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PostSubject: Re: Brand New OC Character Thread 3   Mon Dec 28, 2015 7:39 am

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Name: Helena Wisher

Yay, kitteh! ='^.^'=
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PostSubject: Re: Brand New OC Character Thread 3   Mon Dec 28, 2015 10:18 am

Name: Riese

Race: Magic ritual by-product (looks like a giant earth pony)

Age: Looks to be in the low 20's, but has only been 'alive' for 3 years

Mane: Kept short and somewhat styled, silvery in color.

Coat: Light red

Cutie mark.: A white crystal surrounded by a violent looking purple tempest.

Distinguishing Features: First and foremost would be Riese's size, as she stands a full head taller than a two story house.

Specialty (eg. special spells, unique powers etc): Riese's strong for her size, and given that she's already a giant, she's exceptionally stronger than most ponies even when magically enhanced. Riese's other key point is she cancels out magic. Not drained or dispelled, but full on erased. Everything from the active magic of a spell in action, to the passive magic that lingers in almost everything, to even enchantments placed on items. Even a magically erected anti-magic zone will be torn apart by Riese's presence.

Weaknesses: For all the good Riese's magical cancellation can do, it also prevents any beneficial magic from helping her. Healing, shielding, even mass teleporting are completely out of the question for the young giantess. Also, for all her strength and physical power, Riese has pretty limited combat prowess coupled with an overall limited amount of general knowledge from simply not being around all that long. She doesn't even fully comprehend what magic is, or that she cancels it.

Occupation: None

Gear: Nothing

History: Riese's story begins a bit after the end of the events in the thread Truly Evil. The quick summary version is a villain by the name of Sin Ester stole an ancient artifact that had sealed away an even older evil. Sin tried to release this calamity, but was stopped before the ritual could be completed and as such Riese came into existence as a by-product of the failed ritual and the already built up energy.

When she woke up, Riese began a lengthy trial and error process of learning about the new world she found herself in, and the many things that inhabited it. Quite a few times, she would have been in considerable trouble had it not been for her sheer size and power. Over time she inevitably ran into regular ponies, and what would be expected happened. Screams and panic followed by running away or trying to chase her away, though when her attackers found all their magic gone, they quickly turned tail and ran for it. Not every contact with ponies (or other races) resulted in this, but it was definitely the majority of cases and over time it worked into a general kind of distrust of ponies. She couldn't however deny that these little ones managed to make all kinds of neat and several tasty things, so she still occasionally offered her services in exchange for food or drink.

Personality: Despite being a giant Riese's a little shy, a little paranoid, can be seen sporting a melancholic expression often, and is rather lonely. Though there's a hope and longing for companionship that she doesn't even fully understand and sometimes branches into envy.

Current Home: None

Misc: Riese is completely oblivious to her origins and why she is the way she is both physically and power-wise.
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PostSubject: Re: Brand New OC Character Thread 3   Thu Dec 31, 2015 5:09 am

Gonna try something new. Mind if I play a monster race?

Name: Cobalt

Race: Gemlin (subterranean biped that feeds on rocks and other minerals, such as gems) Reference pic: http://img04.deviantart.net/d981/i/2013/337/d/c/day_2___sableye_by_ashteritops-d6wofvj.png

Age: 10

Coat: His skin is covered in coarse, dark purple hair.

Distinguishing Features: His bipedal form, gem-like eyes, sharp teeth and claws.

Specialty (eg. special spells, unique powers etc): As a creature adapted to living underground, he has amazingly strong teeth and claws that let him easily burrow through and consume rocks and gems. He also has tough skin and can see even in pitch black conditions. However, his particular specialty is his speed and agility, making him an expert at stealth.

Weaknesses: His large eyes are sensitive to light, and sudden or overpowering lights can leave him dazzled and disoriented. Mentally, he's still just a kid, lacking in experience and prone to fits of temper or ego.

Occupation: Unemployed, he resorts to stealing to get what he wants. Considering his food source, he needs very little.

Gear: None.

History: Cobalt was born in the abandoned mines beneath Canterlot. There was plenty of space, food was plentiful, and there were no predators. Cobalt found it dreadfully boring. He would often go off on his own, exploring the tunnels, until he stumbled upon a pink pony imprisoned in a cave. He silently watched the pony, for he had never seen one up close before. Soon after, a purple pony showed up as well, and the two made their way to the surface.

Cobalt followed them, and soon found a whole new world to explore. A dangerous world, filled with colorful ponies and wondrous sights, sounds, and smells. He explores this world when he can, sleeping during the day and coming out at night. He has been careful, and hasn't been caught yet, but some who see him believe that he is a ghost. He takes what he can, plundering Canterlot at night for food and fun.

Personality: Very curious about the surface world, Cobalt grew bored with the sedentary lifestyle of his family. He seeks the thrill and excitement of adventure, the rewards of living on the edge, the bonds of true friendship. And he's a greedy little child who always wants more. Despite his bravado and lofty goals, at his core he is just as cowardly and selfish as the rest of his race.

Current Home: Canterlot Caves

Misc: While he can survive on nothing but rocks, he enjoys anything even remotely edible. Sapphires are his favorite gem, but he has recently acquired a taste for pony food. He adores baked goods such as cookies.
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PostSubject: Re: Brand New OC Character Thread 3   Sat Jan 02, 2016 10:07 pm

Name: Nax

Race: Irken

Age: Unknown

Appearance: Nax is 4,5 Irken with pale green skin and bright pink eyes, She wears the standard garment of a red tunic with black gloves and boots, her antenna's are long going down to her neck and curl up at the end while she has thin eyebrow and eyelashes with similar curls.

Distinguishing Features: Irken's are green-skinned humanoid's possessing three finger's and two toe's and posses eyes that have no pupil and are often a single color of sorts, they have antenna's which are different for male and female and a odd mouth design which looks similar to a zipper.

Weaknesses: Irkens are weak to contact by liquids such as  tainted water, meat and beans. Nax herself is not a technician and as such has difficult with foreign technology or even her own, she also suffers the habit of random fits of maniacal laughter and screaming for no reason which is common behavior

Occupation:Invader

Gear:She is equipped with a PAK which serves as her life support system and if removed will kill her in 8 minutes, she uses various Irken devices from her ship including a hologram machine that disguises her as the local host species (ponies)

History: Nax was a academy wash out who was sent on a suicidal invasion mission and succeed which impressed the Tallest, they saw potential in the invader but also saw flaws and decided to make a test case of two invaders on a single mission to see if they could get more done than one, She was sent with a fellow 'defective' Irken to find a planet to turn into a Snacktopia to provide the Almighty Tallest with tasty snacks

Personality: Nax is perceptive and understand with a bit of a kind heart but is rarely shown, she is loyal to her people but also builds a sympathy for the race she is invading which has made her mark be known as 'defective'. It does appear to be a defect within her PAK's programming as she switches between her own personality to her kind and curious side to her maniacal Irken behaviour. She is power-hungry like her partner Mav and this leads to many conflicts over trivial thing's. She is good at mimicking 'normal' behavior aside from odd thing's which is attributed to her 'defective' nature.

Current Home:Unknown Irken Cargo Ship

Misc:She and her partner Mav are of equal height which leads to many fights about who's in charge, Her PAK is vital and contain's much equipment for studying the host species including the Snack-A-Tron which measures a planet's value in Snack production, She's annoying like most Irken's are.
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PostSubject: Re: Brand New OC Character Thread 3   Sat Jan 02, 2016 11:58 pm

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Name: Riese

I want to hug her, but I can't because she's too big. ;_;

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PostSubject: Re: Brand New OC Character Thread 3   Sun Jan 03, 2016 5:55 am

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Warning:this charictor sheet contains high levels of sadistic and violent material, your discretion is advised, you have been warned.

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Name:
Tahl nai

Race:
Pegasus/succubus / Dragon hybrid

Age:
18

Mane:
pink, long, messy, covers her eyes and is typically braided

Coat:

Cutie mark.:
she doesn’t have a cutie mark in its place is a set of dragon scales

Extra details that aren’t needed but are nice to add:
when she's bored she likes to go to petting zoos and burst all the animals open from a distance while the fillies and colts are around, the screams make her feel tingly.

Distinguishing Features: t
he corner to corner smile that chills to the bone or how about the incessant giggling when someone is in pain, maybe even the her pupils that look like omega with a dot in the centre and small brackets on the outside. She also has rather prominent and sharp set of canines

Specialty (eg. special spells, unique powers etc):
Mind warping: she can fiddle with others minds using their emotions and weaknesses against them, using this is how she built her following, and got her grunts, that she kills regularly for mild enjoyment. She also uses this as a perception filter to make it almost impossible to notice except for her emotions that are easy noticed by emotion sensitive beings and emotion seeing beings. She can do this in two forms she can emit an aura that on those around her or those looking in her direction but this is uncontrollable and will only affect a 5m radius around her, this version is weaker and less specific and strong willed beings can resist this, the other way she can use this by making eye contact, this is almost impossible to stop once it starts, sunglasses and visors will help slow it down but won’t stop it, using this she was able to completely brainwash her mother to plant bombs all over a city.
Dimension hopping (racial ability): as it sounds she can hop to the relic’s home dimension with no effort, this does not grant her time travel but time passes less in the dimension to a factor of 10x so if the occupier stays there for 2.4 hours it will be a day later in the main universe. This does however give her access to teleporting across the planet with ease.
Simplistic magic: telekinesis, simple but useful, and she has a lot to use.
very tough skin: blades would be better used as stone cutting tools, her skin is covered with unbelievably tough tiny scales that make it hard to cut, puncturing weapons will work much better though.
Heightened perception with slower time perception: self-explanatory.
High agility and huge strength.

Weaknesses:
she isn’t benefited by love magic and can only be harmed by it. She is over confident and not mentally stable so she can often put herself in hard stations.

Occupation:
empress of an organisation of evil and general world destruction (to bring forth anarchy and demolishment)

Gear:
twin machine pistols, light weight stolen armour from the S.L.A., a blunt serrated rough knife and a three barrelled automatic thermobaric grenade launcher.

History:
her family consists of her younger sister ice hearth, her mother snow blind and her father frost storm. Her childhood was a simplistic one went to school part of the gymnastics club and had the common style group of friends, on the surface she was a typical filly, she looked odd but par that, normal. But the thing is if you looked any deeper and you’d start to see a different world, she set fire to animals and put them in their dens to spread the fire to other, she'd force small animals to explode using magic and even opened animals up alive just to hear them screech. Her friends were oblivious and were being played, her skills in manipulation started here and eventually spread to magical manipulation with help from her relic heritage. The parents loved her and the kids only saw good, meanwhile she stole their stuff and made them feel like they had given it to her. She was unnoticed for the things she did, all except her mother and sister. Her sister saw it all every last thing she saw the massacre of helpless animals and saw the pupating of the locals, but her sister was shy and timid and was terrified of tahl and it took a few years before she told her mother, when she did it only confirmed and added to her mother’s worry, they both kept an eye on her but it slowly got to the point where both her mother and sister were worried what tahl would do if she was opposed, at the age of 12 tahl was taught by a devil relic, the spell to get to her ‘rightful home’ she lived there for a while (2 years). During this time she learnt the abilities of the relics, it didn’t take long and with her manipulative ability she got all she needed to know. When she finally returned home she went back to her old habits, this time in a small town in the south, she killed the animals and tried to have fun but it wasn’t enough anymore, she tried bigger animals but nothing felt… satisfying. This distressed her, never was killing things no enough, it was still fun but not really fun enough. She wandered the town trying to think of what she could do to make this better, how could she satisfy this longing. Her wondering founder her on farmland, near cattle ranges and while walking on the land she was spotted a cow had seen her and seemed to worry about her this cow seemed to think this teenager was in a dark spot, the cow talked to talk, asked if she was ok, tahl asked if that was normal if it was normal to talk to strangers when your alone, tahl didn’t appreciate the intrusion of this lone cow and all she could think of is this is a cow, like all animals they can die, and why couldn’t they die like other animals she placed her foreleg on the cow, dug her claws in and sliced, at the same time she flooded the cow with magic swelling organs and boiling the bloods the cow's eye went red and bloody her ear bled and her internal organs mostly burst. The feeling she got when she heard the cow cry, scream and moan in excruciating pain, it was so much better than the animals she killed before, It was the panic, the fear and the pain she loved, the rabbits and pigs gave her that but not to the same degree, so what does that leave? Sentient, sapient, cognitive beings, the more she killed the better it felt the more that got hurt either physical or emotional the better. She was 14 and from that point she began her building of a brainwashed slave army and headquarters which only finished being developed at the age of 17 with this power of the ponies she could hurt and lives she could ruin. she had finally achieved her status as monster and was happy to continue. Some time when she was 17 she snuck home to see her mother for the first time in years, but no because of sentimental reasons, she brain washed her mother and made her plant bombs in popular public places and then go home, when she got back the brainwashing was removed the photos of what she did were placed next to her and when she checked the news to see if it was true, tahl detonated the bombs, the guilt was first class.

Personality:
psychopath, sociopath, sadistic, cruel, devastating, hypermanic and deranged

Current Home:
she doesn’t really have a set home but if she stays anywhere its in the relics home dimension.

Misc:
She is purely an antagonist, she will never be a protagonist, the only time it may seem she is, is if she leads you on to think she’s changed so she can use you. She will not be used for combat threads and will only be played by me when not in my own stories or a colab when it’s a thread with factions, also I will restrict myself to AUs to the extent of if the thread owner says it is AU when I ask them if it is (as they may not use the AU tag even though it is AU).
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PostSubject: Re: Brand New OC Character Thread 3   Sun Jan 03, 2016 6:56 am

Orange Glow wrote:
Gonna try something new. Mind if I play a monster race?

*giggles* Most of our characters these days are, so it's all good.

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Name: Cobalt

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PostSubject: Re: Brand New OC Character Thread 3   Sun Jan 03, 2016 7:00 am

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Name: Nax

Diet, you really ought to know the rules by now. I don't mind taking a race from another place--I just approved a gemlin character, a race I suspect was created by someone other than Orange--but this is far too on-the-nose of a connection to Invader Zim. I'm not sure how to fix this problem, so I suggest soliciting advice from other group members and admins.
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PostSubject: Re: Brand New OC Character Thread 3   Sun Jan 03, 2016 7:09 am

Unity Wolfpony wrote:
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Warning:this charictor sheet contains high levels of sadistic and violent material, your discretion is advised, you have been warned.

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WARNING: The character admin doesn't care if the character is very "adult" and asks you to refrain from GIANT RED TEXT WARNINGS ABOUT CONTENT in the future. Thanks. Smile

Unity Wolfpony wrote:
Name:Tahl Nai
Extra details that aren’t needed but are nice to add:
when she's bored she likes to go to petting zoos and burst all the animals open from a distance while the fillies and colts are around, the screams make her feel tingly.

Distinguishing Features: t
he corner to corner smile that chills to the bone or how about the incessant giggling when someone is in pain, maybe even the her pupils that look like omega with a dot in the centre and small brackets on the outside. She also has rather prominent and sharp set of canines

Specialty (eg. special spells, unique powers etc):
Mind warping: she can fiddle with others minds using their emotions and weaknesses against them, using this is how she built her following, and got her grunts, that she kills regularly for mild enjoyment. She also uses this as a perception filter to make it almost impossible to notice except for her emotions that are easy noticed by emotion sensitive beings and emotion seeing beings. She can do this in two forms she can emit an aura that on those around her or those looking in her direction but this is uncontrollable and will only affect a 5m radius around her, this version is weaker and less specific and strong willed beings can resist this, the other way she can use this by making eye contact, this is almost impossible to stop once it starts, sunglasses and visors will help slow it down but won’t stop it, using this she was able to completely brainwash her mother to plant bombs all over a city.
Dimension hopping (racial ability): as it sounds she can hop to the relic’s home dimension with no effort, this does not grant her time travel but time passes less in the dimension to a factor of 10x so if the occupier stays there for 2.4 hours it will be a day later in the main universe. This does however give her access to teleporting across the planet with ease.
Simplistic magic: telekinesis, simple but useful, and she has a lot to use.
very tough skin: blades would be better used as stone cutting tools, her skin is covered with unbelievably tough tiny scales that make it hard to cut, puncturing weapons will work much better though.
Heightened perception with slower time perception: self-explanatory.
High agility and huge strength.

Weaknesses:
she isn’t benefited by love magic and can only be harmed by it. She is over confident and not mentally stable so she can often put herself in hard stations.

I stopped this here because the combination of "mwahahaha evil" details and the balance of strength/weakness makes this far too unbalanced of a character to allow outside of the restrictions you placed on yourself in the "Misc" section. I know you know this and I know you've preempted me by restricting yourself, but I still feel I need to make it absolutely clear that this character simply cannot be used for any thread outside of situations where the GM allows it.
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PostSubject: Re: Brand New OC Character Thread 3   Sun Jan 03, 2016 10:12 am

Time for me to try to get this guy approved. Main changes were around the history and weaknesses parts.

Name: Known as Icicle
Race: Earth Pony
Age: Over 2000 years, appearance-wise looks 30 years old (if one were to actually unthaw him, realistically speaking he looks like a burly old man with a beard to match).
Mane: Light Cyan, frozen solid.
Coat: White, with a few solid patches of ice growing in some spots.
Cutie mark.: Covered by ice and is not visible except as a distorted vision of a vortex of ice.
Extra details that aren't needed but are nice to add: His hoofsteps leave behind hoofprints coated with a thin layer of snow. He also requires no sustenance whatsoever.
Distinguishing Features: He has a beard made out of ice that never thaws, no matter how hot it is.
Specialty (eg. special spells, unique powers etc): Commands the power of ice. Constantly exudes an aura of frost that can freeze a lake in half an hour if he stays there. He is also, unsurprisingly, incredibly cold to the touch, and his touch can accelerate the freezing process of his aura. His most powerful ability is to mark an area with a snowball and, depending on how far he is from where the snowball hit, can blast the area around the snowball with a giant ball of ice that shatters in a radius proportionate to the distance, afflicting all living beings with frostbite. In addition, if they grow weak enough, they will freeze solid and shatter.
Weaknesses: His powers depend on his mood. As his cold demeanor is slowly being replaced by compassion and the acceptance of the ponies of Ponyville, his ice powers and resistance to fire are fading.
Occupation: None
Gear: None
History: Around the time of the 3 Pony Tribes, Icicle was known by another name among his tribe's members. However, he had an affair with a pegasus, which resulted in him being beaten, forced to watch his beloved be murdered in cold blood and finally exiled to the northern wastes of Equestria, to the east of the place where the Crystal Empire would later appear. He was frozen to death by the harsh climate and he remained that way for several millenia until, it is rumored, the appearance of the last of the Windigos, unable to sustain itself in the harmonious warmth that Equestria emanates nowadays, saw his corpse revived and fused with it's soul, now commanding the ice of the north wherever he goes. Others say it was Discord who wanted to have an ice-skating rink somewhere in the Rainbow Falls. Upon returning to the place where he was exiled from, he found he was in Ponyville. He would have gone and attacked the residents, until he saw the Cutie Mark Crusaders playing near the lake. He eventually seeked out Princess Twilight, who, after some consideration, welcomed him to his past home.
Personality: Like the ice he commands, he is cold. However, his ventures in Ponyville have made his heart slowly open up again, melting it bit by bit.
Current Home: Near the top of the mountain overlooking Ponyville.
Misc: It is rumored that if his heart opens up completely and he finds his murdered love reborn, his ice powers will disappear and he will live a normal life once more.

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An empty mind is like unto a freshly turned sod, if not sown with the seeds of love, duty and honour, the insidious weeds of heresy will take root.

- Prefect Xavier Lanate, from his essay "Heresy and Faith: an Introspection"



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PostSubject: Re: Brand New OC Character Thread 3   Sun Jan 03, 2016 11:46 pm

Name: Starfall (aka Lord Starfall)

Race: Unicorn

Age: 40

Mane: Grey White

Coat: Maroon

Cutie mark.: A set of three, six-pointed stars made of different gems, one a ruby, one a sapphire, and the last an emerald.

Extra details that aren't needed but are nice to add: He has Emerald eyes.

Distinguishing Features: He wears a fancy suit and scarf everywhere he goes, denoting that he’s a noble. If one was to see what was under that, he/she would see numerous scars.

Specialty (eg. special spells, unique powers etc): Lord Starfall is a powerful sorcerer. He can conjure up storms, huge infernos, shards of ice, etc. He is definitely one of the most powerful living unicorns.

Weaknesses: A crippling battle wound in his hind legs keep him from actively serving. That wound has cost him his endurance in physical activities. Even simple running can exacerbate his wound, causing him intense pain if he pushes himself too hard. This also makes him walk with a limp. He also lacks the knowledge to perform many healing spells as his focus was purely on combat and enchantments.

Occupation: Noble, inactive Paladin, Paladin trainer.

Gear: He still has his armor and sword from his days as a Paladin, though they’re more decoration items now.

History: Starfall certainly didn’t start out as a noble. He lived in Canterlot with his single mother who ran a jewelry store. Everyone assumed his talent with cutting gems would’ve garnered his cutie mark, but it actually came from a time where he accidentally charged a gem with magic and used it to power an item of his with it. His talent was enchanting gems with power. The Royal Guard quickly took interest in his work, also giving him his first job outside of his mother’s store. At no point was he ever a guard, but Celestia saw he had the potential to become a powerful Paladin. When he came of age, he was offered a place among the Paladin Chapter she was forming in the year 981 of Celestia’s reign. He enchanted gems for use in their armor and weapons to augment their abilities, and he learned how to use his magic for devastating attacks. He served for 8 years before receiving his crippling injury in a mission that claimed the lives of his fellow Paladins. He is the last of his Chapter. His status as a Paladin automatically made him a noble. When he was forced to retire, he got a mansion in Canterlot where he and his mother resided. His mother died when he was 36, and lives in the mansion alone, with the exception of the servants.

Personality: Lord Starfall likes to be a very charismatic person. He prefers talking his way out of trouble instead of fighting his way out. He also doesn’t proclaim the fact he was a Paladin, though there certainly are those who know. He loves social functions, and he also loves messing with the dim-witted and/or stuck-up nobles of Canterlot.

Current Home: Canterlot

Misc:
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PostSubject: Re: Brand New OC Character Thread 3   Thu Jan 07, 2016 5:49 am

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Name: Known as Icicle

Excellent. ^_^ Approved.
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PostSubject: Re: Brand New OC Character Thread 3   Thu Jan 07, 2016 6:19 am

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Name: Starfall (aka Lord Starfall)
Specialty (eg. special spells, unique powers etc): Lord Starfall is a powerful sorcerer. He can conjure up storms, huge infernos, shards of ice, etc. He is definitely one of the most powerful living unicorns.

Weaknesses: A crippling battle wound in his hind legs keep him from actively serving. That wound has cost him his endurance in physical activities. Even simple running can exacerbate his wound, causing him intense pain if he pushes himself too hard. This also makes him walk with a limp. He also lacks the knowledge to perform many healing spells as his focus was purely on combat and enchantments.

I really want to put an approve stamp on this, because you teeter on the brink of making the issue irrelevant. But the thing is, you gave him massive phenomenal cosmic power and the weakness is... he'a cripple. So basically, the glass cannon's weakness is that he's a glass cannon. This rides the edge but I think it's best if you find some way to tone down his firepower before I approve it.
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PostSubject: Re: Brand New OC Character Thread 3   Tue Jan 12, 2016 8:46 am


Name: Shooting Star

Race: unicorn

Age: 25

Mane: pitch black with a silver strikethrough, cut short, always worn in a bun; the strikethrough hangs loose

Coat: blue-ish white

Cutie mark.: an all-black shooting star

Extra details that aren't needed but are nice to add: She always wears a captain hat, and a dark blue coat with black collars.

Distinguishing Features: She has a scar going from her left cheek, over her eye and up to the hairline. She isn’t blind in her left eye, thankfully. She wears the scar with pride.

Specialty (eg. special spells, unique powers etc): She can conjure up a perfect magic blade. Not much more, though.

Weaknesses: She is sometimes lead by her greed, blinding her from dangers.

Occupation: Captain on a pirate (space)ship.

Gear: She always wears a sword and a small laser gun. She heavily relies on her magic blade though.

History: Born in the slums, she always wanted to leave her old life and get a new one, a better one. When she was twelve, pirates attacked the slums she lived in. She watched them kill her parents. Filled with rage, she hid herself on that ship and stayed there as a stowaway until she was discovered, taking revenge in petty, but numerous ways. The current captain wanted to execute her once she was discovered - as they always do with stowaways - but at that moment, they were discovered by a Republican ship.


So, the pirates did what any pirate would do: they fled and left her behind for the Republicans. She managed to convince them she was not with them, and the captain of the ship let her stay on the ship. She was put to work for her food, and there she learned the ways of the ship. She always stayed on that Republican ship, even when the captains changed. She got to know the ship inside out, she felt the wood under her hooves and swore never to leave it.


It had been her home for five years by then, going up ranks steadily. In the meantime, the Republic started to become corrupt under the lead of Senator Wormhole, who basically turned the Senate into a puppet show and ruled all on his own. In the meantime, the Rebellion had come up, fighting the Republican vessels. The captain she had always worked under was fired and had an accident, mainly because his views didn’t quite match the senator’s. The whole crew was shocked as they found out, and were mortified as the new captain who was assigned to their ship was actually a pirate under contract of the Republic to destroy Rebellion ships.


And so, under Star’s lead, the crew started a mutiny and killed the captain. They broke with the Republic and removed their flag and renamed the ship the Last Light. They started targeting Republican ships. She is still on the fence with joining the Rebellion though, because their views aren’t always as morally sane either. She does what she thinks is best and always asks if her crew agrees. Her greed had started to develop here after capturing two Republican ships with so many riches on them, it didn’t even fit her own ship. She always wanted more. She manages to keep her crew content by promising -and giving- them a pretty large part of the pile.


Personality: She is greedy, and would do anything to get her prize. She is pretty smart, and can be clever and cunning if she wants to. She doesn’t really like that though, she prefers the more direct solution.


Current Home: Anywhere on the Last Light.

Misc: She’s asexual, she’s married to her ship.

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PostSubject: Re: Brand New OC Character Thread 3   Tue Jan 12, 2016 12:48 pm

Name: Silent Knight.

Race: Thestral.

Age: 16.

Mane: A soft, icy blue that looks more white than blue.

Coat: Pale, milky white.

Cutie mark.: A bed with a shield resting beside it.

Extra details that aren't needed but are nice to add: Pale, blue-white eyes that glow in a crystalline way when he uses magic.
Distinguishing Features: He's a snow white thestral.

Specialty (eg. special spells, unique powers etc): Silent is a rather fit stallion, but his skills lie in the mind. Like his sister, he, too, was born with some magic in his blood. But the Knight's magic was not Dream Walking, it was, however, the ability to forge powerful mental defenses and attacks. But he is limited by his inability to project the attacks outside of those who attempt to mess with his or his sister's head. This is where his synergy with his sister comes in. With her projective ability, and capability to enter the mind of another, they can work together if needed to allow Silent to help defend her and keep her safe in the mind of someone else.

Weaknesses: Without his locket, he is unable to do a lot with his magic, limited to only simple defenses for himself and his sister without it, as well as the stallion being incapable of any offensive magic without the locket.

Occupation: N/A

Gear: A silver, shield-shaped Locket on a silver chain, enchanted to be able to focus the natural mana within his body. A dark red scarf, matching his sister's. Saddlebags carrying the average traveling supplies.

History: Silent was born in Ponyville and raised to the age of eight there, learning how to use his defenses to help out his sister's magic. But then, he spent the next few years in a foster home with his sister. What happened to his parents was known by many, as his house had burned down, and they had been trapped within. But he did not know what had started the fire, no one did. At fourteen, his sister started running away, wanting to get as far as possible from Ponyville and the place where she was last truly happy, and so, he followed her. Not wanting to leave her side, wanting to keep his sister safe.

Personality: Friendly, kind, but very protective of his sister, and he is usually always keeping his emotions in check, not wanting to show anything.

Current Home: N/A

Misc: Loves a good, hot cup of cocoa.

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Name: Sweet Dreams.

Race: Thestral.

Age: 16.

Mane: A soft sky blue that looks more white than blue.

Coat: Pale, milky white.

Cutie mark.: A bed on a cloud.

Extra details that aren't needed but are nice to add: Pale, blue-white eyes that glow in a crystalline way when she uses magic.

Distinguishing Features: She is a very pale thestral.

Specialty (eg. special spells, unique powers etc): Sweet was born with an innate ability called 'Dream Walking', which is passed down from her father's genes, but is rarer than the chance of finding a lake in a desert, which allows her to enter one's mind while they sleep and bypass their subconscious, letting the small filly to find out their problems and help them, easing them out of their odd dreams, whether they be suppressed memories or darkest fears. This also allows for her to interact in the other's Mindscape, and even bring other ponies with her for a limited time.

Weaknesses: Her Dream Walking ability requires a focus point for her to use it, if she were a unicorn, she'd not need anything, but as a Thestral, she requires the use of a family heirloom, a locket, and if one were to take this from her while she was in another's mind, there would be very little chance she'd return to her body unless Princess Luna herself helped. Any form of mental defense will be able to stop her from entering one's mind, and her body is left in a state of unconsciousness when she is in another's mind, leaving her defenseless. In Dream Walking, any harm that comes to her in the other's mind will fall upon her in the form of magical backlash, though it does not harm her too much. For around a half an hour after using her Dream Walking ability, she is incapable of flight and is rather weak and exhausted, usually near passing out. She requires to be within ten feet of the other pony for Dream Walking. She also cannot alter the course of the dream, only influence the one having it by her actions. Is young and constantly talked down to because of this. No one takes her seriously.

Occupation: N/A.

Gear: A silver, cloud-shaped Locket on a silver chain, enchanted to be able to focus the natural mana within her body. A dark red scarf, and a semi-large teddy bear designed after a polar bear, with a matching scarf to her own. Saddlebags carrying the average traveling supplies, and also her Family's Scrapbook, full of pictures.

History: Sweet Dreams was born in Ponyville and raised to the age of eight there, learning how to control her abilities slowly and carefully, to help with her mother's anxiety issues. She spent the next few years in a foster home with her brother after that. What happened to her parents was known by many, as her house had burned down, and they had been trapped within. But she did not know what had started the fire, no one did. At fourteen, she started running away, wanting to get as far as possible from Ponyville and the place where she was last truly happy, her brother always in tow.

Personality: Friendly, kind, tries to be helpful, but is always hiding her sadness, never truly letting others see her emotions.

Current Home: N/A.

Misc: Absolutely adores hot cocoa.

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PostSubject: Re: Brand New OC Character Thread 3   Fri Jan 15, 2016 4:45 am

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Name: Shooting Star

Um... clearly this character doesn't exist in conventional canon. It's approved, but only for threads where her canon fits in.
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PostSubject: Re: Brand New OC Character Thread 3   Fri Jan 15, 2016 4:49 am

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Name: Silent Knight

Brother to Holi Knight.
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Name: Sweet Dreams.

Curse you! Razz


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PostSubject: Re: Brand New OC Character Thread 3   Fri Jan 15, 2016 9:21 pm

Name: Llumina

Race: MerAlicorn (made race myself well i thought of the name don't know if it exists) Half merpony half alicorn
Age: 17

Mane: Dark Blue,

Coat: Darker shade of Blue

Cutie mark.: 3 Deep Sea Jellyfish

Distinguishing Features: Her merpony-like tail

Specialty Deep sea fishing and really good at diving to deadly depths

Weaknesses: Although half alicorn she can not fly that well this is due to her living most of her time in the water. She also cant do much magic only moving water waves (slightly she does not have the power to make a sunamie XD) and creating light out of her horn which is essential for where she lives

Occupation: Non mostly fending for herself in the ocean although she likes to collect crystals from the bottom of the ocean.

Gear: Earing on one ear that has real jellyfish arms (she is emune to them its an adaptation.)

History: Having been raised by merponeys when she was younger was her happiest of times. The merponeys were nice poneys but many talked about how strange her pelt was and how she had a horn and pegisus wings. What more, she had 4 hoofs not 2 like many did. They thought it was the gods who were punishing them, they thought she was bad luck. Even so, they never spoke wrongly of her in front of her but even so she knew she was differant. She did not know why but she did not care to much as well. One lovely morning she started to take a liking to the deeper parts of the ocean. Other merponeys could not go down at such depths. At one point she saw a small jellyfish flooting around and heading to the cliff and down the abise. She as a filly not knowing better fallowed it down and than something magical happened, many deep sea jellyfish showed up and serounded her the darkness seamed like it wasnt their as millions of them moved about her and than she got it her cutie mark. From that day forth she explored the deep dark abise, forgeting she left home she swam up but sadly, they had already left. most likely the merponeys thought she died. This scared her a little and she only knew one place to go. She went down deeper into the trench untill she saw a funny animal. it was a dumbo octipus. it had sliped through a small hole and being cute as it was she fallowed it partuly also because she did not want to be alone. The octipuse led her to a large cave and when she walked out of the water she fell (because she never walked before) she looked up and saw where she was, she knew then, this would be her new home

Personality: She is very shy at first because of the lack of poney contact, however once she has been around you for a long time she is as social as any poney can be! she also does not trust other poneys at first. you have to earn her trust.


Current Home: Bottom of the ocean (a trench) in one of many underwater caves. This one is large and has a huge biolumenasing crystal (glowing crystal) like chandelier and the walls of the cave have smaller ones. Her furniture is made mostly of rock and her bed is composed of dead sea weed.

Misc: All I've Ever Known by Oasis
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PostSubject: Re: Brand New OC Character Thread 3   Fri Jan 15, 2016 10:17 pm

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Name: Llumina

Approved. This is a good character and unique. Not too powerful, and a plausible backstory. It definitely needs some punctuation, grammar, and spelling help. Sunamie isn't how you spell tsunami. Wink
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PostSubject: Re: Brand New OC Character Thread 3   Wed Jan 20, 2016 3:15 am



Name: Faelyn Saltator
Race: Fire Elemental, Pony form
Age: 80
Mane: A flame that wraps around her ears and back of her head like hair, and a long, multi-tongued flame for the tail. Both are red that fades into orange.
Coat: Bright orange, surrounded and contained in a shimmering, clear field. It feels very smooth, and gives a little when pushed. She's warmer to the touch compared to normal ponies, but won't burn. The orange inside the field seems to move slowly, like magma.
Cutie mark.: She doesn't have one.
Extra details that aren't needed but are nice to add:
A note about the fire elemental:
The elemental's properties cannot actively hurt others; the magic that gave it life will not allow the magma and fire her body is made of to outright hurt others. However, the fire magic she uses can be used as an attack. She looks like an earth pony made of a very hot, consistent magma.
Distinguishing Features: Flaming mane, glowing body, a long, silk cloth she uses for her dance routines.
Specialties: Dancing, playing the viola, firework magics. Ballistics (Swords to Bullets) tend to penetrate her outer 'skin' field and melt inside her body. Explosives that make it inside her make her burp and feel a little bloated.
Weaknesses: Excessive amounts of water, extreme cold, things that drain magic, a disposition towards pacifism, and a willingness to trust.
Occupation: Dancer / Entertainer
Gear: Baggy, pink pants, dancing silks, a viola, and a supply of charcoal. (She eats the charcoal to survive, claiming it to have better properties for her hair than normal rocks. She has been known to much on a rock here or there, but considers it junk food. She really likes eating metals, but finds them expensive, with most unwilling to part with them.)
History: Faelyn was created by an old, meticulous mage with creaky bones and a lifetime of experience, as a sort of master work. Designed as a demonstration of beauty and entertainment, she was carefully and lovingly sung from a shield volcano of the the coast. It was sung into the familiar form of a pony and, to the old stallion's fancy, took the form of a mare. Mute and mindless, it stood before him in its new form.

The mage lead her home carefully, to a well-to-do cottage near Canterlot, where it and the old man made their home. In life, the magus had been well respected in his work. Over the short years he had left, he taught the construct many things. How to eat, how to dance, and, on a whim, a classical instrument, were just a couple of things. He treated his construct like a precious companion, lamenting from time to time her lack of speech. He showed it the spells and wards that formed its complex body functions as it grew older, trying to get it to understand. He explained the fail safes around the magics, preventing the fire and magma from burning the things and folk around her. He also explained how dangerous swimming was to her, and cold was lethal. He was a father to her. And one day, he stopped moving.

For a long time, she did not understand what was happening. She brought him food, drinks, tried to play the viola (they had gradually developed a rudimentary language through it over time), anything to wake him. And then, her first word. "Father?" Despite being made of magma, the voice was clear and warm, though frightened. When he didn't respond, she wept and went dormant. She was eventually found this way, nearly solidified.

After being revived, she did her best to explain to the folks around her what she knew, but her verbal vocabulary was limited to a singular word, and nopony was letting her near writing supplies. She was deemed harmless, however, when investigators discovered the old mage's journal. She was 'donated' to a university the stallion had worked at prior for study. There she learned speech and a love for entertainment. When she was deemed mature enough to be on her own, she was given an honorary home at the academy, and the ability to leave the grounds. Now she dreams of performing in all the stages and theaters in Equestria, though she views the northern regions of the Crystal Empire as extremely dangerous.
Personality: More like a candle, she's warm and compassionate. Her goals are mostly to entertain. She is very trusting, and a little naïve. She doesn't understand violence, and won't show fear against weapons.
Current Home: University of Elemental Magics - Canterlot.


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PostSubject: Re: Brand New OC Character Thread 3   Wed Jan 20, 2016 3:47 pm

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Name: Faelyn Saltator

Good character, and approved. Smile

The "and one day, he stopped moving" bit hit me in the feels, though.
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PostSubject: Re: Brand New OC Character Thread 3   Tue Jan 26, 2016 11:27 pm

Name: Purple Fang

Race: Unicorn spider pony

Age: 16

Mane: Spiky brown Mohawk

Coat: Light grey with purple stripes down the back

Cutie mark.: N/A

Extra details that aren't needed but are nice to add: The inside of her mouth is a light green

Distinguishing Features: She is about the size of a tarantula, fangs, one big eye and tree little eyes around the corner of the big one, her fangs are poisonous and can kill rabbits, birds, etc, and can put a normal size pony in the hospital.

Specialty (eg. special spells, unique powers etc): She can make a magic dome around herself, she is very fast and can claim up walls,

Weaknesses: Her magic can't affect anything bigger than a small rock, if you catch her off guard she can be easily squashed,

Occupation: Spiderweb artist.

Gear: N/A

History:  She was born in a small house on the outside of Ponyville close to the Everfree, where her and her family live in the walls, the pony who lives there is Leaf Heart she cares for them as if they were her own family. Her parents didn't let her outside of the walls because of any dangers, so she would spend her time spinning web art in the corners of the wall and the more she makes the more time she spends on each one of them. On her 13th birthday her parents finally let her explore the house and she loves the freedom she now has, on her travels around the house she finds an earth spider nest below the window sill, she climbed down to it and a large earth spider climbed out of it with a angry look on his face that slowly turns into a joyful expression as he realizes who she was and that is how she met Web Spin, and together they adventure around the house, and now it's hard to find a corner without some web art beautifully put together in them

Personality: Adaptable, athletic, alert, clever, brave, creative, curious, daring, discreet, friendly,

Current Home: Ponyville in a smell house next to the Everfree.

Misc: Her tears are dark blue,


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PostSubject: Re: Brand New OC Character Thread 3   Wed Jan 27, 2016 12:19 am

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Name: Purple Fang

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PostSubject: Re: Brand New OC Character Thread 3   Sun Jan 31, 2016 11:08 pm

A BRIEF OVERVIEW OF RESEARCHER Scintilla FOR DIVERSITY SYSTEMS
PUBLISHING DATE – █████ / ██ / ███

:::Name:::
Scintilla
:Date of Birth:
█████ / ██ / ██ @ ██:██ EM-6
::Species//Clade::
α-type unicorn, southern
(See attached files for known
genealogical records)
::Biological Sex::
Male
(♂)

:::Appearance:::
Standard Minor-Alpha unicorn.
Height of 1.21 renzoquizibyts.
Light blue coat, short in length.
Superstandard horn length by
approx. 0.49 realoquizibyts.
Cobalt blue mane, straight.
Blue irises, small pupils.
Cutaneous Marking (“Cutie Mark”):
Asymmetrical starburst shape.
Arcane aura is a bright blue with
spiralling resonance type 4-C.
(See attached files for images)

:::Notable Aptitudes:::
Strong innate sense for magical
energy detections and frequencies.
Has a strong grip on technical
elements of spellcasting and
spell matrix programming.

[Please Enter Credentials to Proceed]

:::Weaknesses:::
Shows symptoms of hypersensitivity
when exposed to variable arcane
fluctuation environments.

Not recommended for field work
that requires physical strength.
Was prone to disregarding authority.

Occupation:
Currently stationed at research site
A-BC-1928, Abaci Province, for
field work and supervision of
excavation efforts
at the Counting
Stone Ruins and surrounding areas.

:Minor Background Details:
Born on █████ / ██ / ██, in the
city of Carus
, Far Rimwards E+27921.
Raised by Doctor Halcyon Eile and
Adry Abysm with no incident.
Educated and trained at the eDen
Academy
- Eq -Datum exp E+27300.
Showed particular interest in the
technical workings of spell matrices,
forming an extracurricular group with
close friends with a common theme
of matrix-based inventions and artwork.

Took part in many new &HACK; groups.
Finished academy training a year early
with a 9█.██% score on the Quizi scale.
Resided in hometown for a year after
graduation and acceptance into
an intro
ranking in the E+30K subdivision of a
local Diversity Systems research and
development
in academia technoarcana
(in scientific arcane sites and academies).
Participated as an assistant to [CLASSIFIED]
for █ years. Continued in [CLASSIFIED]’s
field of study before being relocated north
during the Fossil Rush of the ████’s.

:Personal Items:
- 1 standard micro- tracking implant
- 1 lucky amulet
- 1 magic-cancelling horn ring
- 2 custom-made personal devices
- 1 pair of personal-use earblooms
- █ [UNDISCLOSED]

:::Personality:::
Prefers to show a calm and cool side
to peers. Does not speak much to
those who are not close friends or
associates. Sarcasm and other forms
of humour have been noted as a
common occurrence.
Close associates
include A███████ T███, F███
S█████, and F██████ [CENSORED].

(Acrimony Tang, Foss Strata, Fractal)
(Soon-to-come – character sheets~~)


ATTACHMENTS
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PostSubject: Re: Brand New OC Character Thread 3   Mon Feb 01, 2016 4:11 am

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