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toxicpony

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Age : 23
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Name: Bone Bow

Race: Earth pony

Age: 21

Mane: The front of her mane has three spikes and it is cut short at the back, the colour of her mane are a really dark grey almost black with a light blue strip through it.

Coat: Really light ivory

Cutie mark.: Crossbones one is black and the other is white

Extra details that aren't needed but are nice to add: She has a nickname that she hates which is Boner, she is a lesbian, she doesn't sleep much, she had braces till she was 15.

Distinguishing Features: The green coat she always wears, her pink eyes.

Specialty (eg. special spells, unique powers etc): She is really good with a bow, and hoof to hoof (hand to hand) combat,

Weaknesses: She talks to much even in battle, can't stand the cold, a bit slow to protect any part of her body that isn't her face.

Occupation: Royal guard in canterlot.

Gear: A bow with three different arrow types one has a bomb on the end that has a small explosive radius, the other one is a sleep dart like arrow, and the last one is just a normal arrow, and a small knife she keeps on the inside part of her left hoof.

History: Born in Manehattan she grew up with a missing in action dad and a mom who works all day, she learned to take care of herself quickly with no siblings and only one friend she has known for her entire life, she never liked to wander the streets alone to pass the time when she wasn't at school and her mother was at work, so she would spend all her time in the house reading every book, magazine, and newspapers they had, when she got to her dad's old books she found many books about self-defense, she read through all the ones she could find. After that, she read them again and again, when her mother came home she asked her if she could take self-defense classes? her mother looked a bit shocked but said yes,  when she started she was top of the class because of how much she knew before taking the class, as she grew up she wanted to take more and more defiant types of marshall art classes after about a year of taking the classes she got her cutie mark. She got into archery from one of her new friends she met at her classes and after a few years, she was offered a job at the castle, on her first day she got her nickname (which is a mild NSFW story) it has been about two years now since she started working there.

Personality: Outgoing, supportive, quick-tempered, broad-minded, honest when she needs to be even if it puts her in danger, witty when she is around other ponies, can be a bit touchy about her nickname.

Current Home: Canterlot.

Misc: Her best friend is named Double Shield, she hates the taste of alcohol.
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toxicpony wrote:
Name: Bone Bow
Extra details that aren't needed but are nice to add: She has a nickname that she hates which is Boner, she is a lesbian, she doesn't sleep much, she had braces till she was 15.

...a lesbian nicknamed Boner. I should approve this character based on nothing more than that. Very Happy

I'm fascinated to know the NSFW story, but it's not important. Character approved.
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Location : Here and there, Teleporting all about :)

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Name: Delta Nine
Race: Hybridized Dragon turned into Cyborg Mecha
Age: Before the Transformation he was 25 years old but now he has only been around a week as this mecha.
Mane: Lacks a mane
Armor plates and synthetic flesh: His armor plates are mostly red with blue highlights showing off his accentuated form graced by the plates forming a barrier between him and whatever that would like to cause him harm. His synthetic flesh is very similar in flexibility and texture to real flesh yet it is more protective than what regular flesh has to go through, his flesh is lovely stone grey with white highlights across where normally bone would be on a regular person.
Cutie mark.: N/A
Extra details that aren't needed but are nice to add: He is fully functional in any standard or meaning of the word. His body allows him exceptional strength, agility, and connections to greater Intelligence when needed but lacks personal experience ever since his untimely half death. He can't remember much save for broken memories relating to senses and his speech. He is armed with Magical weapons but most of the time he will try to resolve a situation peacefully if he can.
Distinguishing Features: Bearing much similarity to his previous form before it was utterly shattered, his Mech body is comprised to look like a dragon standing on its back legs. Being made of mostly Magical and natural materials makes him stand out thanks to the housing of his new draconian body but mostly he retains a very intimidating appearance to those who doesn’t know who he is. His eyes shine a deep red that scares most away simply out of fear for what he could do. Other than his sharp features defined by the armor plates of his body he looks like a force of nature that could easily rip someone’s head off but behind his cold unforgiving exterior is something warm, almost life like. Standing a proud nine feet tall, towering over most. He has four horns, two of which are in a U shape facing forward
Specialty (eg. special spells, unique powers etc): He has been “programed/brainwashed” with the information and experience of how to handle, “High Risk” scenarios. Dealing with threats that might cause harm to large amount of people or mass destruction in a “Contact Lost” situation. Best trained as a heavy shock trooper.
Weaknesses: Magic has been always a weakness for him, his body was not designed to handle the energies that come with it to the point of causing him to even shut down. He is most vulnerable to ice and cold magic which causes his flexible carbon nano tubing to freeze up stopping him in place. Fire does much the same since it disrupts his ability to control the systems he is linked to.
Occupation: Bounty hunter/Cowboy
Gear: Most of the weapons and armaments attached to him he wouldn’t use under normal condition only really his fists since he would rather try to solve it more peacefully ever since his mind was given back to him
History: Under the guise of a secret project the original dragon whose name had been Dethomire had been critically injured in an accidental test of a new magical weapon. Backfiring and catching the dragon in an explosion he was quickly rushed to a hospital. His wounds were too critical so his body had died but a scientist had a different idea. Constructing a body of metal to house a mind and the corresponding organs to make the ultimate soldier yet the princess had been told something far different as an attempt to reconstruct a person as an act of mercy. Of course when the operations began to take hold the dragon was wracked with all kinds of pain and problems the made the integration into the body all the harder. Eventually a few mental blocks were placed on his mind erasing much of his memory and personality in that single instant but it achieved the scientist’s goal of creating the first housing for the organs. The dragon’s mind mostly gone but something inside rejected the programing and all the brainwashing, squirming free to express itself as he went rogue. To this day he has been recognized as a free being trying to pick up the pieces of what had been a life before hand.
Personality: Inquisitive, blunt, expressive… all qualities he was able to keep but more recently he has began to express a friendly attitude towards others.
Current Home: Here and there trying to find a home.
Misc: The mech dragon is a great lover.
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The Adept wrote:
Name: Delta Nine

Approved. Smile
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ThatBlazingPony

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Age : 24
Location : Cumbria, England

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Name: Wildfire Blaze
Race: Cyborg Avian (Avians are basically humans with feathered wings.)
Age: 25
Hair: Her hair is cut in a style similar to DJ PON-3's style, but the main colour is orange and the secondary colour is black.
Skin and Clothes: Her skin is a regular flesh colour and is fairly smooth. Her clothes consist of a white short sleeved crop top, a black leather sleeveless jacket that is cut to the same length as her top, a pair of with short-shorts, black leather knee-high boots with 6-inch heels, and orange leather fingerless gloves. She also stands at roughly 5'10".
Cutie mark: An orange version of the Hot Wheels circle flame logo, positioned on her hips.
Extra details that aren't needed but are nice to add: N/A
Distinguishing Features: She has robotic wings that are armour plated, with the "feathers" being a light grey in colour. Her purple-blue eyes are robotic, and she has her right arm and legs also being robotic, though you can't readily tell as they are covered with synthetic skin.
Speciality (e.g.. special spells, unique powers etc...): She's very good at fixing and creating electronic components as she built her cybernetic enhancements herself. She is also an expert at fixing up internal-combustion engine powered vehicles, having worked on them before being taken to the Factory.
Weaknesses: The electronics in her cybernetic enhancements don't react well to water, a lot of electricity (more than the 3 A, 12 V charge running through the wires), and magic. Thusly, she tries to steer clear of them at all times.
Occupation: Former Overseer at the human version of The Rainbow Factory. Now she works as a hired mercenary.
Gear: Two SMGs that look similar to the BO2 peacekeeper, but the barrels are shorter, have a colour scheme similar to her's, and have 20 30-round straight magazines each.
History: Before she was taken to The Rainbow Factory, she worked on internal-combustion engine powered vehicles, developing cybernetics. However, she was kidnapped when she was 20 years old and tortured before and after work at the Factory for 2 years straight, sending her into insanity. Her right arm, and both her legs, were damaged serverly, and she used the cybernetics that she had been developing before being taken to The Rainbow Factory to replace her broken limbs. She then worked there for a further 3 years, extracting spectra from helpless people to be made into rainbows, soon advancing to the role of Overseer after the first year after being tortured. She then left the Factory in search of other work and is now currently a hired mercenary. She came to this world through a magical anomaly from a spell that a mage used to get rid of her. It turned out well for him as he never saw or heard from her again, but not for Wild as she found herself surrounded by cartoon pastel coloured ponies. Her ultimate goal is to get back to her home realm and get revenge on the mage for sending her to this hideous realm.
Personality: From living and working in the Factory for 5 years and being tortured before and after work for 2, she has become mentally insane, loving the site of death, blood and gore, more so when she is dishing it. She can also be quite rude sometimes, when annoyed or provoked, however, she is a genuinely nice person when you get to know her.
Current Home: N/A
Misc: I'm new here. Just joined. >u<


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Name:Ink Shadow Soul

Race: Unicorn

Age: 23

Mane: dirty blonde with black streak cut short and covering left eye.

Cutie mark.: Open book with quill poised over it and a lightning bolt and writing on the open pages across from each other.

Extra details that aren't needed but are nice to add: usually wears a duster, has a pair of colt fourty fours strapped to his sides, a bow and quiver over his left shoulder and a sword strapped to his back with daggers hidden in his sleeves.
Distinguishing Features: Scar in the shape of a dragon's claws over right eye, blood red tribal markings and what look like blood red streaks from claws on back and sides. Tail is similar to mane in color and has faux leather braided through it. Draonic pupils similar to nightmare moon.

Specialty: Jack of all trades but slightly better magic than hand to hand combat.

Weaknesses: has trouble seeing in brightly lit areas, has a bad right hind leg that slows him down, no hand to hand experience despite lots of weapon experience, bright lights,

Occupation: Writer and Mercenary

Gear:
Duster, Bastard Sword, knives, bow and arrows, pair of twin colt fourty fours, rifle, enchanted spell book

History: Ink was originally a regular unicorn with a penchant for getting into trouble. He was very research oriented, and avoided conflict if at all possible. He was out on an expedition where he gained all of his marks and scars from fighting alongside a tribe of marezons who released him for helping them with their dragon problem. He later returned to equestria and settled down in ponyville. He writes stories about his adventures and lectures at schools and universities and is known to go out hunting trouble makers in the badlands and areas where the guard are not as numerous.

Current Home: Ponyville

Misc: Ink has a stetson he wears that many sometimes mistake him for others because of. He's also got a theory on alicorn ascension that he has never tested. Ink is a master swordsman but unarmed combat he could be bested by a well trained foal if not for the size and strength difference. He's a master marksman but he can be easily blinded by the light so he wears sunglasses alongside his stetson.


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ThatBlazingPony wrote:
Name: Wildfire Blaze
Misc: I'm new here. Just joined. >u<

I could sort of tell, meaning no offense.

The problem is, your character is completely out of the canon universe in which this group operates which means you need to find a way to bring her to Equestria. You also fail to define what this Factory is, and how she became a cybernetic avian.

Also, a random technical detail that I'm not going to really call you on, but just wanted you to be aware of: voltage is well and good but tasers fire 10,000 volts and they're nonlethal. The thing that really and truly matters is amperage; low-amp high-volt is relatively harmless whereas high-amp low-volt can be very dangerous. I won't make a deal of this, just geeking out on you a little. Smile

Anyway, please expand the history and explain how she came to Equestria.
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Jake Shadow Wings wrote:
Name:Ink Shadow Soul

Seems neat. How'd he get the dragon eye, out of curiosity?

Jake Shadow Wings wrote:
Misc: Ink has a stetson he wears that many sometimes mistake him for others because of. He's also got a theory on alicorn ascension that he has never tested. Ink is a master swordsman but unarmed combat he could be bested by a well trained foal if not for the size and strength difference. He's a master marksman but he can be easily blinded by the light so he wears sunglasses alongside his stetson.

This is approved, although I would like to know about the dragon eye.
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ThatBlazingPony

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PostSubject: Re: Brand New OC Character Thread 3   Brand New OC Character Thread 3 - Page 3 Icon_minitimeFri Mar 04, 2016 1:38 pm

DualThrone wrote:
ThatBlazingPony wrote:
Name: Wildfire Blaze
Misc: I'm new here. Just joined. >u<

I could sort of tell, meaning no offense.

The problem is, your character is completely out of the canon universe in which this group operates which means you need to find a way to bring her to Equestria. You also fail to define what this Factory is, and how she became a cybernetic avian.

Also, a random technical detail that I'm not going to really call you on, but just wanted you to be aware of: voltage is well and good but tasers fire 10,000 volts and they're nonlethal. The thing that really and truly matters is amperage; low-amp high-volt is relatively harmless whereas high-amp low-volt can be very dangerous. I won't make a deal of this, just geeking out on you a little. Smile

Anyway, please expand the history and explain how she came to Equestria.

Edited. And the name of the factory saysit all, if you've read the fanfic.
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Name: Cora
Race: Thestral Demon
Age: ?
Mane: Short Night Blue
Coat: Gray
Cutie mark.: none
Extra details that aren't needed but are nice to add:
Distinguishing Features: Liquid gold tribal tattoos that cover her body.


Specialty (eg. special spells, unique powers etc):
Shadow Form - She can transform into a cold, black smoke that smells sweet and inviting, rather than coarse and suffocating.

Liars Tongue - Has the ability to influence lying through suggestion. Can also tell easily when someone is lying, either to her or someone else.

Snake Tattoo - Can summon golden serpents from her tattoos to attack her enemies.

Deceptive Touch - A touch that can cause one to begin to hallucinate and become disoriented.

Immortal Skin - As a demon, she cannot be killed by any normal mortal. However, powers are forming to remove her from the mortal plane once again.

Weaknesses: Susceptible to some wards against demons. Also must keep her word if she enters a ritualistic oath.

Occupation: Demon Goddess of lies and deceit

Gear: Two long, serrated daggers

History:
Cora is the Tenebrisian demon of lies, related to Thestral culture. She was once a prominent demon, with control over the bodies of nearly all in the plane, until a shift in power that caused the demons of Tenebris to loose power. For eons after that she stuck to the shadows, biding her time until the perfect opportunity arose to regain some kind of power. And finally, now that the world gates are open, she can travel the planes and perhaps take control of one to spread her chaotic lies across it.

While her sister and brother demons sat in the TenebrisIan underworld, she was gathering resources, such as beasts to do her bidding and wealth to tempt the mortals. Her fellows do not know of her plans, or her blatant theft of their resources and if caught, will likely be punished severily.

Personality:
Cora has her own goals, and is more than willing to step on anyone to make them a reality. Though she may state that her goal is to control life on a plane, or destroy a world, it is difficult to tell if these are true.

Current Home: Mortal realm
Misc:
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ThatBlazingPony wrote:
Edited. And the name of the factory says it all, if you've read the fanfic.

I haven't read the fanfic, nor should a backstory require someone to have read a, frankly, rather grisly fanfic that is simply not to everyone's tastes, to understand the backstory. If you wish to include the Rainbow Factory in your backstory, it need to be explained just enough for someone to know what it is and why it's significant.
Also, if your backstory is in proper sequential order, it seems that you're saying that your character was tortured at the Rainbow Factory for years and then was sent to Equestria.
Additionally, you don't explain the cybernetics beyond the fact that she made them herself. Why would she do this? Moreover, why would she then undergo radical surgery to cut away her healthy body to replace it with mechanical imitations?

I really have no objections to anything about this character, Blazing, outside the fact that her backstory has some holes that make it impossible for me to simply give it an approval stamp. You need to fill in the gaps or I can't give it an approve. I'm sorry.
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Alpha P wrote:
Name: Cora

So what you're saying is that we're about to hear the legend of Cora. Wink

Character approved, although when you have a moment, I have a thought about the bound-by-oath thing.
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Hopefully her bio is now good enough to be accepted. >u<
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ThatBlazingPony wrote:
Hopefully her bio is now good enough to be accepted. >u<

Character approved, hun. Smile
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Very Happy

Yay!
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Name Twisted Fang “Silver”

Race: Changeling (However due to his albinism his carpis is silver not black and his eyes a deep red which often unsettles other changelings and pony’s )

Age: 28 years

Mane: Grey but put into a braided ponytail

Coat: Silver

Cutie mark.: N/a

Distinguishing Features: albinism, twisted canine tooth on right side

Specialty (eg. special spells, unique powers etc): Very skilled with long rifles (such as snipers and DMR’s), Has training in fallen cizar style of zebra martial arts

Weaknesses: Has very little knowledge of magic and can only do the most mundane of tasks with it (Such as/Levatation up to 20 pounds/ basic chageling shapeshifting but can only change into zebras not griffions or ponys/batponys )

Occupation: Caravan guard/merc

Gear: Hunting rifle, combat knife, Ghillie suit, and pip buck

History: Silver grew up in a zebra encampment in hoofington where he had learned most of what he knows. He was sold to them by slavers as an exotic slave but seeing as he was physically fit and very strong of will they decided to instead train him as an infiltrator but seeing as he was only able to morph into a zebra it was unsuccessful but for better or worse he was touched by the star maiden and cursed

Personality: He is nice to most when the situation presents itself however is somewhat racist against ghouls seeing as he was put into slavery by them

Current Home: He has not had a home besides the encampment but often travels with caravans and sleeps with them

Misc: Unknown at current moment
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Ursus Night wrote:
Name Twisted Fang “Silver”

Character approved for FoE RPs.
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Name:Gar’vak Gro’oul

Race: Changeling

Age: 184 years

Mane: no mane nor hair.

Coat: dark black carapace

Cutie mark.:N/a

Distinguishing Features: Very very large, 4 arms two on the inner torso and much smaller and two outer much larger and muscular arms, flat and armored head, a long and thick reptile like tail

Specialty (eg. special spells, unique powers etc): Very large and heavily armored carapace, inhuman strength (enough to tear a large tree out of the ground), Fiercely intelligent, Acid ball (is able to spit up a large ball of acid to corrode most objects or units)

Weaknesses:Has no magic what-so-ever and the horn on his head is merely due to his breed,is able to be manipulated by someone with a stronger will than his very easly and this has let to many problems in his extended life, is rather slow in movement (not strikes) as he is heavily armored, wings are very sensitive and are hurt at any rough treatment, only capable of basic speech however putting together full sentences is beyond it at this current point.


Occupation: Was originally bred for a full scale siege on canterlot, however was deemed a waste or resources and banished seeing as how long it lived and how much it consumed

Gear:N/a

History: This behemoth of a changeling was bred to be on the front lines of the changeling invasion breaking down walls while controlled by the hivemind it was meant to tear canterlot down by the foundations however it was deemed that it was using too much of the already scarce, and valuable resources. They tried to kill it using normal changeling warriors however it was too resourceful and powerful for 3 entire squadrons to kill. They sent it away with the hive mind forcing it to leave peacefully by smothering its will after many years of living in the everfree it emerges from the forests to seek a new fate that above a primitive animal

Personality: gruff and short, attempts to be kind but is often misunderstood

Current Home: Everfree forest

Misc: Has a burning hate for its own kind and will often attack other changeling without cause unless calmed by a trusted pony reference picture:http://img03.deviantart.net/92af/i/2014/244/5/c/changeling_defiler_by_keilink-d7xj4s2.png
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Ursus Night wrote:
Name:Gar’vak Gro’oul

Approved.
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Name: Clear Skies
Race: Android - Plane
Age: 2 years
Mane: N/A
Coat: Shiny, steel, and flexible.
Cutie mark.: N/A
Extra details that aren't needed but are nice to add: In place of a tail, she has a fixed plane tail. She also has fixed plane wings off her shoulders, and a propeller that covers her mouth and nose like a mask. If her propeller is off, she has a working jaw with a speaker in the back. While her wings are definitely steel, her body is made of a synthetic materiel designed to look and feel like normal skin. It has sensors that act like nerves that can be manually adjusted by Clear Sky's internal AI, which is housed in her head.
Futuristic: She loses the propeller in favor of a jet in her tail, and instead gains a speed cap.
Distinguishing Features: A visor with responsive eye holograms block her camera. She also has two armor-plated radio transponders where her 'ears' should be. Specialty (eg. special spells, unique powers etc): She flies faster than average, is capable of processing information quickly, and generally has lighter gun loads, though she can carry a small bomb load clutched to her chest.
No-Combat RPs: She is in a perpetual state of disarmament, though she still weighs a pretty penny and goes fast. This is called 'Recon mode.'
Futuristic RPs: She has a machine gun mounted in a compartment just under her nose, and is capable of carrying missile loads on her wings. She also retains her ability to dive bomb.
Weaknesses: She's electronic, so EMPs will ground her and make her fritzy. Also, her flight is incredibly load compared to Pegasi flight. Her armor weak points are (of course) her control surfaces, any explosive on board, and her head.
Occupation: Reconnaissance/Fighter
Gear:
Normal: 20 mm cannons
Futuristic: .50 caliber machine gun, at least a balanced load of air-to-air missiles.
History:
A professor walks into the room, looking across his disinterested classroom, dimming the lights. He sighs, "Today, class, we're doing things a little differently. We have a special guest." The classroom shifts a bit, confused as there was nobody there. Radio static comes from the professor's pocket, slightly muffled.

"Professor, my wings will not fit through this door."

He sighs, "You'll just have to tilt them, Sky. We haven't figured out a reliable method of bending them yet."

"Yes professor." The android gave it a good attempt, and got inside, but also managed to break the door frame. "You asked me to come, professor?" Her propeller hung around her neck like goggles. The professor nods and gestures to the class, "Well, just like we talked about. Tell our students here your story."

Nodding, she bashfully rubbed her shoulder. "Well, ummm... hi! I'm... ohh, do we really have to do this?"

"Just... dampen your personality filters or something."

She shakes her head no and looks at the class. "Hello, I am Android 0132, designation 'Clear Sky.' I am a military assault and reconnaissance fighter project from Ponewing, developed to conserve 'pilot intuition' factors while saving lives. An unstallioned craft. A... slightly outdated model." She blushes, "I was developed in two phases: a birthing phase and a construction phase. Both occured simultaneously. Ponewing factories handeld the construction phase, building and designing my model, while Celestia Labs developed and produced my AI chip." She taps her visor. "It is located just below my bifocal cameras. If you will note your tablets, my basic specs have been declassified for further study. You may access them from the Ponewing website. I flew short-ranged missions with varying success, until a very critical moment in a mission. While I'm not allowed to speak much on that, it was determined that certain abilities established that my model's destruction may be akin to another pony's life. I was reclassified as a lifeform, and have been given a new mission to learn and establish myself as a person! Umm, was that good enough professor?"

"Yes, Miss Skies. Thank you for your time." He cringes as she tries to leave through the same door, and causes a new set of holes.

Personality: Naive, loves to learn, and bashful. She is very susceptible to social aggression (bullying.)

Futuristic: Having learned social and cultural norms, she is self-confident though a bit oblivious and still bashful.

Current Home: Nicker's Air Field, 5 km outside of Maresdale

Misc:

Her fuel and oil ports are located where other ponies might have a different set of equipment for evacuating waste products. Her oil port is stacked atop her fuel port.

Futuristic:

Clear Sky is actually an AI chip inside of her body, meaning she can outlast her hardware through preservation of her programming. As such, she is technically immortal, especially inside of the EMP-hardened casing protecting her from outright dying on contact with magnetism. However, that also means that she is very, very easy to kill with the right tools.

    When Applicable!!
She has a special set of fuel and oil ports and filters that allow her to have... special and intimate relations with others, though she is incapable of reproduction.


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Dawnpath wrote:
Name: Clear Skys

Adorable, and approved.
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(So, there was a bit of a mistake on my part last time concerning me accidentally posting my character thing on a closed thread.....I'm hoping this is the right one because i don't feel like making a fool of myself again, haha.) (I apologize if this is a bit confusing, I can always fix or remove things that don't make sense or can explain things if need be.)

Name: Thompson (or Better Days)
Race: Unicorn
Age: (I'm going off human years :/) bout 36 years old (or 28)
Mane: Dark grey
Coat: Light grey
Cutie mark: none (or a black coffee mug)
Extra details that aren’t needed but are nice to add: his eyes are light grey, does that count?
Distinguishing Features: he's a monochromatic pony in a colorful world, I think that'd stand out pretty well.
Specialty (eg. special spells, unique powers etc): he has a good memory and powerful magic, when determined.
Weaknesses: his magic is weak when he doesn't believe in himself. (Thompson) in order to cover up insecurities, who acts overly confident which can make him seem like an asshole sometimes.
Occupation: either canterlot or ponyville
Gear: when its cold he wears a brown jacket with wool lining, dark brown beanie, and a red scarf and when dressing fancy he wears a black tie. Otherwise, he doesn't wear anything.
History: depends on which version of him we're talking about, there's pony (better days) and not so pony (Thompson). I guess I'll just briefly explain both. Better Days: for a long time he hasn't slept well, ever since he could first remember he'd lay awake at night unable to fall asleep until a few minutes before he needs to wake up. He developed a horrid caffeine addiction that his life almost revolves around and now he's almost completely dependent on coffee to get him through the day. He goes to a musical performance in canterlot where he meets a young stallion named Picardy Third, who composes music for a living. They become close and Better Days moves in with Picardy Third. They have a father son relationship, the end. Thompson: (oh boy, I'm going to sound crazy explaining this one...) Thompson is a shapeshifting lizard person from a post-war future. There was a war between changeling and pony that led to the lizard people taking over, enslaving ponies, and, in general, messing up the world. Long story short, Thompson becomes a sorta abolitionist for the ponies and saves two pegasi (a mother and her child) who were going to die. The mother soon falls ill and dies so Thompson raises the child, named Ben, until the foal is taken away and Thompson gets arrested for holding onto an endangered species. Crazy antics ensure, Thompson gains the ability to shape shift and do magic, he goes into the past to prevent the pony's downfall, the end.
Personality: Better Days: is like that tired father who's just trying to do the best for his kids but can't seem do things right since he's always tired.....basically it. Thompson: is that fun loving father who's extremely irresponsible and has to be watched all the time. His over confidence can get on every pony's nerves and he can be a bit blunt sometimes, but he's a loveable idiot, least I think so.
Current Home: (Thompson) practically anywhere (Better Days) Canterlot
Misc: (nothing really :/)
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TMIBRico wrote:
Name: Thompson (or Better Days)

This is a jumbled mess. First, these are two different characters and each one needs their own sheet. Second, the extraneous comments (like asking "does that count?") are distracting and sort of take away from the sheet. Third... I can't give these characters a fair shake until they each have their own sheets and I can effectively separate each character's histories, powers, appearance, etc and judge them individually. Give me one sheet for Better Days and one sheet for Thompson (each in their own posts) and we can proceed.
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(So sorry for the mess I posted earlier, I removed the Better Days stuff (not really sure why I brought him up in the first place, that was dumb of me) and mistakes I found. Better Days most likely won't receive a sheet in the future because he was sorta just a thing that was supposed to remain an inside joke between me and a friend......once again, so sorry for the confusion, that was my mess.)

Name: Thompson
Race: Unicorn
Age: (I'm going off human years) about 36 years old
Mane: Dark grey
Coat: Light grey
Cutie mark: none
Extra details that aren’t needed but are nice to add: his eyes are light grey
Distinguishing Features: he's a monochromatic pony in a colorful world
Specialty (eg. special spells, unique powers etc): he has a good memory and powerful magic, when determined.
Weaknesses: his magic is weak when he doesn't believe in himself and in order to cover up insecurities, who acts overly confident which can make him seem like an asshole sometimes.
Occupation: ponyville
Gear: when its cold he wears a brown jacket with wool lining, dark brown beanie, and a red scarf and when dressing fancy he wears a black tie. Otherwise, he doesn't wear anything.
History: Thompson is a shapeshifting lizard person from a post-war future. There was a war between changeling and pony that led to the lizard people taking over, enslaving ponies, and, in general, messing up the world. Long story short, Thompson becomes a sorta abolitionist for the ponies and saves two pegasi (a mother and her child) who were going to die. The mother soon falls ill and dies so Thompson raises the child, named Ben, until the foal is taken away and Thompson gets arrested for holding onto an endangered species. Crazy antics ensure, Thompson gains the ability to shape shift and do magic, he goes into the past to prevent the pony's downfall, the end.
Personality: can seem like a dumb pony who is detached from reality at times and can be a bit hard to get along with, but can get serious when duty calls and can be the fatherly type.
Current Home: mostly ponyville

(I hope this is better, if it's not, I'll try to fix it again but I tried to focus on what you pointed out....sorry again, my mess.)
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Name: Blueberry Twist

Race: Unicorn

Age: 28

Mane: Royal Blue

Coat: Teal

Cutie mark: A slice of cake

Extra details that aren’t needed but are nice to add:

Distinguishing Features:

Specialty (eg. special spells, unique powers etc): Has a bit of chaotic magic imbued in
her. This almost always manifests as cakes dropping on the heads of nearby ponies.

Weaknesses: She has very little control of her magic. Anything more than simple levitation tends to end in cake. Cake everywhere.

Occupation: Baker, or at least she thinks she’d make a good baker if her cakes would end up anywhere but on ponies’ faces. She also likes to think she is a good “Problem Solver.” Don’t believe her.

Gear: She keeps a sapphire amulet with her, as it is the only thing she brought with her.

History: Blueberry wasn’t always a pony. She’ll tell of a time when she was a human being named Jaden. She lived with an old childhood friend of hers, named Marcus. The two would often travel around, looking for some adventure in their everyday life. They were always looking to see what the world had in store for them next.

During one trip, they had bought matching ruby and sapphire amulets from an antique store. There were text engravings on the amulets, but they didn’t know what it said. The owner claimed they were magical, but they were missing a third piece to unlock it. When they asked the owner about what the magic was or where the third piece was, he shrugged and said that he didn’t know. Still, they bought the amulets anyway because they looked cool.

On a much later trip, they visited an old museum which showcased supposedly magical artifacts from history, such as a cursed dress, an enchanted cabinet, and an old witch's cauldron. While Jaden called bull on the cauldron, she noticed Marcus had found an amulet not unlike the ones they had, but with emeralds instead.

Curious, they talked to the curator about the amulet. He told them a story about three travelers from another realm who seemed to wield magic powers, each wearing an amulet. Jaden showed their amulets to the curator, who confirmed that they were the amulets of the other two travelers. He then translated the engravings on the three amulets, saying that if they said it in front of a mirror, then they would be able to see the realm the travelers came from. Of course, it was all myths and legends, but they were still curious about if any of it was true.

So the two, being the curious adventurers they were, tried it out in a nearby mirror on display. The mirror itself was said to be magic as well. Something about always leading one home. It was supposedly broken though, with a crack running right down the middle of it. Marcus and Jaden repeated what the curator had told them. To their surprise, the mirror’s image shifted into what looked like… floating buildings? Chocolate rain? As the two humans stood there, completely stumped at what they saw, a strange creature that looked like a conglomerate of many other creatures popped right up in front of their faces, repaired the mirror, and dragged them both into it, remarking about how “this was the perfect chance to cause more chaos.” Though, to the creature’s dismay, the window closed as soon as they were dragged in.

Jaden and Marcus passed out, when they awoke, the floating buildings and chocolate rain was gone, and in its place was a simple village populated by what looked to be colorful equines. One look at each other and they saw they were equines too. Jaden had become a light blue unicorn mare. A unicorn of all creatures. Of course, Marcus had it even worse, being turned into a bright pink pegasus mare. Mare, as in female. It took Jaden some time to calm her friend down after that realization. Once they got that sorted out, the two made their way into the village.

While they were looking around, they were stopped by what looked like pony knights in bright gold armor. These knights were apparently not to happy to see them, and demanded they come with them to see some sort of princesses. Why not a Queen? They never got an answer to that.

Upon meeting the princesses, the two were accused of being agents for someone named Discord. They pleaded innocent and told their story of how they got here, showing the amulets they were still wearing. Upon seeing that Princess Celestia told them a tale about an ancient wizard who sent three ponies on an expedition to another world. They never returned. The amulets belonged to those ponies.

Celestia dropped the accusations, but still pointed out the two had chaos magic within them and she couldn’t purge it without potentially harming them. So she offered them a place to stay while they got used to their new bodies. An apartment just outside the castle. Seeing no other alternative, they accepted. They also were given new names to go with their Equestrian citizenship. Jaden chose the name Blueberry Twist and Marcus chose Strawberry Breeze.

It was at this point Blueberry learned she could do magic, so she tried it. All that happened was that a cake fell on a nearby guard’s head. She tried a simple levitation spell and managed to levitate a book. Seeing how that worked without cake, she tried a different spell. That ended up completely burying Celestia in cake, much to Strawberry’s amusement. Blueberry apologized profusely, but all she got in return was some satisfied munching sounds from inside the cake.

Personality: The level-headed and rational one of the two, she prefers to wait and think things out before going. She also keeps Strawberry from doing stupid things. Most of the time anyway. She’s cautious, and can be a bit stubborn about it sometimes, but usually her curiosity keeps her going.

Current Home: Canterlot

Misc: I seem to have a lot of characters that are involved with dimensional travel. Oh well, it gives me a bit more creativity with backstories.

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Name: Strawberry Breeze (reboooooot)

Race: Pegasus

Age: 27

Mane: Yellow with pink highlights

Coat: Pink

Cutie mark: Strawberries in the wind

Extra details that aren’t needed but are nice to add:

Distinguishing Features:

Specialty (eg. special spells, unique powers etc): She constantly emits a soothing aroma of strawberries. The scent gets stronger or weaker based on her mood.

Weaknesses: She hates how the scent seems to attract stallions.

Occupation: Unemployed, though sometimes goes of on adventures with Blueberry.

Gear: A ruby amulet, like the one Blueberry has.

History: I’m not repeating the whole damn thing. It’s pretty much the same as Blueberry’s since they were together the whole time.

Personality: Rash and headstrong, she charges blindly into adventure, often having to be held back by Blueberry. She’s developed a dislike of stallions after they keep hitting on her. Blueberry finds irony in this, seeing as how Strawberry used to be a dude.

Current Home: Canterlot

Misc: In early concepts, she was originally the pilot of the Bardis before I came up with Sunshine’s character.

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