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Name: Impes Inpono

Given your frequency of posting characters, Aes, I'm becoming concerned that you're closing in on your numerical limit...

However, both because the character passes my standards and because I was weeping IRL and hoping for a good character to approve and you gave me one, this character is approved. Plus, "best lay EVER" amuses me as a concept.
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Name: Equinox

Race: Thestral/Batpony

Age: 41

Mane: Blue and silver pattern (picture for reference), usually cut fairly short.

Coat: Onyx

Cutie mark.: A sun rising over a mountain range

Extra details that aren't needed but are nice to add: Minor case of Coloboma, causes a brown "run off" from his otherwise green left eye down to the edge of his iris (for more simple description; from his pupil he has a brown mark running across his iris as if his eye is leaking).

Distinguishing Features: The aforementioned eye defect, in addition Equinox has a tattoo of a sun on his left shoulder and a full moon on his right.

Specialty (eg. special spells, unique powers etc): A physically well trained stallion in excellent shape, experienced in travelling and survival methods under moderate circumstances.

Weaknesses: Has several nagging injuries such as a bad left hind leg knee due to his tendency toward dangerous activities and expeditions.

Occupation: Freelance explorer/nature writer

Gear: Mountaineering equipment most commonly when on an expedition, also tends to carry a notepad and quill with him.

History: A young thestral from the island of Baleborough, just off the cost of Trottingham and on the edge of Griffon territory, Equinox spent almost all of his childhood exploring his home island and the others nearby, either flying to them or on particular safe days he would swim to them, preferring the feeling of swimming to the feeling of flying though to this day in his writing he insists that the two of them are very similar experiences.

As he grew Equinox found it difficult to find meaningful use for his love of exploration, and jobs as a mailcarrier and weather pony failed to hold his interest. He finally received his chance when he was offered to write a column for the Canterlot Daily News on natural wonders that ponies could go to as possible expedition spots, to encourage activity due to a rash of reports about the fear of exploring the kingdom present in children and their parents at the time.

Since then on top of writing his column on a bi-weekly basis Equinox has also worked with many famous authors in Equestria taking them on expeditions to exotic locations to see locations to be used as inspiration for their books, most notably with Twilight Velvet (author of Escape From Midnight Castle) and AK Yearling (author and creator of the Daring Do franchise).

Personality: Equinox has a tendency to go stir crazy when forced to stay in the same place for too long, hence his expeditions. Equinox's reason for his adventuring is little more than "why not" and he has declined numerous times to get involved in competitions such as racing expeditions or fitness events as he feels they remove the enjoyment element from the activities to have to rush them.

Having seen some of the most amazing sights in Equestria on his routes and some extremely rare events such as viewing a solar eclipse while on a mountain peak above cloud level, Equinox has an appreciation for the natural world and it's secrets; because of this he is also an environmentalist who opposes the idea that such locations should be built on or to for easier access, arguing that the journey is just as important as the destination.

Current Home: Equinox does own a flat in Baleborough however most of his time is spent living at a large campsite he has set up on a small island roughly a mile further out to sea. The island is small and abandoned, with Equinox's campsite being the only actual structure on it. A marquee tent is set up for Equinox where he usually sleeps but he also has a small wooden hut in case he is ill or the weather is too problematic to sleep outdoors.

Misc: Despite working with AK Yearling very frequently, Equinox is not privy to the information that she and Daring Do are one in the same; he simply assumes AK Yearling based Daring Do's appearance on her own.

Equinox has occasionally worked with Princess Luna on conservation efforts, usually regarding rare species of animals or plants which need to be removed from their natural environment for preservation purposes.
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Name: Equinox

Needs more Razor. Everything needs more Razor.

A conservationist batponi... interesting. And approved.
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Name: Artemia Lumos

Race: Alicorn

Age: 987

Mane: Artemia’s mane is a long, tangled mess of dark green

Coat: Her coat is a shade darker than her mane, and is matted

Cutie mark.: Yggdrasil  

Extra details that aren't needed but are nice to add: Artemia is almost always accompanied by a large wolf, who shadows her movements.

Distinguishing Features: Artemia is, as most alicorns are, quite tall, towering above the average pony. Further, she always has a faint, earthy smell that most find pleasant.

Specialty (eg. special spells, unique powers etc): Artemia’s powers stem in her firm belief in the sanctity of nature, and thus, she is an earth mage of the highest calibre. She can manipulate the earth and plants around her with the same ease as a normal pony breathes, though doing so for too long will take its toll on her. Her power is almost god-like in some respects, as she is able to tear the earth apart, create miniature earthquakes or accelerate the growth of plants to their absolute maximum. However, doing any of these activities drains heavily upon her mana pool, leaving her exhausted and defenceless. Her reliance upon nature also grants her several unique abilities. Firstly, her skin in almost stone-like in its resistance to blows, meaning swords have a tougher time cutting her, though once her skin is cut, the flesh inside is easily damaged, as it lacks the same quality. Further, she can commune with animals and plants with ease, with no apparent language barrier when speaking with multiple species.

Weaknesses: Despite her god-like status, Artemia has several large weaknesses. First among them is that she is incredibly slow. She moves much like a glacier, or the expansion rate of a forest. Everything she does is implacable certainly, but she can easily be outmanoeuvred. This means that regardless of Artemia’s power, if you are able to move quickly enough, she will instantly be at a disadvantage. Her stoneskin, though effective against blades, provides no defence against blunt weapons, as it is only her skin that is like stone, and therefore she can suffer internal injuries easily enough. The stoneskin also provides a weakness in that it makes her incredibly difficult to treat, as it takes quite the effort to merely cut her skin. She also has two large weaknesses regarding the elements. Ice and fire are both exceedingly effective against Artemia, any sort of cold beyond mild slowing her down, and making her responses sluggish at best, whilst fire will burn her far more than a normal flame should, the heat from a candle flame enough to inflict second degree burns against her after contact for more than a few seconds. Further still, despite being called a Goddess, Artemia can be killed. Anything that may kill an ordinary pony can eventually kill Artemia, though it will take quite a few more strokes of a sword than normal. Finally, despite her near perfect ability to speak with animals, Artemia lacks even the most basic form of equestrian, meaning it is completely impossible for her to speak with other ponies.

Occupation: Artemia serves as the Everfree Forest’s protector of sorts, able to deal with threats that the forest is incapable of defending itself against.

Gear: Aretmia does not carry much in the way of the conventional gear, indeed, the only piece of equipment she carries is a small, hoof-carved necklace that bears her name.

History: As a child, Artemia was abandoned by her parents, left in a small forest to die so that the parents would not be persecuted by the rest of the village for having a ‘mutant’ for a daughter. Alone, cold and with no-one even remotely nearby, Artemia did the only thing she could; curl up, shiver and start to cry. Fortunately for her, an old wolf, whose own children had died, discovered the crying foal and curled up around her and kept her warm through the night.

The rest of Artemia’s young life was spent with the old wolf, who taught her to survive in the forest, and how to protect herself against predators. It was around this time that Artemia’s magic began to manifest itself, plants and animals growing faster, and their injuries healing quicker whilst they were around her.  She also began to understand what the animals were saying, her magic granting her the innate ability to speak with them, and for the first time, she was able to thank the wolf for saving her.

All things must come to an end though, and even with Artemia’s magic now sustaining her, the old wolf died. Despair and anger filled Artemia, her every breath cracking the ground around her as her fury unlocked her last vestige of hidden power. She snapped, and began to destroy the forest apart around her, the ground shattering and the plants growing at an exceptional rate. Striding forth, she sought only destruction, something, anything to fill the void in her heart. Her destruction rampage went on for hours before she was confronted by a group of wolves who had come to see what was attacking the forest. It was then that Artemia stopped to see the damage she had inflicted and realise how close she come to annihilating it completely. It was also the moment that her mana finally ran out, and she collapsed to the ground.

After many days, Artemia awoke, still lying in the crater of destruction. Standing groggily, she stumbled away from the disaster area, distraught by the damage she had inflicted. Dragging herself from the crater, it took all her willpower not to scream when she discovered the true cost of her momentary madness, a young filly, with her leg impaled on a spike of rock Artemia had created. Reaching deep inside her, Artemia drew upon all the magic she had, freeing the filly from the stone, and using her power to heal her injury. Around her neck was a small, wooden necklace with the name “Artemia” carved into, and as her breathing eased, Artemia allowed herself a breath of relief.

The filly eventually awoke, and smiled up at Artemia. Still quite weak, she gave the older mare a smile, and a gentle hug. Hugging back, Artemia began to cry quietly. To her, the idea that she had harmed such innocence was unbelievably humbling. The filly continued to smile at her, giving her the necklace before slowly stumbling home, Artemia watching over her the entire way. Vowing never again to wreak such havoc upon the land, Artemia fled the forest, her old home, and never looked back, refusing to see what she had caused, but always keeping the memory of it in her heart, using it to tame and control her powers. She eventually reached the Everfree Forest, still young in those days, and took refuge there, looking after it from the inside. This is also where she met Amadeus, a young, loyal wolf with a hulking frame, who took an instant liking to Artemia and swore to follow her till his death.

Though rare, whenever a pony intrudes upon the Everfree, they can be sure that they are being watched, a pair of piercing golden eyes watching them, ensuring that they do not harm the forest.

Personality: Artemia is fiercely intelligent, and was once quite fiery. Her experience has tempered this flame, leaving her coolly detached at times, able to analyse a situation and then plot a solution. She does not mind the company of others, but she prefers to be alone, or with animals, rather than ponies.

Current Home: Artemia sleeps wherever she wishes, though she does have a small cave in the Everfree which she considers a more permanent home.

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The_Pariah wrote:
Name: Artemia Lumos

Approved. I personally think that the revision to injuring the filly instead of killing her made it a better story and more impactful. I think near-misses are scarier than accidental hits.
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Name: Star Sentinel

Race: Thestral

Age: 16

Mane: Black

Coat: Gray

Cutiemark: Constellation of Scutum

Extra details that aren’t needed but are nice to add: Cat like eyes that are teal.

Distinguishing Features: His bat-like wings, fluffy tipped ears, and sunglasses.

Specialty (eg. special spells, unique powers etc): He has excellent hearing, and can see better in the dark than normal ponies. He is also rather fast and strong for pegasus standards and knows a bit of hoof to hoof combat.

Weaknesses: High pitched noise and when not wearing his glasses he can get blinded by bright lights. He doesn't like talking about his past, much less want to remember anything that happened in his past.

Occupation: Lunar Guard

Gear: Sunglasses, lunar guard armor and a sword that has an engraving of the moon on the hilt.

History: In the time period Star had once lived in, it was in devastation after Discord had ruled. Ponies were suffering and when Celestia and Luna trapped Discord in stone, things got only slightly better. Ponies were still starving and there were more foals in orphanages then they could feed. Some foals were just out right thrown out into the streets to fend for themselves.

When he was a foal, Star was left at an orphanage by his parents. Having no parents and a caretaker who didn’t care about the foals, Star had to learn to grow up faster than what he was supposed to. He met a pale blue unicorn named Sweet Heart. They quickly because best of friends and helped each other out when they were in a pickle.

As he got slightly older, he and Sweet helped the other younger foals. At that time he was about nine years old, but he know more things than any adult would in terms of survival. He knew how to stick to the shadows and when not to be stupid. He knew how to live in the environment Discord had left Equestria in.

One night, and a few other foals including Sweet Heart went out of the orphanage to explore Canterlot, even though Star said they shouldn’t. They went towards the castle, as close as they dared to go without getting in trouble. They saw two guards standing still as statues. They almost through they were statues until one of them sneezed. Star panicked pushed the other foals back towards the orphanage only to be caught by another guard that was patrolling around Canterlot.

Unlucky for them, this particular guard didn’t really like foals and seeing that they weren’t suppose to be roaming around Canterlot made him all the more happy to punish them. Star stood in front of the other foals, intending to protect at all cost. Sweet was with the foals and she was his best friend. He had to protect her and the foals. At that moment a constellation appeared on his flank, marking that he got his cutie mark. This particular constellation, however, represented a shield. It showed that he would protect others from threats no matter the cost.

The guard just laughed at Star and his futile attempt to protect the other foals. While the guard was laughing, however, Star jumped towards him and punched him as hard as he could. The guard was taken back by the sudden punch. He fell to the ground, shocked at the little colt. The guard jumped back to his hooves, drawing his spear and trying to hit Star with the handle.

Star was hit on the head with the handle of the spear, but didn’t move back as Sweet got the foals to move back. He stayed there in front of the other foals. He wouldn’t let this guard get to the others even if he get severely hurt. The guard just stared at him, silently wondering. They both stared each other down.

Star jumped at the guard again. The guard, however, was ready and used his spear to swat Star away. Star landed on the ground hard. The guard raised his spear and brought it down on him. Star covered his head with his hooves, waiting for what was to come, but it never came.

Star moved his hooves away from his head and saw a dark blue shield around him and the other foals. The guard’s spear was on the ground and the guard himself was cowering on the ground, staring at a tall, lanky figure flying in the sky. The figure had both wings and a horn. Star looked at the figure, knowing that he has seen this pony before.

The figure landed right in front of the guard, glaring at him. Able to see more of the figure in the dim moon light, Star could see the pony had a dark purple coat and a starry mane. It then just clicked in Star’s mind who this pony was. It was Princess Luna, the princess of the night. Star watched as Luna’s magic aura wrapped around the guard, and in a flash the guard was gone. Most likely teleported to the dungeon.

The shield around Star and the other foals disappeared, Luna smiling at them all. Star quickly bowed down to Luna, the other foals following his lead. Luna told them to rise and asked them what they were doing exploring Canterlot alone at night and where their parents were.

Star explained to Luna that they were orphans and didn’t have any parents. He also said that they wanted to explore Canterlot at night because they had a lower chance of being caught by an adult. He quickly apologized to Luna for them getting in trouble with a guard.

Luna told Star that it was alright and that he was a very brave pony for standing up to a guard. She told them that they should probably get back to their orphanage before another guard comes by. The other foals quickly ran off leaving Star there with Luna. He quickly hugged one of her forelegs and ran off after the others. Soon after Star caught up with the foals, Sweet kissed Star on the cheek and stuck her tongue at him. Star just shook his head at his friend and continued towards the orphanage.

Later that month, a festival was being held in the center of Canterlot. The festival was dedicated to Starswirl the Bearded. Star and some of the foals from the orphanage attended and looked around at all the stuff. Star and Sweet Heat wandered over to watch a demonstration of Starswirl’s time travel spell.

The ponies that were demonstrating it asked for a volunteer from the audience. Star had asked Sweet if there was even such a thing as time travel. He trusted his friend with knowledge about magic considering she was a unicorn and she should know about magic. Sweet just shrugged and said Star should try and volunteer. What were the chances that he’d be picked out of everyone there anyway? Star raised a hoof to volunteer and somehow by some mirical he was picked to be their test subject. The ponies were pretty sure the spell wouldn’t work and figured it was harmless to try it on a little colt.

Star looked at Sweet for a moment before he flew up onto the stage and stood still, waiting for the ponies to cast the spell. The two ponies wrapped Star in their magic aura and casted the spell. In a flash of bright light Star was gone, shocking both the ponies on the stage and the audience as well as Sweet Heart.

Star had to close his eyes at how bright the flash was, and when he opened his eyes he saw he wasn’t on a stage anymore. He was standing on a cobblestone path leading into a small town. Wondering where he was, Star followed the path into the small town.

Once in the town, Star looked around at the builds, noticing they weren’t like the building in Canterlot. He quickly crossed out being in Canterlot as a no brainer, because the town wasn’t on the side of a mountain and he could see Canterlot in the distance.

He considered asking one of the ponies in the small town where he was, but decided against it because they would find out he’s not from this town. Something clicked in him mind that seemed to elude him earlier. He didn’t remember a town being anywhere near the base of the mountain that Canterlot resided on.

Star wondered if there was a library in the small town, spreading his wings and flying, he flew around the town. He had to learn at least where he was and if that time travel spell had actually worked or not. Of course, he was a bit worried about leaving Sweet all alone in Canterlot, but was sure she’d be fine.

Star stopped in the air when he saw a giant tree that looked like it was made into a house. He landed in front of a window and looked inside. Seeing bookshelves and books, he ran inside the tree and started searching for what town this was and when it was built.

He searched hours on end and didn’t find anything. Just as he was about to give up he found a book called “Predictions and Prophecies”. It told about a Mare in the Moon and the Elements of Harmony. Star didn’t really understand what the book was saying, but was pretty sure there wasn’t a mare in the moon the last time he checked.

Star closed the book and put it aside for a later time, continuing his search for what town he was in. Instead of find the name of the town he was in he found more information on the Mare in the Moon and a pony named Nightmare Moon.

Convinced he wouldn’t find the name of the town in the books, he just started to read about Nightmare Moon and how the pony was sent to the moon. The more he read, however, the more the pieces started to line up. From the spell that was suppose to teleport him in time to the legend of the Mare in the Moon and Nightmare Moon.

Star was too focused on to books he never even noticed when the sun went down. He did, however, notice that he was sleepy. He just continued to studying the books and tried to make sense of it all.

The next morning, Star woke up to some crazy pink pony shaking him. The pink pony quickly said to go to the park and meet an orphanage caretaker by the fountain. The pink pony put the books he was looking back on the shelves and zoomed off, grabbing Star on her way out.

When the pink pony finally stopped, Star was practically screaming in terror. After all, he was just rudely awaken was carried all the way to the park by a crazy pony. The pink pony dropped him down in front of an earth pony mare who looked at the pink pony curiously. The pink pony just smiled then zoomed off.

The pony asked if Star was an orphan like that pink pony said he was. At first, Star was hesitant to answer, but after a few moments he said yes. The pony seemed to smile even more at Star. The pony started to walk away, Star following close behind for reasons unknown to even himself.

The pony walked over to a building, walking inside. Star poked his head inside and saw other foals playing around, jumping on bunk beds and playing tag. Star’s eyes widened jsut a bit when he realized what kind of build this was. It was an orphanage and this pony was the caretaker of the orphanage. As small smile crept onto his mouth as he walked in and played with the other foals. He figured if the other foals were happy then the caretaker had to be nice. His thoughts were proven right over the years.

A few years later, Star had lived in the orphanage with the other foals in Ponyville, learning the name of the town when he was brought to the schoolhouse to learn. He had forgotten about the books he was researching when he first got to Ponyville and about Sweet Heart. Only a few months ago did he remember what he was researching because Nightmare Moon returned and Princess Luna was made co-ruler of Equestria again. He was also reminded of his best friend and how she was probably lost to time by now.

He thought he owed a debt he need to repay for that night Luna saved him and wanted to do something for Sweet Heart since he had forgotten about her. He moved away from Ponyville and moved to Canterlot so he could be close to Luna and be a Royal Guard. He trained his hardest to be a guard and when he was accepted he was happy as can be and continued to train with all his might. He wanted to be the best guard he could and be the knight that Sweet had always joked he was.

Personality: He’s a kind brave pony who’s also goofy at times just to make a pony smile. He can also be too serious sometimes like when he’s around Luna or on duty.

Current Home: Canterlot

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Name: Star Sentinel

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Name: Wicked Heart
Race: Amorphous Cursed Earth Pony
Age: 900
Mane: Dark Violet with white highlights
Coat: Sinful Green
Cutie mark.: XXX
Extra details that aren't needed but are nice to add: incapable of having children
Distinguishing Features: constant glowing symbols
Specialty (eg. special spells, unique powers etc): Free morphic shapeshifting. Immortality, Eternal Youth
Weaknesses: Without a constant supply of 'life' she will enter into a dormant state. Life meaning pieces of others soul, or bodily fluids, semen, etc. [essentially no one needs to die for her to get 'life' to keep her out of her dormant state]
Occupation: Call-to-Order Professional Erotic Escort Mare.
Gear: None
History: Originally Wicked Heart was apart of a dark cult that worshipped an unknown god that had been infamously known to be the deity spirit of carnal pleasures. She was not a nice person, and selfishly did things for her own gain and in the name of this deity spirit. She would manipulate and do whatever she could for her own gain. She came from a poor family, and eventually resorted to selling her body to get the bits she needed to survive. Overtime it provided her with a lot of what she needed, and she constantly thanked this deity spirit. Upon her passing her twenty fifth year, she joined her cult in a ritual that was to thank their lord and master. This carnal filled ritual succeeded in that it cursed Wicked Heart into an eternity of worship, her body constantly covered in glowing markings, which gave her immortality, inhumane regenerative powers and the ability to morph her body to whatever she pleased. At first it was thought that it killed her due to her inability to control the power as her lack of focus would actually cause her to liquify. Eventually as she gained control of this power she was able to restore her original appearance. With time passing she'd learn of her immortality at how she constantly kept her same appearance while everyone around her aged and died.

For a time it had driven her mad, to time's she'd purposely tried to kill herself off, but it's only resulted in a mountain of pain, and quick recovery. From blades, to falling, to hanging, to even poison, nothing worked. After the first couple centuries she'd come to accept her fate and and it was around her 250 year where she had come to learn of her dormant state. she was in a dormant state, and she she did she turned into stone. When she next awoken, it was completely by accident where a pony had spit onto what he thought was a statue. Which this 'life' the very little energy she gotten from the spit awakened her and left her with this craving. She soon after this come to realize this curse she had gotten, was the blessing of her deity she worshiped.

she come to return to her old ways of manipulating others for her own selfish gains, eventually she come to live in Canterlot and open her own Escort Service and caters to all kinds of ponies and non-ponies alike to all stretches of Equestria.
Personality: Manipulative, egotistical, and Selfish
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So this is what happens when a Heart goes bad... O_O;;;

*approves and goes to hide under my security blanket*
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You allowed me to do this for the time being, Dual, so. . . here.

Name: The Nebula sisters (group of 7)
-Melody
-Lullaby
-Gothic
-Chime
-Trill
-Shanty
-Diva
The list above goes from youngest to oldest. The rest of this bio will go that way as well.

Race: Sirens (normally go around disguised as ponies)

Age: Varied, but all are over a thousand years old. Physically, they would range from schoolfillies to adolescent mares.

Mane: Varied. Each has a different-colored mane. (This only applies to them in pony form.)
-Melody: golden with white streaks, tied into pigtails at the crown of her head
-Lullaby: gray with dark teal blue streaks, straight and chest-length
-Gothic: mint with chocolate streaks, rather long haircut (about chin-length)
-Chime: peach with orangish-pink streaks, two thin braids from crown to shoulders
-Trill: indigo with cherry streaks, very long hair that can reach flank that behaves as if in water
-Shanty: vermillion with jet-black streaks, bristled bangs and one long wavy ponytail at back of head
-Diva: purple with lemon streaks, long straight-edged hair from head to knees

Coat: Varied. Each has a different color. This is also the color of their scales while they are in siren form.
-Melody: yellow
-Lullaby: silver
-Gothic: forest green
-Chime: orange
-Trill: cyan
-Shanty: blood red
-Diva: lavender

Cutie Marks: Varied (notice that none of them give away their musical talent)
-Melody: a green gemstone
-Lullaby: a purple open book
-Gothic: a brown quill
-Chime: a maroon will-o-wisp
-Trill: a white spool of thread
-Shanty: a black bow-and-arrow
-Diva: a purple horseshoe

Distinguishing Features: The eldest, Diva, has a purple “X” marked on her forehead between her horn and her eyes, the symbol of the alpha of the band. Her deputy is Lullaby, despite her being the second youngest. Lullaby has a small black Eye of Horus on her right forehoof. Trill is considered exceptionally beautiful. It is worth noting that Melody and Trill are pegasi, Gothic and Shanty are earth ponies, and the remaining three are unicorns. All are capable of eating normal food and sustaining themselves with it as much as they are capable of gaining power by doing what sirens normally do. Also, small faceted garnets are embedded into their skin at the base of their throats (no, they cannot be broken).

Specialty: They are all sirens, so they can naturally sing to arouse emotions in other ponies and feed off of them, thus gaining more power. However, unlike the sirens more well-known in Equestrian history books, they can choose to either arouse positive or negative emotions. Sometimes, they have no control over the emotions they cause; if they are carried away by unbridled joy, anger, or etc., so will their song. Their true specialties, though, are Songs of Sins and Songs of Virtues. They are capable of having ponies commit acts of Good or Evil according to the song sung.
-Melody: Greed and Generosity
-Lullaby: Sloth and Zeal
-Gothic: Envy and Love
-Chime: Gluttony and Faith
-Trill: Lust and Chastity (though Song-invoked Lust isn’t as strong as the lust her appearance invokes)
-Shanty: Wrath and Patience
-Diva: Pride and Humility
Singing is not necessary for them to use magic, but that is an entirely different story. (What other magical feats they are capable of differ according to the RP universe they are in.)

Weaknesses: Should any of them choose to send their song into overdrive (singing through unrestrained emotion or using up excess power when in a cinch), they pass out. Upon awakening, they are rendered unable to sing for six hours.

Occupation: All are open for any sort of job, though there are jobs that they like more than others.
-Melody: Any job where she will get decent pay
-Lullaby: Any job that requires more brain than brawn
-Gothic: Any job that’ll allow her to interact with others
-Chime: Any job where she can help others
-Trill: Any job that requires a keen eye
-Shanty: Any job that requires physical actions
-Diva: Any job that she will gain recognition for
All of them are great performers (duh). They can act, dance, sing, do tricks, etc. They prefer concerts over most other types of shows, though.

Gear: They only real “gear” that they possess are their siren gems. IF battle is required, they have a vast array of weapons and other items to assist them.

History: Very little is known about sirens other than their abilities and their origin. The same goes for the Nebula sisters. They are mysterious creatures, and they have the wisdom of many centuries of history (though that doesn’t necessarily mean that they know everything). Rumored to be biologically immortal, their voices sound ever youthful. They’ve seen many generations come and go. But the only facts they are willing to confirm are their magical prowess and the names of their parents. No one knows why their secondary names are the same: Nebula.

Personalities: Varied, but they’re all quite loving towards each other.
-Melody: Daring, stubborn. She likes adventure, so treasure hunts are almost like a hobby to her. She also tends to retaliate a lot, so it takes some patience to deal with someone like her.
-Lullaby: Good-natured, apathetic. She does tend to be compassionate and sociable with others. However, she is also naturally disinterested in certain matters that require excessive work or thought.
-Gothic: Witty, depressed. She is pretty clever, so her strategizing skills and overall intelligence are not to be underestimated. Unfortunately, she does not deem herself worthy of putting that brain to use.
-Chime: Polite, temperamental. She is a very sweet filly in general, and she keeps most of her emotions in check beneath her demure mannerisms. But she also gets nervous very easily.
-Trill: Tender, vulnerable. Along with her seductive grace, she’s very caring, and also the least likely to resort to intentional violence. She’s also rather sensitive and can be emotionally hurt easily.
-Shanty: Spirited, short-tempered. She tends to be optimistic and hyperactive for the most part, being jubilant when the situation calls for it—or doesn’t. She’s also quite the belligerent one, and it’s not so hard to hit her nerves.
-Diva: Talented, nagging. Diva is great at almost anything, but she isn’t so haughty about it unless she’s fooling around. She does, though, annoy her siblings sometimes by being overly motherly or nosey.

Current Home: Unknown. If they have one, they certainly don’t want to talk about it. Probably because there are things in their house that better not be seen. (No, it’s not a bunch of dismembered corpses or weird stuff, stop thinking it’s anything gory or suggestive.)

Misc:
-“Ye Powers of Darkness” that Melody, Chime, and Trill used can be confused. Greed is the basic desire to want tangible stuffs and to keep what materials one already has. Gluttony is the desire for more than what one needs; gluttons already have their share, but they want more. Lust is like Greed, but the Lustful are often more determined and mature than the Greedy, as the former know that what they want they can put to use instead of just keeping it; also, Lust tends to be temporary desires, rather than the desire to keep things forever.
-They do not know of the sirens canon to the show (the Dazzlings), but they have heard of them. Needless to say, Star Swirl didn’t banish most of the siren population. Somehow, the history books left that info out. . .
-For anyone who’d like to know, their parents’ names were Bass Comet and Sonnet Aurora.
-How they got around to inducing more than one emotion is anypony's guess. . .
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KoreanLuna wrote:
Name: The Nebula sisters (group of 7)
-Melody
-Lullaby
-Gothic
-Chime
-Trill
-Shanty
-Diva

Because you asked permission, I'm making an exception to my normal practice. Plus, all 7 are approved and good for you. Smile
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Name: Idalie

Race: Treefolk (Earth Pony)

Age: 44

Mane: Long, silky rose petals that give her a medium-length mane and tail.

Coat: Tough, dark green, plant-like skin.

Cutie mark.: N/A

Extra details that aren't needed but are nice to add: Carnivorous.

Distinguishing Features: She has very sharp teeth and is quite pretty.

Specialty (eg. special spells, unique powers etc): Idalie is a very strong mare, and very fast, too, though she does not have much power in the magic department. Idalie's plant-like skin is also quite tough, protecting her rather well from physical harm. Idalie is also very good at identifying all forms of plants.
NSFW Bits:

Weaknesses: Idalie is very weak against extremes in temperature, be it fire or the cold. They will cause idalie to either A) Burn(Duh), or B) She'll lock up and barely be capable of movement. Idalie also has weak defenses against magic. Levitation won't affect her but other magicks will. Idalie also is not the most endurant, as she tires easily.

Occupation: N/A

Gear: A dark sage hoodie.

History: Idalie was born deep in the Whitetail woods, and raised there by her parents until the age of 32, where she decided to leave them and wander Equestria, seeing all the new sights and generally having fun, as she always ran into plenty of nicer ponies to talk to and make friends with. Ida has continued wandering for a few years, before she began trying to find friends in her travels, so she knew which places were nice enough to stay in. She mostly moves between Canterlot and Ponyville nowadays.

Personality: Idalie can be very kind and caring to friends, but when one makes her an enemy, she is very cold and very easily angered.

Current Home: N/A

Misc: She's a hybrid of rose and venus flytrap.
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Name: Frenitida

Race: Diamond Dog

Age: 47

Mane: N/A

Coat: Dark, steel grey.

Cutie mark.: N/A

Extra details that aren't needed but are nice to add: She is eight feet tall and very muscular.

Distinguishing Features: The jagged scar running down the right side of her chin and going down her entire front, stopping just halfway down her left thigh. Her height and stature.

Specialty (eg. special spells, unique powers etc): Frenitida is a very massive, very powerful Diamond Dog. She is easily stronger than a minotaur twice her size, and is capable of holding her ground against almost any physical force. She knows how to use her axe very efficiently. She is also very good at using her pure intimidation factor.

Weaknesses: Though physically strong, Frenitida has absolutely no defenses against magic, though she can outpower basic telekinesis, other magicks will affect her rather easily. Frenitida can also very easily be angered, and therefor all thoughts of defense can be banished form her mind, allowing one to get easy hits on her as she charges straight at you.

Occupation: Mercenary.

Gear: Large fire axe enchanted to withstand the strength of the average minotaur. She also wears a large fire fighter jacket that is enchanted to be tough and fireproof, as well as having steel plating inside of the fabric, for protection. Freni also has a barbed wire belt. The dog also has, for some odd reason, a fairly large and very sharp sawblade hanging from the back of her belt. She also has a heavy, black leather collar that has dark grey spikes on it.

History: Frenitida was born into a slaver pack and raised by them, treated like dirt and used like a toy until she got to the age of fifteen, where puberty took her through a dark turn, and the dog grew to her massive size and strength, and the next time one of the slavers messed with her, she ripped his throat out with her teeth and smashed his corpse against a tree. As per the rules of the slaver group, she got everything he owned after killing him, which rewarded to massive diamond dog with the jacket she now wears. Later on, she killed a slave that the alpha rather enjoyed, and the alpha ordered the rest of the pack to kill her. Suffice to say, they failed, but gave the dog one nasty scar to keep as a reminder of that night. She looted from their corpses, taking the belt and the buzzsaw she currently carries. She spent the next month hunting down her alpha, and when she ran into him, she did something very simple, and ripped him in half, taking his axe for her own. A few years later, Frenitida had found work as a mercenary, and tends to work as a bodyguard most of the time.

Personality: Frenitida tends to be kind, but only when others have not make any aggressive moves. When angered, Freni tends to be merciless and does not hesitate in the slightest.

Current Home: N/A

Misc: She is a good doggy. o.o


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Name: Axis Vorto

Race: Pegasus Vampire of the Vampirus Renovo Genus.

Age: 247

Mane: Long, golden blonde.

Coat: Light, creamy yellow-white.

Cutie mark.: A heart, with crimson on one side fading into a deep shade of violet.

Extra details that aren't needed but are nice to add: When she goes into her 'Berzerker Rage', her pupils usually shrink to dots, before re-expanding into reptilian slits.

Distinguishing Features: Beautiful sapphire eyes.

Specialty (eg. special spells, unique powers etc): This vampire is completely unaffected by sunlight itself. When Axis enters her berserker state upon seeing her own blood, her vampiric power reveals itself in full, and she becomes stronger than any minotaur, and can move very fast. The mare is also very good in hoof-to-hoof combat, and prefers not to use weapons unless absolutely necessary. Axis also has strong regeneration power, capable of getting a limb back in only a minute. She is also very good at telling the truth from lies.

Weaknesses: When in her berserker state, Axis is incapable of coherent, intelligent thought, making her easy to deceive and trick. Regardless of going berserk or not, the mare is never the most endurant, though she does have a very large pool of stamina. Out of berserker raging, she is also weaker than average, as well as not being very fast, though she is a good flyer. She also has no good defenses against magic.

Occupation: Royal Guard.

Gear: When not wearing her armor, the mare is mostly seen wearing only her long, crimson-and-purple scarf.

History: Axis was born in Germaneigh and raised there until she was seventeen, when her parents moved to Equestria, Canterlot specifically, and she went with them. Axis was immediately quite popular with the kids her age, with her being rather pretty and very charismatic. Over time, however, the mare soon got the idea to become a guard. And she did. At age twenty six, Axis Vorto became a royal guard, and ever since that day, she remained a guard, rather enjoying the two hundred years she spent with the same occupation, as she always made friends along the way, and always had fun when she could.

Personality: Axis is a very kind and gentle mare at most times, but when she catches sight of her own blood, she enters a berserker-like state and will attack anything near her mercilessly and without thought, the only thing running through her head being the instinct to kill.

Current Home: Canterlot.

Misc: She has a germane accent.


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BronzeFog wrote:
Name: Idalie

Approved for NSFW only.


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Name: Frenitida

Approved.


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Name: Axis Vorto

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Name: Wildfire

Race: Pegasus

Age: 24

Mane: black

Coat: Yellow

Cutie Mark: Burning flames, red.

Distinguishing Features: Blind, eyes & eyelids melted and face covered in scars from an acid attack by the class bully in science class at age 19

Specialty: Writes poetry.

Weaknesses: Easily scared, spent 5 years in an abusive care home in Canterlot from 19 - 24, where the staff regularly physically and mentally abused her. Now lives on Stallion Island, Manehatten with a herd of 4 other mares as she slowly gets over the abuse of the past.

Occupation: Reserve firefighter in canterlot pre blinding, works as a firefighter in manehatten with the aid of a flight suit which incorporates a headset which provides altitude and distance via an earpiece.
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Name: Wildfire

Race: Pegasus

Age: 24

Mane: black

Coat: Yellow

Cutie Mark: Burning flames, red.

Distinguishing Features: Blind, eyes & eyelids melted and face covered in scars from an acid attack by the class bully in science class at age 19

Specialty: Writes poetry.

Weaknesses: Easily scared, spent 5 years in an abusive care home in Canterlot from 19 - 24, where the staff regularly physically and mentally abused her. Now lives on Stallion Island, Manehatten with a herd of 4 other mares as she slowly gets over the abuse of the past.

Occupation: Reserve firefighter in canterlot pre blinding, works as a firefighter in manehatten with the aid of a flight suit which incorporates a headset which provides altitude and distance via an earpiece.

Another tragic character... *sigh*

OK, my only real issue with this is that you've provided no history for her. I require such a thing.
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here's some history Very Happy

Sorry, but that's not quite what Dual means. If you go and look at the template sheet in page 1, or just about any other sheet that's been completed and approved for that matter, you'll see that they all have a History section showing a summary of a character's life. It doesn't have to be a novel, just something everyone can read along with the sheet quickly for proper reference. If you feel it would be difficult for you to make it into a paragraph or two of history minimum, then write what you can... Just try to avoid writing too much as that's what RPing is for.
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Name:Dust
Race:Unicorn
Age:23
Mane:Red with darker red streaks
Coat:Dark blue
Cutie mark.:A sword with the snakes of a caduceus
Extra details that aren't needed but are nice to add:
Distinguishing Features:
Specialty (eg. special spells, unique powers etc):She has incredibly powerful healing magic, able to heal most non-mortal wounds if she has the energy.
Weaknesses:She is overly trusting, meaning that she can be easily manipulated. She also has an extreme aversion to humans. (See history)
Occupation:She is a doctor, which is unsurprising due to her powerful healing magic.
History:There was once a human. He was fairly normal, nothing too out-of-the-ordinary. He went to high school. However, he was bullied with no end in sight. Their parents were not particularly...cordial...either. The human that would become Dust was rather depressed as a result, just trying to get through high school and meet half-decent people at college.

One day, while being harassed again, he was shoved into a seemingly solid statue... and came out the other side as a mare. In the Crystal Empire. After the initial shock of the location, gender, and species change. After figuring out how to walk, she tried to explore the palace but was quickly arrested. Once explaining the portal, however, she was sworn to secrecy and released. They have lived in Equestria for several years now, not wanting to return to Earth. She was much more comfortable in Equestrian culture.
Location: Crystal Empire or Canterlot, depending on the canon

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Name: Dust

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Name: Ice Hearth

Race: Dragon pony

Age: 12

Mane: Fuchsia pink in colour, with one half resting over her eye while the other side swirls up. At the back, the mane stands up in jolting spikes down to the base of her neck, getting progressively smaller as they go.

Coat: Lavender blue and very soft to the touch. Scales adorn a few portions of her body, namely her shoulders, where the cutie mark would be on the flank, and a row of 6 go down her spine.

Cutie Mark: None

Extra details that aren't needed but are nice to add: Ice naturally chills the air around her in relation to how shy and scared she's feeling, the more extreme the feeling, the colder it gets. Ice also has horns, but isn't capable of casting magic with them.

Distinguishing Features: Ice has some small scale freckles, back pointing horns, and a long scaly dragon tail. The tail has tufts of fur spreading from the base of the tail to midway pointed towards her head, and it ends in a larger tuft of fur. On her hooves Ice has 3 sharp retractable claws and longer tufts of the same soft fur.

Specialty (eg. special spells, unique powers, etc): Ice can breath fire, and is highly resistant to the cold. Ice's blood also petrifies foreign organic material upon contact, excluding those of close blood relation.

Weaknesses: Ice is shy and introverted, getting scared exceedingly easy. While physically strong for her size, she's rather strictly non-violent and lacks any knowledge on how to even fight.

Occupation: While Ice isn't paid for it, she cares for any and all animals that would require her assistance.

Gear: A stone bandage wrapped around her left foreleg/hoof

History: Daughter to a pegasus mother and frost dragon father, Ice had a rather unique upbringing. Though her before school years was spent utilizing a knack for communicating and understanding animals, a talent that had her outside most of the time. When those fleeting years passed though and the time for school came, Ice was terrified. She'd barely met any pony prior, and those were of her own volition.

If being a 'new kid' wasn't bad enough, Ice also faced bullies based off her unique looks, and soon became accustomed to retreating into her 'shell' when the insults and tormenting came. Eventually, the bullying negatively effected her school-work and it wasn't long after that Ice was pulled from public classes to be home-schooled. While Ice didn't care too much for her schooling to be continued, being home-schooled came with the benefit of granting her easy access to the White tail wood she was so fond of. After lessons each day, Ice took to exploring the woods and befriending the animals that lived there.

By 11, Ice had a large portion of the wood known, memorized and could traverse it with ease. Which only compounded the shock of when one day Ice was walking along a path, only to unexpectedly trip. Her hoof and snout were already beginning to throb as she looked back to find the obstruction, and the shock of what the obstruction was sent her fleeing behind a tree. Said obstruction was a mare and her guitar, and she took to trying to coax Ice out from behind the tree despite the steadily declining temperature caused by Ice's fear. Eventually though, Ice was coaxed back out from behind the tree and the mare with the guitar began inspecting the extent of the dragon pony's injuries.

Ice had a nose bleed and a decent splinter in her left fore-hoof, both of which were bleeding. While Ice held a tissue provided by the mare to stop the nosebleed, said mare was already seeing about removing the splinter and bandaging it. After the sliver of wood was extracted as painlessly as possible, the mare began bandaging up Ice's hoof. Soon after she finished and looked up to smile at Ice, she found a stone tissue being passed back to her. The mare didn't have time to even look down before the bandage was also turned to stone, something that has loosely sat on her hoof ever since the day it was placed there.
After that incident, Ice started carrying around a first aid box and re-enrolled in Ponyville school to which she currently goes.

Personality: She's shy recluse and often hiding from social interaction.

Current Home: A cottage with her father on the south side of White tail woods. The trek to school has her crossing the Everfree forest, or following a river to Ponyville

Misc: Despite the timidity, Ice is a big fan of metal, grunge, alternative metal, hard rock, progressive rock, avant-garde metal, nu-metal and similar genres. She however would never outwardly show her interest in such music though, and the only hints towards this passion would be the occasional mumbled lyrics of such songs. Doctors have also told her she has a high risk of acute haemorrhagic epistaxis outbursts, and while she has no idea what that is, the doctors seem worried. surprisingly she finds safety and comfort in the high altitudes.


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