos

Character approved.

Name: Torrential Wave/Tsunami

Race: Unicorn

Age: 21 (Acts like he's 15)

Mane: Cobalt, aquamarine, royal, and sky blue

Coat: A pale blue

Cutie mark.: A group of gems surrounded by water

Extra details that aren't needed but are nice to add: Wave carries a trident on his back named Ariell

Distinguishing Features: The trident on his back and the four silver earrings on his left ear

Specialty (eg. special spells, unique powers etc): Wave specializes in enchanting gems for magical jewlery and also in aquatic magic.

Weaknesses: Childish, goofy, overly playful, sometimes rather annoying / Angry, constantly irritated, sad, lonely

Occupation: Enchanted jewelry shop owner

Gear: His trident, enchanted jewelry and water canteens when there's no water to use.

History: Wave was born into a wealthy family of unicorns in Canterlot, his mother a designer and his father an actor. Regardless of the wealth they had, it never truly mattered to Wave. He wouldn't use his wealth for selfish reasons like other children or adults. He would often spend it on buying food for those less fortunate than himself. His caring nature and cheerful ways touched the hearts of many ponies in Canterlot, including his sister. Wave and his sister were always together and always playing games. One day, when they went on a business trip with their mother to Ponyville, they were playing around near the Everfree forest. Wave thought it'd be fun to play hide and seek inside, so he ran in, his sister close behind. Wave told her to count to ten and ran off, hiding behind a bush. He waited for a little while for his sister to find him but then heard a growling noise. Standing in front of him were a small group of timberwolves ready to attack. Wave's heart stopped at the sight and he screamed, alerting his sister who was  a little ways away. Wave ran quickly to find his sister and instead found himself cornered between a cliff and the pack of wolves. He cowered and waited for them to attack until the sound of wood breaking stopped him, looking up to see his sister trying to fight them all off. Ariel three the wolves at trees and used her magic to throw rocks at them, but more and more came from out of the bushes, more than she could handle. When the wolves began surrounding her, she told Wave to run and get help, that she would be okay. So he ran as fast as he could, running to their mother and telling her what happened. Their mother ran and got a few guards passing by and some willing ponies to come help. As they ran back into the Everfree, they saw the group of wolves biting and clawing at his sister, blood and bruises all over her. They all jumped in and fought off the group, or as many as they could to get his sister out of the way. Soon, they arrived at the hospital and she was quickly taken to the ER, Wave following close behind them, scared and worried about his sister. After hours of waiting, the doctor came back out and looked to the floor in sorrow, shaking his head. The poison from the multiple timberwolves quickly reached her blood, they couldn't get it all out... She passed away that day, and left her family to mourn. But her little brother Wave, who was only 9 at the time, had the worst of it. For the next following months, Wave would simply go to school, come home and lock himself in his room. He would eat, but in very small portions, and he wouldn't speak to anyone. Many had thought the trauma of losing his sister had driven him to contemplating suicide, and many were right. But he would just lay there in his room, staring at the empty bed across from his where his sister would sleep and read him stories, even hold him when he had a bad dream. On the day of his tenth birthday, Wave's parents told him they had a gift for him. Wave finally came out of his room and crawled down the stares solemnly, his eyes bloodshot and his cheeks stained with his tears. When he got to his parents his father held out a shimmering silver trident. He held it in his hooves and looked at it sadly. He didn't thank his parents or even speak, he just walked back up to his room with the weapon in his mouth. He placed it down in his sister's bed and sat back on his. He gazed at the trident and then at the ground. While this was happening, in Wave's head, a being was emerging. From all the built up pain and loneliness that he felt, mixed with all the rage and sadness that he had towards himself. After a couple years, Wave graduated from school at age 12 and went into enchanting, as well as practicing his magic. He studied for years and finally began perfecting his art. He was finally beginning to get over his sister's death and started moving on. But then, late at night while he was finishing up a gem, he heard a voice no different from his own, telling him "You're weak..." And "You could've saved her if you weren't so slow..." Wave grew scared of this voice in his head, walking to the bathroom and splashing water on his face. Looking up however, he saw a pony with a darker coat than his, and a dark glare in his eyes. Ever since then, he would see that same pony whenever he slept, looked in a mirror, or even hear his voice when he was doing his day-to-day activities. Finally, at age 18, Wave's parents bought him a jewelry store, already full of gems and jewelry of all kinds. He quickly got to work and fulfilled orders by the dozens, mainly from mares that would regularly come in and buy four or five items at a time or stallions that wanted to buy a gift for their special somepony. After work, Wave would practice his magic and finally decided to start using his trident, practicing with it in the backyard his family had. A year later, Wave had grown attached to the trident and (Can't remember the word) indented a name on the handle. By it wasn't his name, it was the name of someone he cared for and loved, someone close to his heart. He named the trident Ariel, after his sister.

Personality: Bubbly, silly, joyful, sometimes sad / Angry, annoyed, often irritated or easily irritable, lonely, hates everyone, including himself.

Current Home: Canterlot, but often visits Ponyville to make deliveries to the Carousel Boutique

Misc: When Wave gets lonely, angry, or sad, Tsunami comes out

CloudCrusher wrote:

Name: Torrential Wave/Tsunami

Another heartbreaker. Approved tho.