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PostSubject: Re: OC Character Thread 2 (This thread is now locked, please use the OC Character Thread 3 above)   Fri Oct 09, 2015 5:47 am

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Name: Michael Starren
Race: Human

A human in Equestria. Oh dear.

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Age: 10

Only age 10? Sheesh...

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Speciality: Michael happens to be a very kind and sweet person around his mother Queen Chrysalis and the workers around him. That is why Queen Chrysalis chose him to be her warrior or her son. That being said, he has a heart of gold and has a sense of naiveness.

Wait, a changeling queen chose a 10-year-old to be her warrior? And the term is "naivete", not "naiveness".

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Weakness: as stated above. He has a habit of being Naive and too caring to the point where he could sacrifice himself for his hive.

And the fact that he's 10 years old isn't a weakness? How not?

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Occupation: More or so he is the son of the Queen Chrysalis so he is the prince of the Changelings.

The queen adopted a completely alien creature as her son and heir?

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Both suffered head cracks and collisions.

Yes, you just said they were in a... oh, you mean concussion... fractured skulls and concussions. Really, if your skull is cracked, a concussion is a bit of a minor concern.

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All the loneliness got to him. As if magic he went to sleep that night, waking up in a unknown forest.

..he got lonely and random magic took him to Equestria...

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The Queen could sense he had no love which was strange for a child so she hatched a plan. She would care for him that way his love builds and she can become stronger from this child's love.

Wait, wasn't he a prince above?

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It had seemed full proof... Until she truly started to know what love is truly about. A queen a mother now.

So in your headcanon, Queen Chrysalis had no children until she randomly adopted a hairless primate wandering around the forest. Um... OK, I can sort of swallow the childless part, I guess.


I'm really not sure what to say that will properly express the degree to which this is unacceptable, without being a complete asshole to you. To put it bluntly, this is completely unacceptable. The meme of human-in-Equestria is very tentative from extraordinarily skilled and subtle writers; this is neither complex nor subtle. You're having a random 10-year-old orphan transported to Equestria at random because handwave and ends up in a forest where a race that are predators in canon not only do him no harm but take him in and care for him and make him the heir to the throne. It's a completely non-credible backstory for a character that cannot be approved without an exceptionally good one. As such, until total revision, I cannot approve this.
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PostSubject: Re: OC Character Thread 2 (This thread is now locked, please use the OC Character Thread 3 above)   Sat Oct 10, 2015 5:17 pm

Name: Haruspex or Haru for short
Race: Zebra
Age: He thinks he is 23 or 22 but is unsure.
Mane: His mane is mostly Onyx black with two white stripes running from the top of his eyes and down his mane. Long and down to his shoulders in a parted fashion.
Coat: Instead of the usual white fur and black stripes, his is reversed but white for his stripes. A few other white marks around his face in similar pattern to his stripes.
Cutie mark.: He has several tattoos on his body he doesn't remember having save for one on his chest which has an upturned crescent moon holding a triangle in the center with part of the bottom missing and replaced with a line turned upwards.  
Extra details that aren't needed but are nice to add: He normally wears a white robe across his body with a granite colored cape attached to his back that wraps around his shoulders and across his back. On his chest is the same symbol appears like on his cutie mark and on his cape. Whenever he enters his battle mood then a white mask appears over ehttphttphttp://www.venicemaskedball.co.uk/ekmps/shops/maskedball/images/white-mask-with-black-design-1795-p.jpg
Distinguishing Features:He has this taetto in white on his back http://pre03.deviantart.net/6288/th/pre/i/2009/360/2/5/symbol_1_by_jiai_koshi.jpg and this one on his forehead... The top one https://jbarkerdesigns.files.wordpress.com/2012/04/wingsymbol.png He has bold golden yellow eyes that turn silvery white when he sees a spirit.
Specialty (eg. special spells, unique powers etc): Weepers are created when a person almost drowns and a spirit gets tied together when the person is so close to death's door. The spirit will be pulled into the body but will not have control... Rather is tethered to the host. Now as a guardian angel the spirit and the host are more powerful together than they were apart. A Weeper has four passive traits that comes with them. The Weeper must first manifest his mask to gain the following:
See through mist.
See the souls of dead, or how close someone is from death.
Summon a ghostly blade that is as sharp as the steel version but no one else can pick it up.
Cast weak spells translated through the spirit he is attached too.

Spells he can manifest through the spirit following him:

Ghostly Miasma: He can send a wave of ghostly cold in the shape of a bird that when it hits the person feels like part of their life had been ripped away causing damage to their bodies in a small but substantial amount.

Spiritual Armor: A cloak of mystical runes protects him from a blade striking his body only three times before the after shock breaks the cloak.

Sent the Unsent: He may free a wandering spirit from their bounds and send them on their way to a blissful sleep.

Obscuring Mist: A cold misty vapor arises around him. It is stationary once created and covers up to thirty square feet. The vapor obscures all sight in or out.

Entangle: Ghostly hands/hooves right from the earth to grab at a pony's hooves and try to slow them down by tugging and pulling.

Silence: Complete silence prevails in the affected area. All sound is stopped around him, and no ambient noise whatsoever issues from, enters, or passes through the area of thirty square feet.

Weaknesses: Fire is his primary weakness... He doesn't do well in the heat and neither does his spells to the point of making them inoperable. The second biggest would be wind over a quick gust would blow away his spells and lastly he will require rest after each battle to recharge himself for the next.
Occupation: Random Adventurer and slayer of evil creatures.
Gear: His Robe
History: If you ask Haru what he was like or what his past was... He will avoid the question but in reality he doesn't remember anything save for his name. Long time ago... When he was very little, his parents owned a home next to a pond known for strange mysteries and legends around spirits guarding this place. One day Haru had wandered far, being a mere ten years old he was exploring the pond when he fell in. Almost drowning he was saved by a ball of light that carried him to a chamber inside the pond but this spirit had accidentally bonded herself to him... Making him a weeper, there he laid protected in a magical stasis for 12 years, his body altered, his memory faded and the only one there was Viridian... Quickly teaching him.the skills he would need, they set off on a quest to fight evil and bring peace to those weary souls trapped in this world.
Personality: Generally a little reclusive after ponies showed him their fear for what he does. Keeps his emotional self restrained save for the ones who know him or if he feels something towards them. He can be a bit harsh but he really does care for the good of others and their emotional state. He gets a little defensive when others talk about his past.
Current Home: Here or there... Really anywhere
Misc: Thanks to the joining of spirits... His body has doubled in size everything including size and height. The spirit he is joined with was a unicorn that only goes by the name Licorice and she can levitate objects nearby if they weigh 15 pounds or less.


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PostSubject: Re: OC Character Thread 2 (This thread is now locked, please use the OC Character Thread 3 above)   Sat Oct 10, 2015 5:46 pm

Misc: For the purposes of keeping things simple, Farthest left headings are for both.
Name: The Sidereal Twins
Astra
Stella
Race: Changeling (sort of?)
Age: 270 years
Cutie Mark: Four Pointed Star
Usual Gender:
Astra: Male
Stella: Female
Mane: Sandy Red
Chitin: Changeling black
Extra details that aren't needed but are nice to add: While their irises are a perfectly normal shade of amber, their pupils are in the shape of the Gemini symbol.
Distinguishing Features:
Astra: While the part of his tail that is actually real is in view, and illusion of it will steadily grow larger and larger at a rate of 6 cm per second. Breaking eye contact with his tail will reset this. Astra is incapable of shutting or suppressing this effect in any way.
Stella: Anywhere she is present, wholly accurate mathematics are not possible. In something extremely sensitive, this will outright prevent its function. In something with a larger margin for error, it may go unnoticed.
Specialty (eg. special spells, unique powers etc): As changelings, they have the ability to drain emotions, create basic illusions, shapeshift, and fire adhesive packets of goo.  Both of them are extremely skilled in short-range teleportation. They have a constant telepathic and empathic bond, and know the location of the other in relation to them at all times.
Astra: Powerful illusions, to the extent of them, being physically real if he puts enough power into them. Astral particularly good at creature illusions, such as phantasmal killers. When in close proximity, he can create entire houses of solid illusions, populating them with horrifying monsters and traps.
Stella: Stella is a bard who uses her magic to warp reality. On her own, she can do transmutation of the surrounding area (rock to mud, sand to lava, etc.) When next to her brother and working in concert, she can shred reality quite effectively.

Weaknesses: While they are both very skilled combatants, they are not very tough. Someone who specializes in weapon combat will be their superior in the art of melee, and beings with truth-based abilities can render Astral almost defenseless. Stella is much harder to disable (without the use of an anti-magic field, which would instantly disable both of them) but can’t use her abilities as easily in combat. Once the veil of secrecy is broken, they will almost always flee rather than fight.
• While emotion draining can sustain their biology for a few weeks, and maintain their changeling abilities indefinitely, their true power and life comes form exposure to starlight. If the stars are in someway blocked for over a week, they will not be able to recover from wounds or replenish their magic beyond the level it was at the last time they used it.
Gear: Nightmare Moon first appeared,  four stars broke rank to assist her. These stars waged war on their kin, to prevent them form using the fabled Special Beam Cannon Attack to cleanse Luna of her corruption. Among the first casualties was the Twins, Gemini. They were wounded badly by the traitor stars, enough to make a single star fall. Instead of choosing one or the other, they separated half of themselves, their minds, and sent them to the planet (Equus) below. Meanwhile, their magic and might was still available for the Special Beam Cannon Attack.
Their semi-mortal spirits possessed the bodies of two changelings, creating a mix of innate changeling magic and star power. From this, the Sidereal Twins emerged.  In lieu of anything better to do, they began wandering around and meddling in Celestia’s world.
Personality: Completely variable. Patterns cannot be drawn, save that they both appear intelligent and manipulative.  They are resentful of Celestia for failing to save Luna, but not truly evil. Merely petty.
Occupation: Part time Cult leaders.

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PostSubject: Re: OC Character Thread 2 (This thread is now locked, please use the OC Character Thread 3 above)   Sun Oct 11, 2015 1:57 am

Name: Sonatine Lullaby

Race: Siren

Age: 22

Mane: Dark Blue

Coat: Forest Green

Cutie mark.: A simple crib

Extra details that aren't needed but are nice to add: Violet eyes.

Distinguishing Features: In pony form, she doesn't have anything that would make her stand out as a Siren, except for her gem. In siren form, she tends to be much more graceful than other sirens, and also is smaller than most sirens.

Specialty (eg. special spells, unique powers etc): As a siren, she can breathe underwater and has the power to enrapture ponies and affect their emotions. She has a natural penchant for causing pleasant, heart-felt emotions.

Weaknesses: She's physically weaker than most ponies, and also more shy and timid than most. She often goes for days without feeding because she doesn't want to cause disharmony, which only makes her weaker. She also comes off as a little ditsy, as she doesn't always pay attention when she needs to. She constantly fusses over her disguise.

Occupation: Traveling singer.

Gear: Winter clothes when that time of year comes around. She also carries regular food for to help keep up her disguise.

History: Sonatine was orphaned at a young age. Since she was smaller than other sirens, she was often picked on. However, after learning her specialty in calming and pleasing tones, she became very well liked among those who were younger than her, and would often spend time with foals and infants.

Her move to Equestria was difficult due to a few mishaps with her pony disguise that led to her getting beaten up by paranoid ponies and thrown back into the sea numerous times. As such, she's wary around ponies and is constantly making sure her disguise is perfect. Being among the ponies provides enough food for her to survive, especially cities like Manehatten and Canterlot. So, she goes town to town, feeding of the disharmonious energy already there, then singing to promote harmony again.

Personality: She has a very soft spot for foals and infants, while shying away from adolescents and adults. Most jokes tend not to make sense to her, though she often gets that they were supposed to be jokes. She also has a distinct fear of cats and other felines. She also has a short attention span, often meaning she misses important information when someone is trying to tell her something.

Current Home: Whatever hotel she can afford.

Misc:
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PostSubject: Re: OC Character Thread 2 (This thread is now locked, please use the OC Character Thread 3 above)   Sun Oct 11, 2015 3:25 am

Name: Storm Blower
Race: Pegasus
Age: 20
Mane: Brown
Coat: White
Cutie mark: Smoke Circles
Extra details that aren't needed but are nice to add:
Distinguishing Features:
Specialty (eg. special spells, unique powers etc): She can blow amazing puffs of smoke. She is also fast and agile on both the ground and the air. Due to her training in being apart of the Wonderbolts, she has become an excellent flyer and can handle herself well in an aerial battle or a fight on the ground given the right environment.
Weaknesses: She isn't a top tier Wonderbolt and can be beaten by someone with more experience and/or skill. In a fight, she needs an open area to let her dance around her opponents.
Occupation:Wonderbolt Reserve
Gear: None
History: Storm Blower is the daughter of the ex-Wonderbolt, White Lightning, and the younger sister of Lightning Storm. Unlike her brother, she followed their father's footsteps and joined the Wonderbolt Academy and passed with high marks. She currently acts a Reserved Member of the Wonderbolts and only shows up when it's a minor appearance or just needs to substitute for someone else.
Personality: She is a determined individual that always puts her all into completing the task at hand. She wants to make her father proud and wants to surpass the things he did as a Wonderbolt and maybe even the records set by the Wonderbolts if she can manage it. She also likes a good smoke once in a while and keeps to less harmful or harmless substances if she can, but will go to the more traditional materials at times.
Current Home: Cloudsdale
Misc: Asking her to blow someone will end with the asker being pummeled




Name: Silver Armor
Race: Earth Pony
Age: 19
Mane: Powder Blue
Coat: White
Cutie mark: A Crab with an Iron Shell
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Distinguishing Features:
Specialty (eg. special spells, unique powers etc): She is excellent blacksmith and while not being a unicorn, she has a good amount of knowledge of runes. The runes she adds improve a quality of the item or adds spell to the weapon. She has learned the basics of wielding various weapons though nothing in actually experience. She can also knit.
Weaknesses: Isn't really skilled in combat. The spells either have a limit in the number of uses or a set amount of time that it can actually be used.
Occupation: Blacksmith
Gear: None
History: Silver was a shy pony that lived with a family of blacksmiths. She was always more comfortable while nearby a forge than anywhere else. Over the years, she would later learn about runes and the effects that they could have on certain items. This lead to her helping her family's forge by using runes to add to them though mostly only for higher paying buyers.
Personality: She is still shy around others and can be flustered around new people. She is also self-conscious about her work and wants to make that the buyers are completely satisfied with her creations. She gets giddy at seeing well crafted items and is open to friendly advice.
Current Home: Ponyville
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PostSubject: Re: OC Character Thread 2 (This thread is now locked, please use the OC Character Thread 3 above)   Sun Oct 11, 2015 6:44 pm

Lorthalis of Crows wrote:
Name: The Sidereal Twins

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PostSubject: Re: OC Character Thread 2 (This thread is now locked, please use the OC Character Thread 3 above)   Sun Oct 11, 2015 11:12 pm

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Name: Haruspex

...and the only one there was Viridian...

My character is still alive, hun. Wink I know, just a coincidence.


One of the serious hazards of listing out all your special abilities in specific terms is that it makes the character seem vastly more powerful than they actually are. Fortunately, for a spirit-possessed zebra who's bigger than he was when un-possessed, he's reasonable. Approved.
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PostSubject: Re: OC Character Thread 2 (This thread is now locked, please use the OC Character Thread 3 above)   Sun Oct 11, 2015 11:13 pm

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Name: Sonatine Lullaby

A good siren. Smile Approved.
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PostSubject: Re: OC Character Thread 2 (This thread is now locked, please use the OC Character Thread 3 above)   Mon Oct 12, 2015 12:18 am

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Name: Storm Blower

Approved.

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Name: Silver Armor

Approved. Next time, please remember and hold to the "one per sheet" standard unless you ask permission from me to do otherwise.
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PostSubject: Re: OC Character Thread 2 (This thread is now locked, please use the OC Character Thread 3 above)   Mon Oct 12, 2015 6:26 am

Name: Nox

Race: Alicorn

Age: a little over 400 years old

Mane: black; ethereal

Coat: dark grey

Cutie Mark: a black circle

Extra details: violet eyes

Distinguishing Features: when in public, Nox takes on a disguise by suppressing her powers; this makes her weaker, shorter, lighter in color, and her mane and tail do not flow: they are completely solid, and very curly; when she does this, she typically goes by New Moon

Specialty: control shadows (darkness, size, shape, and location), shadow teleportation, night vision, sneaking (and stalking), shadow sphere (sphere of absolute darkness; only she can see in it), offensive spells, shield spells, agility, can also imitate several monster and animal noises

Weaknesses: Nox has to be careful not to overwork herself; while having fought monsters most of her life, she is not actually trained in combat; her shadow dome hinders her sight, though it doesn’t make her completely blind, like it does to everypony else; while Nox can squeeze through small shadows, they can’t be too small (they also can’t be too light and need definable borders); the more intense a light, the harder it is for her to make/maintain the shadow

Occupation: monster hunter (self-designated)

Gear: a Bag of Holding around her neck with: a Swiss Army knife, numerous books for various things, emergency food and water supplies, several note and sketchbooks, and an assortment of pens, pencils, and pencil sharpeners

History: Nox’s earliest history goes back to an orphanage in the young Hollow Shades. She was the well-known “newborn left at the doorstep” case, with her name written on a card that she was left to gum on. Her race was mistaken for a birth defect that would need to be fixed with surgery later in her life. Because of this, Nox had trouble getting adopted, because potential parents either couldn’t afford the surgery, or simply didn’t want the extra work that comes with a deformed foal.

Nox’s supposed deformities gave her trouble both in and out of school. Not only did some of her classmates and fellow orphans bully her, but some adults very openly looked down on her as well. This isn’t mentioning the ponies who, while they didn’t actively bully (usually), didn’t help her situation, either. Nox did have close friends, though: her four friends, one of whom was an adult who liked to explore the forests surrounding Hollow Shades and helped encourage and develop Nox’s sense of curiosity and adventure. Three more ponies were also very important to Nox: two of them, the owners of the orphanage, who were like Nox’s mothers while she didn’t have parents. The third pony was her favorite teacher.

Nox finally got adopted when she was 13. Not long after, her new parents decided it’d be a good idea to try and contact Princess Celestia, since Nox’s wings and horn still hadn’t shown weakness that would indicate they shouldn’t be there; in fact, she was more powerful than most of the ponies in the village, pegasus, unicorn, and earth pony alike. They sent the Princess a letter, which got lost, and waited months for a response. Disheartened, but not willing to give up, they tried again, and though the letter did make it to its destination that time (at least, it got to Canterlot), it got eaten in a parasprite swarm. Third time’s a charm, right? No. There was a fire in the Canterlot post office. Finally, Nox and her family gave up, believing that if Princess Celestia (apparently) didn’t find it worth consideration, neither should they.

Meanwhile, Nox was beginning to make some of the villagers uneasy. As her being an alicorn began to seem more and more likely, and adding her dark appearance, the villagers began to fearfully wonder what that might mean for them. If Nox really was an alicorn… where did she come from? What was she an alicorn of? Why did she bear such a resemblance to Nightmare Moon? Was she possibly some sort of reincarnation, or a powerful projection cast all the way from the moon? They had no idea what the answer might be, and in some eyes, all answers were equally likely. Others, however, didn’t think so severely of it; in their eyes, there were two likely possibilities: they were high-functioning deformities (it makes more sense in concept than it does trying to explain), or Nox was a new kind of pony: a pegacorn. Only slightly more powerful than the average pony.

Skip to when Nox is 16. She wanted to find out exactly how powerful her magic was, still intrigued by possibly being an alicorn. Her friends wanted to watch. Nox exerts herself too much, her magic goes out of control, firing off several high-powered spells at once, one of which teleports one of her friends away. This magical outburst causes Nox to grow several inches, her coat and mane become darker, and her mane becomes ethereal.

Nox, her friends, family, and many other ponies spend months looking for her friend, but the efforts are in vain.

Soon after her magical burst, Nox discovers she is rather good at controlling shadows: darkness, size, shape, location, etc. This, on top of indirectly causing her friend’s probable death, gains rather negative attention from the townsponies. They grow suspicious, scared, and angry. Her friends and family are scared that she’s going down a bad road, experimenting with dark magic, and try to make her stop messing with the shadows ("You've already been marked by [dark magic]! [referring to her mane] Please, stop while you can still turn your back on it!"). Naturally, being accused of playing with dark magic upsets Nox.

Finally, a stranger comes into town and hears all of the rumors about Nox flying around, and once he sees Nox for himself, he decides something needs to be done about her. He gets the village riled up by calling Nox, among other things, "the Alicorn of Darkness" and says she needs to be stopped before she can grow more powerful and pose a serious threat to Equestria. There’s a song and everything.

Nox has had enough and stands up for herself, yells at them all for assuming she's becoming evil because she can control shadows, says they wouldn't know actual dark magic if it bit them in the face, and that she won't stop her shadow-bending [not what she calls it, but I needed a term] because darkness is not inherently evil. This is when she earns her cutie mark.

Unfortunately, her speech does not work. The ponies still think she’s evil, and not even her family or friends will defend her. The ponies attempt to capture her so Celestia can do something about her, but she manages to outrun them and escape into the woods.

From then to the Equestrian present, Nox travels all over Equestria, fighting monsters and all sorts of bad guys, and sometimes dealing with other things, believing she can at least make a dent in the stigma that the dark only has evil things to offer, and to just plain make the dark safer for ponies and all others.

Personality: Nox is a very curious pony: she loves secrets and hidden things. She’ll explore caves and forests and ruins as much as she feels she safely can. She’s quite nosey, though she does her best to be subtle and clever about it and will take a secret to the grave if she has to for some reason. Nox has a knack for detective work; she likes to know every detail of the situation that she can, to minimize her chances of harming an innocent. She is very good at reading ponies (for somepony who avoids them as much as possible), and she herself can be very hard to read.

Nox is over 400 years old, and spends most of that time actively avoiding ponies as much as she possibly can, in (not statistically unreasonable) fear of results similar to what she was met with in Hollow Shades. As a result, she’s rather old fashioned, and socially inept. And kinda bigoted, though she will try to rectify such mentalities if she is made aware of them. In a fight, she is efficient: “pray your opponent is an evil man” very much applies to her; she isn’t going to mess around, though that far from makes her merciless. Her goal from fight to fight will vary depending on how well she understands the situation.

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Current Home: N/A

Misc: she has a pet phoenix named Pyra.

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PostSubject: Re: OC Character Thread 2 (This thread is now locked, please use the OC Character Thread 3 above)   Mon Oct 12, 2015 7:10 pm

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PostSubject: Re: OC Character Thread 2 (This thread is now locked, please use the OC Character Thread 3 above)   Wed Oct 14, 2015 3:02 am

Name: Indicus Vencule
Race: Threshal,Unicorn (Unicorn but with a sharp horn, cat-like eyes and fangs)
Age: 39
Mane: grey
Coat:dark grey
Cutie mark.: knife through a skull
Extra details that aren't needed but are nice to add: multiple cuts and burns all over his body
Distinguishing Features: sharp fangs and horn along with grey cat like eyes.

Specialty (eg. special spells, unique powers etc): Shadow magic (Can manipulate shadows even make them into physical objects with enough power.)

Weaknesses: decreased endurance and magic in direct daylight
Occupation: mostly mercenary for hire
Gear: lunar guard armor, sword, daggers, armor from his time serving his home country

History: Born in the small town of West Clairson, apart of the country Thalemn. Indicus never knew his father or mother but instead was later adopted at the age of three by a Griffin and pony that lived there. He was given the name Indicus, a Griffin name by his adopted parents.

Through his childhood he was quiet and observed everything around him, thus making only a few friends. He even accidentally snuck up on his friends multiple times earning him the nickname Shadow Dancer. During that time he also learned how to use his magic. Later becoming the Apprentice of a old unicorn that took notice of Indicus and taught him how to control and use shadow magic.

He was eighteen, when he left his home to sign up for the Thalemn Army. At Nineteen he completed all his training and was officially part of the Marines. He received his Skill Mark (AKA cutie mark) during his second deployment, a stealth operation and his first kill from stealth.

At the age of thirty, he retired from the Marines, and returned home, hoping to relax after twelve years of service during which he was a commander and lost some good friends. Now away from the conflicts and drawing his pension.

At thirty-two, Equestria got its Lunar princess back, and she was looking to recruit for her branch of the military. He received a letter saying that she received his dossier and was inviting him to be a squad leader. He refused for many years.

Age thirty-five, his parents were robbed and killed, a funeral was held the following day. A month later he joined the Lunar Special forces to help him forget.

Age thirty-nine he resigns from the Lunar special forces after losing even more of those in his squad.

Personality: not too talkative after quitting the Lunar Special forces, very direct and will speak his mind, before quitting the Lunar Special forces he was quite easy going and friendly.
Current Home: ponyville (No interaction with Main 6)
Misc: (Will adjust to any RP just ask.)


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PostSubject: Re: OC Character Thread 2 (This thread is now locked, please use the OC Character Thread 3 above)   Thu Oct 15, 2015 2:04 am

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Name: Indicus Vencule

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PostSubject: Re: OC Character Thread 2 (This thread is now locked, please use the OC Character Thread 3 above)   Sat Oct 17, 2015 11:55 pm

Name: Ishkar
Race: Half Demon Earth Pony
Age: 1870 years old
Mane: Silvery Grey much like the Pale moon and it comes down past his shoulders and across his back. The mane is parted to the side so it is pointed to his right.
Coat: His fur a light coal black layer mixed with some Midnight blue in the fur along his neck and face.
Cutie mark.: A piece of skin with a needle weaving in and out leaving a thread behind while exposing some flesh.
Extra details that aren't needed but are nice to add: Whenever he is out and about is when he wears Black slacks, a white button up shirt with the sleeves rolled up, and a buttoned up sleeveless black vest. If he is going to something formal then he wears red suit pants and a red suit jacket covering his torso.
Distinguishing Features: His eyes lightly glow orange, his ears are that more of a wolf then pony. Lastly his mouth bears four sharp canines.
Specialty (eg. special spells, unique powers etc): Having spent years in his trade as a doctor, he got really good at stitching together and treating illnesses. Making remedies for the sick became almost second nature for him but he grew bored in his immortality and decided that his skill with the blade for heal was enough, why couldn't he use the blade for death? Off to the side he trained hard to become an assassin, to finally end all these meaningless bloodshed and kill those that stood in the way. Spending the last Six hundred years mastering the art of his assassin's knife  and fighting weapons bigger than his blade was. Being a half demon he could never age and his strength, speed, agility, and endurance are unearthly in nature. Having only a tiny amount of magic in the form of a wyeld reconstruction  spell and a death knell to prevent the dead from being raised.
Weaknesses: Being Half Demon he is just as affected by sacred artifacts and rituals, magic can stop him since his own his very weak. His body can be just as hurt if he were a regular pony, so if any catches him off guard then they can kill him easily.
Occupation: Doctor/assassin/Dark Queller
Gear: His leather doctor's bag, his medical tools, a case of remedy and poison makers, lastly his assassin's blade
History: When your father, A powerful demon, decides to fall in love with a mortal woman is where Ishkar was born. Between a relationship where his father left his family in order to protect the Mortal woman he cared deeply for while Ishkar's mother taught him the ways of ponies instead of how to be a demon. His road through childhood was not easy, the adults feared him, murmuring and growling at him while the children ridiculed for him being different. At that time Ishkar didn't understand but his mother often weep for him... How she had created him to only suffer. The years turned to memory as he continued on in his learning, watching the slow and bitter wear of time decay away his mother and all he once knew. See how fragile these lives were for these mortals, he opened up a doctoring practice after getting his license. Over time really getting good at treating ponies but it was never enough... Always gang violence or some other form put these fair ponies back in.Training himself he learned how to defend these ponies and what they stood for. Cutting off the heads of organizations that threatened that peace. Finding a cave along his travels, he named it the citadel of Blue and red flame, a place where he stored stuff for the time being.
Personality: Well-mannered, yet overly dramatic overshadowing his appearance of a ruthless businessman and gamer, yet pony of his word. When sufficiently provoked, he can have a temper. He is also notable for his foppish manner, dandified appearance,
Current Home: Outskirts of Canterlot
Misc: He does like to show off when he can, he loves the spotlight.


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PostSubject: Re: OC Character Thread 2 (This thread is now locked, please use the OC Character Thread 3 above)   Sun Oct 18, 2015 5:00 am

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Name: Ishkar

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PostSubject: Re: OC Character Thread 2 (This thread is now locked, please use the OC Character Thread 3 above)   Mon Oct 19, 2015 5:37 am

Name: Evening Song
Race: Pegasus
Age: 27
Mane: Yellow and Blue
Coat: Dark Blue
Cutie mark.: A yellow seven-pointed star with an eighth note in the middle

For a clearer image of Evening Song, have a look at one of my favorite images of her: http://illiweb.com/fa/pbucket.gif

Distinguishing Features: Over-large wings, short but fluffy fetlocks, and a ready smile
Specialty (eg. special spells, unique powers etc): Evening Song's talent is singing, and she has a huge vocal range. She also composes music and both parody and original lyrics. She is an avid night-flyer, and on her extra-long wings can soar for hours without ill effect. One of her strongest abilities outside music is her uncanny knack for being able to tell what others are thinking and feeling. In addition, she has tremendous willpower and is rarely frightened.
Weaknesses: To her shame she is afraid of falling out of control; it doesn't come up often, but it's one of the few things that can really scare her. She's also not a very agile flyer: she cannot corner quickly, and hovering takes a lot of effort. She carries a torch for Princess Luna, and uses her name in imprecations rather than Celestia's.
Occupation: Music teacher and performer.
Gear: A shoulder bag that tucks under her wing and contains daily sundries, staff paper, and writing instruments. She also has an amulet infused with the light of the Sun; it can be charged by absorbing low-level magic cast at or near it (but not much or often).

Background: Born to a professional performer (her dam) and one of the Royal Guard (her sire), Evening Song started life rather fortunate, and this continued as she grew up. She loved to sing from an early age and as she explored this was lauded for having some real talent - and it turned out to manifest as her cutie mark as well. Her head is full of music all the time, and it pours out of her whenever she feels happy and safe. Her one wish is that she could capture it more easily: composing is a skill that she is still working on. The near constant flow of melody she trances out on sometimes has yet to manifest much on paper.

Evening also has a tremendous love of flying. She’s not fast like Rainbow Dash or agile like the Wonderbolts, she just adores being in the air. Soaring on the wind, watching the world float by below her, is a great pleasure. Only singing under a night sky can make her feel more beauty or more alive. She also takes particular delight in the stars and moon, which inspire her like nothing found in daytime. Because of this she feels more reverence for Her Majesty Princess Luna than for Her Majesty Princess Celestia, and while once she feared the latter ever finding out, recent events have solidified her faith and devotion to Luna.

Part of how she developed her will and lack of fear was through some rather harrowing experiences with a unicorn called Atramenta. These left her right wing with a mar in the feather pattern and a tracery of scars on some areas of her skin that isn’t normally visible but can be felt by anypony she lets close enough. In spite of what she went through she is still a staunch protector of those around her, especially foals, and struggles against evil as much as anypony can who is only a pegasus who sings.
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PostSubject: Re: OC Character Thread 2 (This thread is now locked, please use the OC Character Thread 3 above)   Mon Oct 19, 2015 5:48 am

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Name: Evening Song

Approved, with enthusiasm. Smile A nice, clean, uncontroversial character with something nice about them. Excellent way to introduce yourself.
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PostSubject: Re: OC Character Thread 2 (This thread is now locked, please use the OC Character Thread 3 above)   Wed Oct 21, 2015 12:24 pm

Name: Kiryuu
Race: Dragon [cyborg]
Age: 25
Mane: [Mythril] Silver
Coat:Black
Cutie mark.: N/A
Extra details that aren't needed but are nice to add:   Serving as a hybrid pleasure gynoid and combat robot, her body is comprised of a reinforced titanium skeleton connected by cables of Electroactive polymers coated over by a black flesh-like latex comprised of Spectra{artificial spider silk] resulting in a skin that's soft to the touch, but strong enough to resist most small-caliber bullets[9mm aand smaller], her silvery armor is comprised of Mythril, a chemical amalgam of Yttrium and Silver[named such because it acts ALMOST identically to the metal from Tolkein's Middle Earth settng.
Distinguishing Features: Kiryuu's 'flesh' is semi-glossy rubbery black, her eyes are solid yellow and glow, and she is noemally clad in mythril plate armor.
Specialty (eg. special spells, unique powers etc): Kiryuu is a combat cyborg capable of self-repair and upgrading as needed and, under optimal circumstances, capable of weildng high-tech weaponry.  While in Equestria, her synthetic flesh is solid living flesh and her titanium skeleton is, instead, 'living metal', much like a high-end magitek golem.
Weaknesses:  Kiryuu originates in a magical deadzone, ergo she is not equipped with defenses against magical abilities and/or weaponry.  Note: Kiryuu CANNOT enter a kaiju state.
Occupation: Monster Hunter
Gear: Mythril Armor
History: Kiryu's brain was, originally, a failed attempt to clone and hybridize the DNA of the original Godzilla with human and angelic DNA.  While the result failed, the brain, which is still growing, was salvaged and given a new body to continue living and growing.  After 'The Bridge', Kiryuu was among the Nephilim, alongside Tytanna, to head to Equestria.
Personality: Kiryuu is often very formal and, unless pushed, very calm.  She takes things slowly and analyses situations before acting.  Also likes to pretend she's a full-on robot, to mess with peoples' heads.
Current Home: Wandering
Misc:  Following is a picture of Kiryuu.


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PostSubject: Re: OC Character Thread 2 (This thread is now locked, please use the OC Character Thread 3 above)   Wed Oct 21, 2015 8:38 pm

Name: Razz Tazz

Race: Pegasus

Age: 24

Mane: Short, pearl white mane that is swept to the left

Coat: Hot pink (Razzmatazz) with short fur

Cutie mark.: A brilliant white bass clef

Extra details that aren't needed but are nice to add: She has bottle green eyes.

Distinguishing Features: A small notch of her right ear is missing, and one of her front teeth is chipped.

Specialty (eg. special spells, unique powers etc): Her quiet, refined voice has the ability to put ponies to sleep, depending on if they are tired or intoxicated enough.

Weaknesses: She can sometimes be childish, whiny and irritating for the ponies around her, especially if she does not get what she wants. This trait also deeply embarrasses her whenever it is brought up in conversation.

Occupation: Lead singer for the jazz band 'The Shore'. She's also a lyricist in her spare time.

Gear: She usually wears a thick red jacket with a collar that rises up to her where her ears begin, alongside a knot-tied, stripey green scarf that covers her breast.

History: When she was a small foal, she lived on a farm with her father, a raspberry farmer, on the outskirts of Manehatten. She would spend her time singing as she pranced about collecting berries. She grew up without a mother, due to her walking out of her life at a very young age. This meant that she has become a daddy's girl, and can often get uncomfortable around other females whenever they start participating in feminine activities.

She got her cutie mark during a violent storm one night. Her father was still out in the fields somewhere, and could not find his way back. When the cacophony of rain and thunder drowned out her cries for her father, she resorted to the only thing she knew how to do. Her soft singing somehow made it past all the noise and acted as a beacon to guide her father home. When her father came home, drenched beyond compare, he immediately scooped Razz up in a hug at the sight of her cutie mark appearing.

Razz spent her teenage years as a rambunctious troublemaker, always playing pranks and getting into scuffles with other colts in the neighborhood. One particular incident caused her to chip a tooth and cut a notch in her ear, when a prank gone wrong surprised another young unicorn so much that a sudden magical discharge knocked her out of the tree she was hiding in. The subsequent hospital visit told her that her injuries, whilst minor, was permanent due to the heavy amount of raw magic in play.

When she eventually came of age to venture out on her own, her father gifted her with the jacket he had worn when he was just a colt. The bright red cotton jacket was slightly too big for her, but she treasured it always. She traveled to the heart of Manehatten. There, at a hole in the wall pub, she met with a young colt named Frett. The two quickly made fast friends, thanks to their shared love of music. Together, the two formed the contemporary jazz band 'The Shore', which took Equestria by storm.

Personality: Razz tries her very best to be a polite and demure mare in the face of other ponies, but will often resort to whining and heavy sarcasm in the event that a pony annoys her.

Current Home: Manehatten

Misc: Razz and Frett are not an item.


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PostSubject: Re: OC Character Thread 2 (This thread is now locked, please use the OC Character Thread 3 above)   Thu Oct 22, 2015 12:10 am

Name: Blood Tears
Race: Chaos Touched Thestral
Age: 26
Mane: Obsidian black but with two lines of red starting from his eyes and going around his long mane. He keeps his mane fairly long to about the base of his neck.
Coat: Once black now mostly an ashen grey with some spots of black around his demonic claws. Getting on his upper half the fur turns to a slight tan and grey mix that reaches all the way to his eyes but there from his eyes down his muzzle is blood red. Traveling two lines of blood red down his chest and disappearing.
Cutie mark.: Slightly distorted but still quite disturbing in sight. Having a blood red hammer above a body of a gargoyle. Red spirits screaming and wailing in pain as they are drawn into the body, their tails stuck inside the stone body of the Gargoyle.  
Extra details that aren't needed but are nice to add: He wears very little normally, if anything he wears a Shendyt when he feels like it, otherwise he doesn’t wear much. He owns a hell forge from which he builds his weapons and creatures for those interested, protecting the citadel from those that would use the powers of the forge for more devastating purposes. The citadel is located within a mountain’s side and the only way one can tell it exists is by the looming stone gates protecting the front with its ever vigilant guards.  
Distinguishing Features: Being other than a thestral, his eyes glow lightly from the flame imbued into his flesh. There are changes how his general visage is altered to more like a flame but otherwise he is fairly similar to the regular kind.
Specialty (eg. special spells, unique powers etc): Imbued through unholy arts to create weapons and creatures of stone or metal for those that wish of it. Using some of the chaos essence found throughout the world plus a bit of a lost soul to animate any creature of stone or metal. He can create gargoyles, elementals, and construct. He can craft magical weapons and armor due to his knowledge of the magical world but he is somewhat limited to the affinity of the similar powers, he cannot create any weapon with a light base but anything else he can work on with some taking longer than others. Limited to lesser powerful creatures and magical items, he cannot create anything on a god like scale but rather down to the lower end of medium power and lower powered stuff.
Weaknesses: Having not much weapon training himself, he relies on the strength of his creations to protect him from any who would wish him harm. Magic involving any other element other than fire, metal, earth or chaos then he will be severely weakened.
Occupation: Blacksmith/Demon Crafter
Gear: He normally carries the forge hammer and a few other personal items when it comes to his armor maintaining skills. He also carries several kits to maintain a creature or weapons others bring along for the trip.
History: He was once a commoner, nothing out of the ordinary… lived a common life, ate peacefully with no complaints and was happy toiling away in his forge day in and day out. Always working to provide for his family.... He was happy... But life often takes away what makes us most happy and that happened on the day when the world itself fell into chaos. Discord escaped his prison, the stone statue in the middle of the Canterlot garden, when that happened chaos was once awaked to the land. Without Discord knowing, monsters rose in the dark places of the world. The chaos manifesting in terrible forms and visages not seen for many years. These monsters created anew rose from their slumber but with one intent… to cause destruction to the world of order.
Rampaging out of their dark forest homes, they scanned the horizon to spot the only home around… Blood Tear’s log cabin. They came bursting through his door but not without cost, even the non-experienced Blood Tears was able to strike his axe three times, felling two beasts and one monster had its arm cleaved clean. Unfortunately it wasn’t enough, subduing his family, the monsters began to kill his family off… one by one… forcing him to watch the gruesome pictures forever scarred into his mind. On that day something snapped inside him, his mind committed to the madness but on the very edge just waiting to be pushed into the oblivion that awaited him.
Before these monsters would leave, the monster who Blood Tears sliced his arm off paid him back for what he had done. Stabbing Blood Tears in the stomach, with his blood soaked claw that he still had attached, right in his stomach. The chaos infused monster blood flowed through him. Corrupting him from the inside out as he was left there to die. On that day it was said he cried so hard that his eyes bled. Cast into the madness he wandered for a bit, his body bleeding still till he was found by a peculiar half demon named Ishkar who helped regained his mind and Ishkar led the pony to the Citadel of the Blue and Red flame where he was left to his own devices for a while to see what he could do with his new founded abilities. From there he created his forge and began to craft but the chaos influenced his actions from there forth out, creating creatures and artifacts if power.
Personality: Mostly closed himself off from the world, he can be blunt and a little condescending but he still has a heart of gold that cares for those close to him.
Current Home: The Citadel of Red and Blue Flame
Misc: One day... He might be healed in his mind all the way but those memories are a terrible burden, he doesn't sleep much because of the nightmares.


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PostSubject: Re: OC Character Thread 2 (This thread is now locked, please use the OC Character Thread 3 above)   Thu Oct 22, 2015 4:43 am

Name: Ivy Fleur
Race: Once a Unicorn, now a Succubus Unicorn.
Age: Unknown, but she thinks she is in her mid twenties.
Mane: Her mane is fairly short, kept no longer then her muzzle in the front while the rest of her mane is kept to the base of her neck.  Her hair is a beautiful and radiant fiery neon crystal pink with a single black band running down her mane. Her tail is much the same in style and design save for the tail being a lot curlier around the end of the tail, a lot poofier as well.
Coat: Her white fur a pearl white, several places along her fur there is black spots. Around her eyes there are two black spots, there are several more along her back and her sides. A few black spots on her chest are in the shape of a black heart.
Cutie mark.: A ink black heart with two horns and a white half skull in the mil
Extra details that aren't needed but are nice to add: Her most favorite thing to wear is her full leather outfit, but most of the time she wears some fishnet and leather stockings other wise. Another thing to add is her eyes glow bright red. She is a full bodied herm, full in everything.
Distinguishing Features: She has two long horns that stick out of her head and she can go full succubi if she chooses to transform.
Specialty (eg. special spells, unique powers etc):
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"Ivy has control over her blood and sexual fluids while outside of her body, allowing her to weaponise it or use it for other purposes as her fluids take the form of a thick ink in her succubus state.".
Her primary skill is that of a seamstress, she loves sowing much like she did long ago but she is a very good at hand to hand combat. She can subdue her foes and her hooves are actually made of stone so she can block blades with her hooves.
Weaknesses: Have no real way to defend herself from weapons other then her hooves, she can potentially be out flanked or maneuvered by a foe. She can be hit by magic and more of the time she wouldn't fight .
Occupation: Seamstress and Assistant to Blood Tears
Gear: Not much...
History: Once Ivy had been a seamstress, not all that different from the others save for her knowledge of leather bindings. She fell in love but behind the scenes another pony lusted after her. He broke into her home, but in the scuffle the blade was sunk right into her chest but death did not welcome her with open arms... Her soul was stolen away and darkness saw potential in her, granting her powers of a succubi. Sent back to this world in a ghostly area of the world, just outside of the citadel of the red and blue flame, she wandered up a mountain's slope

There she found Ishkar and Blood Tears, instantly taking care of the ruined pony and setting up shop in the citadel as Ishkar taught her how to care and fend for herself at the same time developing hand to hand combat skills.
Personality: She is quite carefree and flirty, likes to have fun with completely random strangers. Though when it comes to her work she tends to be playful and prideful that she can make anything a pony or other species what they want from cloth or really light leather.
Current Home: The Citadel of the Red and Blue Flame
Misc: She cares deeply for Blood Tears, she wants to help and care for him.


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PostSubject: Re: OC Character Thread 2 (This thread is now locked, please use the OC Character Thread 3 above)   Thu Oct 22, 2015 6:43 am

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Name: Razz Tazz

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PostSubject: Re: OC Character Thread 2 (This thread is now locked, please use the OC Character Thread 3 above)   Thu Oct 22, 2015 6:56 am

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Name: Blood Tears

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PostSubject: Re: OC Character Thread 2 (This thread is now locked, please use the OC Character Thread 3 above)   Thu Oct 22, 2015 7:04 am

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Name: Ivy Fleur

Heh... well, OK. It's so pointlessly Rube Goldberg that it really ought to be stopped but... that's only an opinion. Character approved.


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PostSubject: Re: OC Character Thread 2 (This thread is now locked, please use the OC Character Thread 3 above)   Sat Oct 24, 2015 12:26 am

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Name: Kiryuu

Small change, but more than enough. Approved.
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