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Indicus

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Name: Indicus

Age: 50 looks 35 (he aged slower than normal after twenty due to the strength and nature of his magic)

Gender: Male

Species: Thestral

Appearance: Wears a hooded steel and leather armor with a cowl to cover the face.

Fur: dark grey-black

Mane/Tail: dark grey

Eyes:Brown

pointed horn and possess fangs

Cutie Mark: A dark Dagger through a Minotaur's skull

Personality: Reserved,strait forward

Backstory: Born in the small town of West Clairson, apart of the country Thalemn. Indicus never knew his father or mother but instead was later adopted at the age of three by a Griffin and pony that lived there. He was given the name Indicus, a Griffin name by his adopted parents.

Through his childhood he was quiet and obsrved everythig around him, thus making only a few friends. He even accedently snuck up on his friends multiple times earning him the nickname Shadow Dancer. During that time he also learned how to use his magic. Later bcoming the Aprentice of a old unicorn that took notice of Indicus and taught him how to control and use shadow magic.

He was eighteen, when he left his home to sign up for the Thalemn special forces more specifically the Marines. At Nineteen he completed all his training and was officially part of the Marines. He received his Skill Mark (AKA cutie mark) during his second deployment, a stealth operation and his first kill from stealth.

At the age of thirty, he retired from the Marines, and returned home, hoping to relax after twelve years of seirvice during which he was a commander and lost some good friends. Now away from the conflicts and drawing his pention.

At thirty-two, Equestria got its Lunar princess back, and she was looking to recruit for her branch of the military. He recived a letter saying that she received his dossier and was inviting him to be a squad leader. He refused for many years.

Age thirty-five, his parents were robbed and killed. They were given a funeral the next day. A year later he joined the Lunar Special forces to help him forget.

Age thirty-nine he resigns from the Lunar special forces after losing even more of those in his squad. A month later he gets recruited into the Assassins guild, having nothing to live for he accepts.

Age forty-five he achieved the rank of Master Assassin.

two months later he splits from the guild and takes contacts himself as a lone Assassin.

Other: Dislikes race based terms and obvious puns like anypony, viewing them as stupid and narrow minded

Most used weapons: Hidden blades on his wrists and one foot long collapsing blade.

Also possesses (Dose not use too often) a powerful wooden recursive bow capable of penetrating both layers of griffin and Minotaur plate and chain mail and going deep enough to kill or severely wound partially due to enchantments that amplify force for two hundred uses before a recharge is needed.[/b]
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Thak

Thak


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Join date : 2014-10-31
Age : 37
Location : Washington

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Name:K'likikk- Clan Name, Pyrus Frost-Pony Name
Race:Thestral
Age:Colt approximately 8
Mane:Dark brown, front is similar to Derpy, back to Scootaloo
Coat:Grey
Cutie mark.:None
Distinguishing Features:Ice blue eyes
Specialty (eg. special spells, unique powers etc):N/A
Weaknesses:Absolutely loves Pears to the point of distraction
Occupation:Hopes to become Lunar Guard
Gear:N/A
History:K'lik was born to a Unicorn mother and thestral father. His father is currently a Lunar Guard member, though not one of high rank. He spends most of his life in the caves beneath the Castle of the Royal Sisters, where his clan has been homed since Luna's banishment. Since her return, however, his mother sometimes takes him to the nearby town of Ponyville.
He grew up practically worshiping Princess Luna, and spends his time pretending to be one of the Lunar Guard.
Personality:Wears his emotions on his sleeve, so to speak. Loves playing and having a good time. Hates doing chores, and loathes bath time.
Current Home:Caves/Ponyville
Misc:

Edit: Added numerical age.


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Indicus wrote:
Name: Indicus
Backstory: Born in the small town of West Clairson, apart of the country Thalemn. Indicus never knew his father or mother but instead was later adopted at the age of three by a Griffin and pony that lived there. He was given the name Indicus, a Griffin name by his adopted parents.

Where IS this West Clairson, and what is Thalemn? I applaud creativity but your imagined city and country don't even follow the pun-oriented naming scheme of the MLPFIM universe. So I need better information here.

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He was eighteen, when he left his home to sign up for the Thalemn special forces more specifically the Marines. At Nineteen he completed all his training and was officially part of the Marines. He received his Skill Mark (AKA cutie mark) during his second deployment, a stealth operation and his first kill from stealth.

OK, I applaud creativity but you're talking about your thestral being part of a highly specialized branch of a navy. Moreover, the Marines are not regarded as special forces; the special forces of the American Marines are the Recon Marines and of the navy the Marines are attached to, the S.E.A.Ls. Even more generally, marines are a specialized branch but not special forces. You need to revise this.

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At thirty-two, Equestria got its Lunar princess back, and she was looking to recruit for her branch of the military. He recived a letter saying that she received his dossier and was inviting him to be a squad leader. He refused for many years.

So Luna was recruited retired soldiers from another nation for her forces? o.O

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Other: Dislikes race based terms and obvious puns like anypony, viewing them as stupid and narrow minded

OK, so he objects to a very current and common term in canon Equestria. This is... odd.


OK, before I approve this, I need a helluva lot more detail about this character. Answering my questions and concerns would be a large help.
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Thak wrote:
Name:K'likikk- Clan Name, Pyrus Frost-Pony Name
Age: Colt

I require a numerical age from you.

Other that that.. this is the most bare-bones character I've ever approved. And yet there's nothing wrong with it that prevents approval apart from a lack of a numerical age. Fill that in, and this character is approved.
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Two Sides of the Coin

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Name: Astral Eclipse
Race: Harbingers
Age: 34 years but in reality she is about 104 years
Mane: Black stone that covers from the top of her head to the lower back of her body. Green lines of astral energy dance along her mane but a line of black stone ridges starts at the top of her head and slowly follows down to her back.
Coat: The top half of her body is covered in the black stone with green lines of astral energy weaving its way across her stone like flesh. The other half of her body is more normal; soft brown fur make up the rest of her form with a lighter brown, closer to tan, on her chest.
Cutie mark.: A single blue star that has both a red ring and a blue ring around the star. Sparkles come off of the star while lines of energy from the bottom point to the star.
Extra details that aren’t needed but are nice to add:
Distinguishing Features:Her face isn't much like a pony's face anymore as it has been covered up by the black stone to the point that instead of teeth there are sharp fangs outside of her face to make up for the teeth she no longer has. Her mouth is filled with astral energy so whenever she opens her mouth it glows  green lightly. Instead of eyes there are two sockets that glow green with astral energy. The dark stone is no stronger then chain-mail and only covers one half of her body. Two serrated wings stick out of her sides and helps her fly.    
Specialty (eg. special spells, unique powers etc): Having powers over the astral dimension but very limited because of their relations with the magic. Needing a focus point for this every spell they try to cast they need either a staff or wand. Being able to cast four spells but some are somewhat powerful if used in the correct respect. The first spell is arcane orbs, powerful bolts of energy that cause damage to a target by inflicting energy on them. The second spell is an imprisonment spell that does much the same but traps the victim in a place far away from any dimension. The third spell is to create a sanity crystal. The sanity crystal is a astral energy tool for any harbinger to enhance their power to make each spell to do more damage or learn a spell from an enemy but they can only have one. The fourth spell is to sacrifice the crystal to release the energy in a cataclysmic reaction. The power is then magnifier by how intelligent they are but they will be caught in a powerful hit that would be signaler to being hit my a sun but the force is not there as she causes the sun to rain down on them. More like it would be like standing next to a sun    
Weaknesses: Without the staff she can't use any of the magic she has but she can still provide astral energy to any amount of actions she does. Her legs and her lower body are always unprotected by the black stone.
Occupation: She is mostly an astrologist but she will defend the knowledge she knows at all costs.
Gear: Her only gear is the staff she carries.
History: Being part of a race that had been watching over a deep rift in the world they slowly began to spend their time learning about the world about them but Astral Eclipse was different then the rest of her brothers and sisters. The high priests decided that she would be made into a powerful guard that would watch over the rift for all the time she would live but she began to work she was slowly being changed by the rift.
As she was being changed by the rift she began to show powers that were unlike the others that were growing up. Once that she began to gain those powers from the darkness that was below her. One time that she went down into the rift she found a staff that would be hers. The staff wasn't that good for her sanity but she grew to like her powers.
over time she began to move away from her world towards Equstria where she began to work on the world that she had come upon.  
Personality: She is very cold but she is willing to get along if this situation helps her in any way.
Current Home: Canterlot castle
Misc: SHe works closely in the library to gain all the intelligence she can.
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Two Sides of the Coin wrote:
Name: Astral Eclipse
Specialty (eg. special spells, unique powers etc): Having powers over the astral dimension but very limited because of their relations with the magic. Needing a focus point for this every spell they try to cast they need either a staff or wand. Being able to cast four spells but some are somewhat powerful if used in the correct respect. The first spell is arcane orbs, powerful bolts of energy that cause damage to a target by inflicting energy on them. The second spell is an imprisonment spell that does much the same but traps the victim in a place far away from any dimension. The third spell is to create a sanity crystal. The sanity crystal is a astral energy tool for any harbinger to enhance their power to make each spell to do more damage or learn a spell from an enemy but they can only have one. The fourth spell is to sacrifice the crystal to release the energy in a cataclysmic reaction. The power is then magnifier by how intelligent they are but they will be caught in a powerful hit that would be signaler to being hit my a sun but the force is not there as she causes the sun to rain down on them. More like it would be like standing next to a sun

Once again, you don't define practical limits to these powers. Also, you list out and explain powers as if you're playing or designing a computer game. This is a freeform RP chat so definite powers are a little outside the wheelhouse.

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Weaknesses: Without the staff she can't use any of the magic she has but she can still provide astral energy to any amount of actions she does.

What effect does this astral energy have?

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Occupation: She is mostly an astrologist but she will defend the knowledge she knows at all costs.[/quote]

She makes predictions based on star positions but will defend the knowledge she knows at all costs? This must be a scrambled syntax problem because this makes no sense whatsoever.

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History: Being part of a race that had been watching over a deep rift in the world they slowly began to spend their time learning about the world about them but Astral Eclipse was different then the rest of her brothers and sisters....
...Over time she began to move away from her world towards Equstria where she began to work on the world that she had come upon.

I need more, LOTS more. More about the race. More about this rift. More about how the staff isn't good for her sanity. More about how the rift changed her. More about how she came to Equestria. Just... more. You leave so much out that it doesn't make sense.
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Age : 28
Location : Liverpool, England

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Name: Overmorrow

Race: Unicorn

Age: 34 (1034 technically but did not live the thousand years)

Mane: Icy Blue with a streak of black going through it

Coat: Orchid purple

Cutie mark.: A constellation in the shape of a crescent moon

Extra details that aren’t needed but are nice to add: Almost always has a blindfold over his eyes.

Distinguishing Features: The aforementioned blindfold. In addition he almost always has his technically antique sword in a sheathe at his side, ready to pull with his magic.

Specialty (eg. special spells, unique powers etc): Overmorrow was granted the ability by Nightmare Moon to see into the dreams of others, increasing his skills as her personal assassin by being able to find traits to exploit.

While his blindness has greatly compromised this skill Overmorrow is an exceptional sword fighter. While he can use his magic as a form of echo-location to sense his opponents even without his eyes it is still far less efficient. Still he knows enough to be able to fend for himself and to demonstrate to other guards various techniques.

Weaknesses: Obviously, his blindness. While he can use magic to induce a form of echo location this is imprecise and does not allow him to make out details. His dream invading ability can also be repelled if the victim becomes aware of his presence they can simply expel him from the dream with a thought.

Occupation: Formerly Nightmare Moon's chief assassin. Now a trainer to the royal guard.

Gear: Carries a uniquely forged sword with a white and midnight blue handle and the sun and moon engraved on each side of the blade. The sword itself doesn't have any magical properties but is expertly forged and balanced, even by more modern standards.

History: An old fashioned soldier who Luna took a shine to due to his constant insistence on taking the night shift back before there was an official night guard, Overmorrow was fiercely loyal to Princess Luna throughout his service; when Princess Luna did finally lose herself to the entity known as Nightmare Moon, Overmorrow was committed to obeying her regardless.

When Nightmare Moon foresaw that her planned attack on Celestia may end poorly she made an arrangement to trap several of her most loyal followers in the dream realm in suspended animation, to be revived when she returned if she failed or when she defeated Celestia.

While obviously Nightmare Moon was banished her servants lay dormant in the dream realm until Princess Luna finally returned; the princess of the night returned to where the followers had been sealed in the dream realm to check what their status was. Overmorrow was the only one of the followers whose loyalty to Princess Luna took priority, whereas most of the others were only interested in personal gain or were dedicated to their hatred of Celestia.

Overmorrow was subsequently released while the other members were given the option to either pledge allegiance to the two sisters together or be imprisoned, choosing the latter. Overmorrow has since been put to work by Luna training the Royal Guard.

Personality: Overmorrow is an old fashioned warrior, who lives strictly by a code of honor. As such he is extremely proud in his work and is fiercely loyal to Princess Luna and Princess Celestia now; even the slightest insult to the two is likely to produce a tense reaction from him.

While he is often accused of having no sense of fun or humor, especially when he must work with Hoodwink, he does have a sense of humor but feels it improper to show as such when he is on duty which is almost always in his minds eye.

His friendship to Princess Luna was initially in question upon his return from the dream realm but since then has settled back into the friendship as if the millenia of separation never occurred, and along with Twilight Sparkle he has remained one of the few ponies Luna is able to unhesitatingly call a friend.

Current Home: A guest room on the fourth floor of Canterlot Castle.

Misc: The most common blindfold he is seen wearing for his eyes is a dark purple rag with the image of Celestia and Luna in a circle commonly found in history books. It is in fact a rag of Overmorrow's dress uniform which was shredded during a changeling attack during his original service to the throne.
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ObsidianPony wrote:
Name: Overmorrow

Approved, with some English on it (with all due respect to the fact that the player is English).
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Name: Enigmatic Void
Alias: Spymaster
Race: Eidolon
Age: 2000+ years
Mane: His mane was weaved into a diamond shape pattern with each strand of the diamond either raven black or dark purple. Cascading down his form in a blanket type hood the mane that is his hair ends flows lightly by his sides. Like a stormy sea the mane rises and falls with each movement.
Coat: A flowing mixture of pink, dark purple and raven black covers his whole body. No pattern can be discerned because the colors replace one another and move around on his body. though his coat ripples once in a while.
Cutie mark.: Simply put it is the shape of a nebula with billowing clouds of purple ionized gas with two stars peering out into the darkness.
Extra details that aren’t needed but are nice to add: Eidolons are born from the very nebula itself, just 483 million miles from the moon by a large cluster of asteroids and a gas giant. Many astrologists call his home, The Helix Dark Nebula for its strange veil around the brown dwarf.  with that they have no vital organs or main structures that hold the Eidolon together. The only thing that keeps him alive and keeps him together is a gem in the shape of a elongated rhombus. Another thing to add is that he can be any of the races at his will since he had no defined shape.  He can knows enough about the pony body to land disabling blows against them with his hooves. He is made out of a material called Dark Sand; looks and feels much like obsidian glass but isn't that strong. Being held together by the crystal he can shape the dark sand in any way he wishes as long as it doesn't harm him in anyway as well as his focus point can't change.
Distinguishing Features: Two purple-pink eyes glow spectacularly. Another thing to note about him is that his face as a long black line running down from his head across his left eye.
Specialty (eg. special spells, unique powers etc): Being a creature of space he has learned how to shape vacuums to the point he can make them. Either a bubble or wall can be created anywhere from thirty feet long to inches long. Pulling objects and creatures together with the force of a gale or licks of air.
He can summon visages of the enemies he fights as they pass through a wall of intense light that do reduced damage and take more damage then the original being.  
He has complete control over the dark sand to form any melee weapon he needs or wishes but not life, soul, or heart. The dark sand can be sharpened, blunted, pointed, and curved to make melee weapons of any kind while having the same strength as him.
Weaknesses: Being forged from dark energies of the crystal and the dark sand he cannot stand in direct sunlight otherwise he would be reduced to something similar to an earth pony. Since that crystal is his focus point any damage to the crystal would cause massive damage to him as if someone was running their weapon across a pony's heart, the crystal is no stronger then quartz. He tends to avoid fire or powerful heat sources because as black sand heats up or gets close to 25 C it becomes liquid-solid so it becomes easier to hit and break because of its liquid nature. Anything to with sun-based magic instantly weakens him to a state of a regular pony.
Occupation: Rouge Spymaster that serves the highest bidder; with some time ruling over a black sand fortress far away.  
Gear: Having only more of the dark sand in a bag he can form any melee weapon he needs as long as it isn't living, magical, or spiritual.
History: Forged out of the heart of a dying star, the dark purple gem Shal'as was thrown free of its celestial prison. A powerful wisp was living in the gem as it was a powerful being locked inside. Forced to drift in space for eons, the magical wisp within the dark purple gem began to catch the eyes of some more evil characters but whenever someone would touch the dark gem it would disintegrate them into a pile of dark sand for there was no way to control the power within. Fearing what this could mean that a doomsday could come upon them. They cast the gem back into space where it had come from. This same pattern continued for eons till the gem fell into the heart of a dark nebula.

Within that nebula there was life stirring but having a hard time starting out for the material of the nebula wouldn't be able to support any solid object being made of gas and dust. The gem began to gather dust and gas together. Out of the dust/dark sands came a single life and that life was Enigmatic void. Starting out into the void of space without purpose and given existence for no reason he drifted away from the nebula till he landed on the moon of Equis. To his displeasure he ran straight into the lamented Nightmare Moon. She hurt, tortured, and mutilated his mind in order to make the perfect weapon out of him. Enigmatic void ran away to the nearby planet of Equis, away from the wrathful gaze of Nightmare moon.

He ran and ran, fleeing to the ever free forest to seek peace from all that had happened to him. Ponies lived nearby and He watched from the shadows to further understand all those about him yet his hesitance to socialize with others was affected by Nightmare moon's terrible actions. Growing up the powerful being within the crystal began to exert its powerful abilities upon Enigmatic void. Becoming more powerful with each and every day caused him to spiral out of control as a fight over his will began between him and the being within the crystal. After a thousand years Nightmare moon was returned back to Luna where she ventured to the forests to seek out the being she had sinned. Healing part of his mind she cursed the being within the gem to protect the frail mind of Enigmatic void but his mind would never be safe.
Personality: Broken in half by the actions of Nightmare Moon; the first half of his mind is a child-like mind that is innocent and trying to learn all he could about the world around him but that child grew up. Kind in heart and wanting to help others he can but hesitant to talk to others. As that child he loved the idea of a spy or rouge so he trained to be such. Though he is willing to do what he can to keep others alive.

The other side of his mind is a dark monster that has ingrained in the more child like side. The monster made him more violent and unwilling to get along with others. Bitter and angry at everything his want and greed for money caused him to break others. Hurting and killing as he went along with the spy. When the two half minds come together power is at its highest. The first side is the more helping and kind hearted with the other the darker and eviler.
Current Home: The Chalagith nebula fortress that rests in the middle of the Ever Free Forest
Misc: Be wary of offending him since he can't really control his more evil side. Though seems like a god he is quite weak thanks to his body and mind ripped asunder during his time with Nightmare Moon. Broken, lost, and utterly confused about the being trapped within the crystal.
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Name: Pencil J. Doodle

Race: Unicorn

Age: 25

Mane: Spikey. Burgandy with a light red strip

Coat: Milky brown

Cutie mark.: HB Pencil mid-drawing

Extra details that aren’t needed but are nice to add: Pencil Doodle is very introverted, yet he can become aggressive if someone annoys him. He much prefers his own company, but when it comes to his friends (what few he has), relatives, and ponies that actually entertain him, he can be tolerant.
He tends to act witty and sarcastic in most situations; whether he is trying to be funny, get a point across, or just trying to mask emotion.
He has a simple philosophy: "Any problem can be solved if you simply stop caring about it."

Distinguishing Features: Shorter than the average stallion. Has heavy bags under his eyes, as well his left eye being glass

Specialty (eg. special spells, unique powers etc): He isn't a very skilled magician, though he has the ability to manipulate the light in whatever area he's in on a small scale; it helps with his artistic ability

Weaknesses: He has the emotional stability of a child who's just seen their dog get run over.

Occupation: Freelance Artist

History: Pencil Jonah Doodle was one of two siblings born to a working class family in Canterlot. He had a small family, consisting of his earth pony elder sister, earth pony mother, and unicorn father. This little family went through many hardships in their time, but perhaps the most hard-hitting was when Pencil’s dad ran out on him for reasons that weren’t very clear. Of course, Pencil was still quite young at the time, so the personal effect on him was almost non-existent; although on a larger scale, the damage was clear. With one less pony to bring in income, their mother struggled to keep them afloat; often working hard hours or extensive shifts just to feed everyone. The absence of parental figures caused Pencil’s sister to develop independence at an early age, but as for Pencil himself, he simply hid himself away; isolating himself from others under a demeanour shyness.
As the years went on and as Pencil grew older, their situation did gradually get better. Their finances became less of a struggle, and starvation was no longer a constantly looming threat. However, what they went through was not forgotten.

The anti-social mannerisms that Pencil developed caused him to become a sort of misfit in his school life. He preferred his own company rather than hanging out with other kids, and when interaction with other children was required, he often failed miserably at it. He became a notorious teachers’ pet, feeling that they were the only ponies he could ever trust. His short frame and strange mannerisms also lead him to become an easy target for bullying.
It was safe to say he didn’t like school very much.
Despite his devotion to his teachers and subjects, he was never the smartest of foals either. He got good enough grades to get by, but never excelled in anything like so many others seemed to.
However, he seemed to have a knack for drawing. He was often caught doodling during class, whether they be cartoons, tessellating patterns, or even scenic sketches. As time went by, his artistic skills only continued to improve; art became his strongest subject, and sketching became his favourite past time. It would seem that it was the only thing he strongly cared for.

After getting through school with passable grades, he decided to enrol in college with a major in fine art. He said his tearful goodbyes to his mum and sister, before packing his bags and leaving for campus. He spent the next few years living in a small dorm with a music theory major. He was one annoying bastard; always playing classical music when he was trying to draw or sleep. At this point, his life mainly consisted of classwork, eating, trotting around school grounds out of boredom, more classwork, and attempting to sleep. It was nowhere near as fulfilling as Pencil had envisioned in his head. After his second year, he threw up his hooves in defeat and decided to become a college drop out. Of course, his mother wasn’t happy to hear the news that her child had flunked out of something as silly as an art degree, and his sister had moved out ages ago.
Pencil was essentially left homeless.

Using what little money he had saved up, he bought himself some art equipment and a tent to sleep in. He applied whatever he had learnt in his life to making money. His primary source of income became drawing caricatures of ponies at the beach or at whatever amusement park would take him on as a temp.
Eventually he gained enough money to move out of his tent and into a rundown little cottage in Manehatten, taking on more sophisticated commissions from whoever wanted a fancy little drawing.
To this day, Pencil still lives in that cottage.
Pencil talks about his experiences with pride, feeling that in the end, they have made him a better person. Sure, some other mishaps have happened along the way - such as that one time he stabbed himself in the eye with a pencil - but that's just part of the ever-twisting journey that is his life! Although he tends to lie about coming from a working class family, simply because his heavy Canterlot accent makes him sound posh.
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Name: Enigmatic Void
Alias: Spymaster
Race: Eidolon
Age: 2000+ years
Mane: His mane was weaved into a diamond shape pattern with each strand of the diamond either raven black or dark purple. Cascading down his form in a blanket type hood the mane that is his hair ends flows lightly by his sides. Like a stormy sea the mane rises and falls with each movement.
Coat: A flowing mixture of pink, dark purple and raven black covers his whole body. No pattern can be discerned because the colors replace one another and move around on his body. though his coat ripples once in a while.
Cutie mark.: Simply put it is the shape of a nebula with billowing clouds of purple ionized gas with two stars peering out into the darkness.
Extra details that aren’t needed but are nice to add: Eidolons are born from the very nebula itself, just 483 million miles from the moon by a large cluster of asteroids and a gas giant. Many astrologists call his home, The Helix Dark Nebula for its strange veil around the brown dwarf.  with that they have no vital organs or main structures that hold the Eidolon together. The only thing that keeps him alive and keeps him together is a gem in the shape of a elongated rhombus. Another thing to add is that he can be any of the races at his will since he had no defined shape.  He can knows enough about the pony body to land disabling blows against them with his hooves. He is made out of a material called Dark Sand; looks and feels much like obsidian glass but isn't that strong. Being held together by the crystal he can shape the dark sand in any way he wishes as long as it doesn't harm him in anyway as well as his focus point can't change.
Distinguishing Features: Two purple-pink eyes glow spectacularly. Another thing to note about him is that his face as a long black line running down from his head across his left eye.
Specialty (eg. special spells, unique powers etc): Being a creature of space he has learned how to shape vacuums to the point he can make them. Either a bubble or wall can be created anywhere from thirty feet long to inches long. Pulling objects and creatures together with the force of a gale or licks of air.
He can summon visages of the enemies he fights as they pass through a wall of intense light that do reduced damage and take more damage then the original being.  
He has complete control over the dark sand to form any melee weapon he needs or wishes but not life, soul, or heart. The dark sand can be sharpened, blunted, pointed, and curved to make melee weapons of any kind while having the same strength as him.
Weaknesses: Being forged from dark energies of the crystal and the dark sand he cannot stand in direct sunlight otherwise he would be reduced to something similar to an earth pony. Since that crystal is his focus point any damage to the crystal would cause massive damage to him as if someone was running their weapon across a pony's heart, the crystal is no stronger then quartz. He tends to avoid fire or powerful heat sources because as black sand heats up or gets close to 25 C it becomes liquid-solid so it becomes easier to hit and break because of its liquid nature. Anything to with sun-based magic instantly weakens him to a state of a regular pony.
Occupation: Rouge Spymaster that serves the highest bidder; with some time ruling over a black sand fortress far away.  
Gear: Having only more of the dark sand in a bag he can form any melee weapon he needs as long as it isn't living, magical, or spiritual.
History: Forged out of the heart of a dying star, the dark purple gem Shal'as was thrown free of its celestial prison. A powerful wisp was living in the gem as it was a powerful being locked inside. Forced to drift in space for eons, the magical wisp within the dark purple gem began to catch the eyes of some more evil characters but whenever someone would touch the dark gem it would disintegrate them into a pile of dark sand for there was no way to control the power within. Fearing what this could mean that a doomsday could come upon them. They cast the gem back into space where it had come from. This same pattern continued for eons till the gem fell into the heart of a dark nebula.

Within that nebula there was life stirring but having a hard time starting out for the material of the nebula wouldn't be able to support any solid object being made of gas and dust. The gem began to gather dust and gas together. Out of the dust/dark sands came a single life and that life was Enigmatic void. Starting out into the void of space without purpose and given existence for no reason he drifted away from the nebula till he landed on the moon of Equis. To his displeasure he ran straight into the lamented Nightmare Moon. She hurt, tortured, and mutilated his mind in order to make the perfect weapon out of him. Enigmatic void ran away to the nearby planet of Equis, away from the wrathful gaze of Nightmare moon.

He ran and ran, fleeing to the ever free forest to seek peace from all that had happened to him. Ponies lived nearby and He watched from the shadows to further understand all those about him yet his hesitance to socialize with others was affected by Nightmare moon's terrible actions. Growing up the powerful being within the crystal began to exert its powerful abilities upon Enigmatic void. Becoming more powerful with each and every day caused him to spiral out of control as a fight over his will began between him and the being within the crystal. After a thousand years Nightmare moon was returned back to Luna where she ventured to the forests to seek out the being she had sinned. Healing part of his mind she cursed the being within the gem to protect the frail mind of Enigmatic void but his mind would never be safe.
Personality: Broken in half by the actions of Nightmare Moon; the first half of his mind is a child-like mind that is innocent and trying to learn all he could about the world around him but that child grew up. Kind in heart and wanting to help others he can but hesitant to talk to others. As that child he loved the idea of a spy or rouge so he trained to be such. Though he is willing to do what he can to keep others alive.

The other side of his mind is a dark monster that has ingrained in the more child like side. The monster made him more violent and unwilling to get along with others. Bitter and angry at everything his want and greed for money caused him to break others. Hurting and killing as he went along with the spy. When the two half minds come together power is at its highest. The first side is the more helping and kind hearted with the other the darker and eviler.
Current Home: The Chalagith nebula fortress that rests in the middle of the Ever Free Forest
Misc: Be wary of offending him since he can't really control his more evil side. Though seems like a god he is quite weak thanks to his body and mind ripped asunder during his time with Nightmare Moon. Broken, lost, and utterly confused about the being trapped within the crystal.

Coin, I'm going to put this character out of its misery. You do not appear to understand what's needed and after multiple attempts, I don't see you ever doing what's needed to make this work. Unless you resubmit a character that is utterly different from the ground up, I will no longer review, critique, or assess for approval the character "Enigmatic Void"
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Pencil Doodle wrote:
Name: Pencil J. Doodle
Cutie mark.: HB Pencil mid-drawing

What's an HB Pencil?

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Name: Honed Edge, formerly Sir Honor Bound

Race: Figment, appears Earth Pony

Age: Slightly over 1100, physical aging ceased at 36

Mane: Off-white, kept long and tied into a ponytail

Coat: Dark purple

Cutie mark.: Crossed swords

Extra details that aren’t needed but are nice to add:

Distinguishing Features: Wears a black blindfold at nearly all times, noticeable scarring.  Has height, build and face shape of a large stallion.

Specialty (eg. special spells, unique powers etc): Edge is trained in many forms of one-on-one combat, and is naturally skilled with bladed weaponry.  She has some heightened hearing, and can roughly gauge location and objects based on sounds she makes.  Her figment abilities are based on ignoring her body's physical limits, allowing her to use more strength than is typically possible and avoid becoming hindered by injuries or magical effects.  Over time, she heals towards the physical state she was in when she ascended into full figmentism, physically and mentally.

Weaknesses:  Edge has been made completely blind, even without use of her blindfold.  She also holds strictly to her own unique honor code, and as such refuses to wield bladed weapons or use more physical strength than she believes her opponent can.  She has difficulty grasping new tactics and technologies.  Her figment ability of ignoring injury does not go as far as actually healing the injury any faster than is normal, meaning it can take years to fully recover from a serious injury without use of medical magic.  Nor does it prevent her mental abilities from being affected, if only temporarily.

Occupation: Mercenary

Gear: Prefers to use what she can find in the field

History:  Honed Edge was born into an earth pony family, and grew up working fields.  She would often get into fights with her brothers and neighbors, and it was during one of these fights that an accident with a scythe led to her getting her cutie mark.  She trained in combat until she was sixteen, and attempted to join the earth pony army.  She was turned away at the door simply for being a mare.

Determined to enter the guard, Edge began to look for some way to get into the guard, and decided that the best course of action would be to disguise herself as a stallion.  After some searching, she found an amulet with a strong illusion spell on it, changing her appearance to an entirely different stallion, which she named Honor Bound.  She made an excellent soldier, her skill with blades and naturally high pain tolerance allowing her to become one of the best.  She ascended up a few ranks, but stopped when the higher ranks were based on tactics instead of physical prowess.

At the age of thirty-six, Edge ascended into full figmentism, making her pain tolerance even higher and drastically improving her eyesight.  She was kept in the army as a sort of super-soldier, and thanks to acts of bravery in battle, Honor Bound was granted the title of Sir.  When she was around eighty, Edge saw that she had far too much power for ponies to stand up to, and began imposing limitations on herself, so as to make things fairer.  These rules gradually became stricter, and she followed them closer, until she started refusing orders, or switching sides altogether in the midst of battle.  She was released from the army, her title revoked, and left to fend for herself.

Abandoning the identity of Honor Bound altogether, Edge became a mercenary, working for food and board in whichever group she deemed most in need of her aid, and most deserving.  She has spent many of the centuries since recovering from serious injuries, or in battle.  Her most recent recoveries include fully regrowing a leg over the course of sixteen years, completely recovering from disembowelment within two years, overcoming lower body paralysis over the course of twenty years, and being restored from a vegetative state within six years.  She is currently waiting out the healing of a few particulary bad scars and a complete regrowing of her eyes.

Personality:  Edge tends to be fairly cheerful or relaxed internally, despite appearing deadpan.  This is mostly because her sense of humor is incredibly dry.  She is entirely desensitized to acts of violence, and often attempts to make light of very serious situations.  She will, however, become annoyed at ignorance of her codes.  She usually tries to hide this, but she can become enraged if continuously prevented from following a particular section of the codes. She still considers herself more of a stallion than a mare, mentally, and will often lead ponies to believe she is a stallion, as she still believes that stallions gain more respect in wartime.

Current Home:  None

Misc: Figments are a race of imaginary creatures, and implant the idea of themselves in order to gain power off of being known.  As their only physical presence is a magical avatar, they can perform a few different types of magic despite the lack of a horn, as well as an inability to be killed by damage directed at the avatar.  However, the physical abilities of the avatar are limited to the abilities of the Figment at time of ascension.

Each Figment specializes in one form of Figment magic; Edge is best at overriding her physical state.  Once a Figment has turned fully into a Figment, their eyes appear metallic, but they can wear glasses of some sort to cover it up.  They are also given heightened reception in one sense.

Honed Edge's Codes:

I: Upon the Topic of Skill

Skill is the most respectable Attribute in any Being upon a Battlefield.  Skills gained, not given by Nature or Magic, are what determine a Being's Worth. Strength of the Body, while considered Skill, is amongst the lowest, and is never to be used to overcome true Skill. If a Being possesses little Skill, it is the duty of their skilled Allies to aid them in becoming skilled. If a Being is unable to become skilled, they have no Place in Battle.  If a Being is unwilling to become skilled, they have no Place.

II: Upon the Topic of Allies, Enemies and Those Considered Neutral

Allies are decided by the Intention of the Soul.  Allies are not to be made by Gender, Race, Blood, Status, Friendship or Skill.  Upon joining Allies, their Goal and Means of reaching your shared Intention become yours.  You must aid your Allies in any way possible, unless it would necessitate a Breach of the Codes.  Enemies are chosen based on an antagonisation to your Allies' Intention of the Soul.  Enemies are not to be made by previous Enmity or Alliance.  Enemies are only to be attacked when they pose a direct Threat to your Intentions.  Those considered neither Enemy nor Ally are considered Neutral, and are to be treated with Kindness, in the Hope of a future Alliance.

III: Upon the Topic of Combat

Combat is only to be used to aid Allies.  Combat for the sake of Combat is deemed as an unethical Act.  During Combat, only the Strength your Opponent possesses may be used.  In Combat with a Group, only the Strength of the strongest Member may be used.  Combat shall be decided by the Skill of the Combatants.  If a Combatant has a Skill given from Nature the other Combatant does not, this Skill may not be used.  If your Opponent proves themselves to have more Skill, you must concede Defeat, and no longer prevent them from reaching their Intention.  Before Combat, the Combatants must agree on what concedes the Victor.  

IV: Upon the Topic of the Dead

The Memories of the Dead are to be given Respect.  The Bodies of the Dead do not require such Respect.  Do not purposefully defile a Body of the Dead, but it is not necessary to protect a Body of the Dead from Decay.  Allow Nature to take Nature's Course on a Body of the Dead whenever possible.

V: Upon the Topic of the Codes

These Codes are only held by Beings who take the Oath.  Each Being has their own Code, and these Codes are to be respected, as different as they may be.  New Additions may be made to the Code whenever deemed necessary by the Being who has taken the Oath.  The Codes may not restrict Matters of Friendship, Matters of Family, Matters of Worship, Matters of Blood, Matters of Status, or Matters of the Heart.


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Name: Sabre Dancer

Race: Unicorn.

Age: 24.

Mane: Sage green, with bright, toxic green streaks in it.

Coat: Light olive green.

Cutie mark.: A longsword.

Extra details that aren’t needed but are nice to add: Her eyes are toxic green.

Distinguishing Features: Her pendant, which is a silver chain with a sphere of onyx attached to it.

Specialty (eg. special spells, unique powers etc): She is good with any weapon that has a sharp edge to it. She has the magical skill to solidify her mana into several different bladed weapons, but if she makes three, seven, or twelve, they cost little mana and are very powerful, as those are three sacredly magical numbers. The blades are as strong as steel as long as she keeps them at these three numbers, but if she summons only one or two, they are as strong as iron.

Weaknesses: If one of those blades were to be broken or she loses concentration and one vanishes, she suffers a magical backlash, and the rest of the blades weaken considerably.

Occupation: Mercenary.

Gear: Her pendant. She also wears leather armor and a brown cloak.

History: Sabre was born in Canterlot, and raised by her parents there, taught by the two Guardsponies the kinds of virtues to strive for, but Sabre eventually got to the rebellious stage in her life, and her goals changed. After she grew up from her boringly average childhood, she set out to become a mercenary, and thrived off this lifestyle with the self-defense training her parents taught her, and the training of her friend, a stallion who was good with swords, and taught the mare all she knows. Sabre, nowadays, wanders the country looking for work.

Personality: Friendly to those who are polite, but cold and distant to rude people. The mare is quite kind when a pony gets on her good side and she begins considering them a friend.

Current Home: N/A

Misc: Allergic to chocolate.
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Name:Dazzling Lines
Race: Unicorn
Age: 22 years old
Mane: Velvet red with soft light-red strips flowing down his mane. Pulled back out of his face and part of the mane braided and tied back with his own hair to keep his mane down. About to his shoulders in length; his mane is smooth like silk.
Coat:light grey around the legs and hooves but as one gets closer to the middle of his body the fur turns pure white with each passing hair.
Cutie mark.: A special spell circle
Spell circle:
Extra details that aren’t needed but are nice to add:Though his body is grey and white his eyes a velvet red that looks a little like blood. His tail is much like his mane but not braided to hold it up and he is often seen wearing a red and white robe with pictures of golden wings .
Distinguishing Features: His cutie mark is hard to miss and his red mane but he has a scar that runs from his left ear, down his left cheek. A wound from taking a stray arrow across his face when he was a bit younger.
Specialty (eg. special spells, unique powers etc): Being effected by a accidental spell cast, Dazzle was infused with a spell circle spell he could cast that would absorb the power of the magic then convert it to a push back force at the enemy. Being unskilled at any magic this was well accepted for it could block some of the magic that others would be using against him. Absorbing the spells but being connected to his horn he can only point it in the direction of his horn. The powerful the spell the more powerful the force pushing them is proportional. About six feet wide at the diameter the circle looks the same as his cutie mark.  He has a bit of martial training with the wooden staff.
Weaknesses: Being only able to point the circle in one direction means that he can't truly block every shot that comes his way. Shots from the side or behind take no effect from the shield and can seriously hurt him. Taking too many shots to the shield will cause it to shatter and he will take time to recover from the exhaustion. With his Asthma he can only fight for so long before it becomes harder to breath and his attacks become sloppy.
Occupation: Abstract Artist with some work in portraits.
Gear: His robe, a wooden staff
History: Dazzle was an aspiring artist, his love abstract art could be seen in all his work. As a child growing up in Neighpon he was always a bit smaller then the rest of the colts around. While they dreamed of joining the Army of the Rising Sun. That dream was all shared by any colt around. Seen as tradition and legacy, Dazzle was shipped off to a military camp where he was pushed through some of the hardest training around. Being smaller and having asthma wrecked his chances of ever joining the army. Yet he managed to gain a bit of training with the wooden staff before he was ejected from the camp.  Dishonored and forced away from his home; he took the first ship to Equstria. Taking with him his knowledge of paint and brushes.

When he arrived in Equstria he was in a different period all together. Equstria had tall buildings that reached far above the ground and there was paved roads in all directions. A little lost Dazzle settled down in a apartment nearby a lovely pond and park. Outside of his window he would watch the day go by as he would paint away some of the scenes he saw and made his own scenes some of the time. Over time he had managed to paint on many canvases but his money began to run low till one day people comment on how he was a fairly good painter. He sold some of those paints and the demand began to grow higher with each painting. Soon enough he was running out of ideas so he traveled to the nearby library. Searching the dusty old books he couldn't fight exactly what he wanted until he ran straight into one of the shelves.

Knocking loose one of the books on the top; a large black book with a circle that had symbols, landed at his hooves. The book laid open before him and strange symbols sat there allowing him to look at the truly strange pictures. He decided to take the book so he could paint some of the strange circles. Painting one of the circles upon the canvas his eye caught a strange note that stuck out of the book. Taking the note he read the words out loud, "In blood we pay, magic our guide, and the soul that binds the circle together" The red circle began to glow lightly before becoming blinding in a few moments. Searing pain flowed across his form but was mostly concentrated where his cutie mark was. The world faded to black as the pain became to much to handle.

After a few hours between the void he came back around to notice that his cutie mark of a paintbrush had been replaced with the circle he had draw. Inside the circle began to change his personality a bit to bring defense to those who needed it. He could breath a little better now and he was a bit taller. Changes to his fur and mane were permanent and he could feel a little stronger then before. Most of all he could cast the spell circle that would protect him from spells.  
Personality: Wiling to step in and protect those who are weak he is a guardian at heart though his words might be a bit harsh some of the time. He means well but being changed has some effects on his mind like he wants to protect the weak all the time but he wants to draw when he can. Conflict within his mind makes him a bit strange to be around but he is a nice character.
Current Home: Canterlot
Misc: A little on edge thanks to his change.
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Two Sides of the Coin wrote:
Name:Dazzling Lines

Congratulations, your first approved character!
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DualThrone wrote:
Pencil Doodle wrote:
Name: Pencil J. Doodle
Cutie mark.: HB Pencil mid-drawing

What's an HB Pencil?

I don't need you to answer the question because this character is approved, but I'm curious.

A HB pencil is just a regular writing pencil.
You see, you can get all different kinds of Pencil, H having a harder lead, whilst B has a soft lead. Most drawing pencils range from B to 9B, but HB is a combination of both leads; perfect for writing.
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Your avatar is gloriously creepy. Smile

Pseudologia Fantastica wrote:
Name: Honed Edge, formerly Sir Honor Bound

Quote :
Honed Edge's Codes:

I: Upon the Topic of Skill

Skill is the most respectable Attribute in any Being upon a Battlefield.  Skills gained, not given by Nature or Magic, are what determine a Being's Worth. Strength of the Body, while considered Skill, is amongst the lowest, and is never to be used to overcome true Skill. If a Being possesses little Skill, it is the duty of their skilled Allies to aid them in becoming skilled. If a Being is unable to become skilled, they have no Place in Battle.  If a Being is unwilling to become skilled, they have no Place.

II: Upon the Topic of Allies, Enemies and Those Considered Neutral

Allies are decided by the Intention of the Soul.  Allies are not to be made by Gender, Race, Blood, Status, Friendship or Skill.  Upon joining Allies, their Goal and Means of reaching your shared Intention become yours.  You must aid your Allies in any way possible, unless it would necessitate a Breach of the Codes.  Enemies are chosen based on an antagonisation to your Allies' Intention of the Soul.  Enemies are not to be made by previous Enmity or Alliance.  Enemies are only to be attacked when they pose a direct Threat to your Intentions.  Those considered neither Enemy nor Ally are considered Neutral, and are to be treated with Kindness, in the Hope of a future Alliance.

III: Upon the Topic of Combat

Combat is only to be used to aid Allies.  Combat for the sake of Combat is deemed as an unethical Act.  During Combat, only the Strength your Opponent possesses may be used.  In Combat with a Group, only the Strength of the strongest Member may be used.  Combat shall be decided by the Skill of the Combatants.  If a Combatant has a Skill given from Nature the other Combatant does not, this Skill may not be used.  If your Opponent proves themselves to have more Skill, you must concede Defeat, and no longer prevent them from reaching their Intention.  Before Combat, the Combatants must agree on what concedes the Victor.  

IV: Upon the Topic of the Dead

The Memories of the Dead are to be given Respect.  The Bodies of the Dead do not require such Respect.  Do not purposefully defile a Body of the Dead, but it is not necessary to protect a Body of the Dead from Decay.  Allow Nature to take Nature's Course on a Body of the Dead whenever possible.

V: Upon the Topic of the Codes

These Codes are only held by Beings who take the Oath.  Each Being has their own Code, and these Codes are to be respected, as different as they may be.  New Additions may be made to the Code whenever deemed necessary by the Being who has taken the Oath.  The Codes may not restrict Matters of Friendship, Matters of Family, Matters of Worship, Matters of Blood, Matters of Status, or Matters of the Heart.

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Well-played, sir. I will give you conditional approval, and the condition is that I get to drag your figments (and especially this one) into some game or another just to see how you use the characters you build in actual role-play. Smile
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Name: Sabre Dancer
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Specialty (eg. special spells, unique powers etc): She is good with any weapon that has a sharp edge to it. She has the magical skill to solidify her mana into several different bladed weapons, but if she makes three, seven, or twelve, they cost little mana and are very powerful, as those are three sacredly magical numbers. The blades are as strong as steel as long as she keeps them at these three numbers, but if she summons only one or two, they are as strong as iron.

This is unfathomably fascinating. O_O I expect to learn in Cloudsdale conversation how you came up with the concept of three sacred numbers of blades.

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Name: Buttercup Fenrir Anuk Hylin, uses his middle name when with friends

Race: Diamond Dog, Doberman breed

Age: None, even he, knows his real age. But looks to be in his early twenties.

Mane: Silver and gold, it being coloured by a rather bad illusion spell that dosn´t always keep up with his movements.

Coat: Jet black with a few scars showing trough it.

Extra details that aren’t needed but are nice to add: Are trained on a novice level in both paw to paw combat and twin sword fencing.

Distinguishing Features: Have a pair of tattoos on his face, one of an Ankh in the right side of his face, his eye looking out of the loop. The other tattoo being the Eye of Horus with his left eye being the iris. With tattoos not showing properly on furred creatures have Buttercup not only gotten the drawings made in midnight blue ink, but gotten the marks burnt as well so they never will be hidden in fur.
On each of his arms and on his legs does he bear a pair of octarine arm and calf guards with a triple helix design, the spirals made from electrum, an alloy of gold and silver that he believes brings him luck, the spirals beginning at the root of his fingers and toes, and stops at his elbow and knee with his guards, them encasing his arms and legs without any seems or clear way to be taken off. While the armour seems to be of a dull dark grey hue to most does the octarine really show its real colours when the eyes of a strong magic user looks at them, their real colour being a greenish-yellow purple that only can be seen in the magical spectrum. The effect is like staring into a spinning rainbow, pleasant for some, tripping for others and giving a headache when you look away for most.

Speciality (eg. special spells, unique powers etc): Knows of the secret behind the "chakra of lightning and vigour", it in layman terms meaning that he knows how to make potions of healing, potions of enhanced speed and reaction time and not least a tonic that makes him able to channel "static electricity" both trough himself and out into his weapons, meaning that he have to move around to charge up, using all of his stored energy with each zap.

Weaknesses: One of Buttercups biggest weaknesses is that he dosn´t believe in magic, no matter how much of it he sees, him being in the belief that it is just "channelled chakra" and since he have faith in his own chakra can it not harm him.
In general does Buttercup not know his own limits fully, and have often tried to bite over bigger things than he could chew because of his "mastery of chakra"

Occupation: While Buttercup have no permanent job have all the jobs he have taken had something to do with protection, jobs as guard, body guard and bouncer being normal for him.

Gear: A pair of Khopeshs or sickle swords on his back, a pair of bandoleers with "potions of chakra" in them, a loincloth and a backpack on his back with knick knack and a straw mat to sleep on.

History: As an orphan child grew Buttercup up in a Zebracan cult that was rooted in the belief of "Those that Came Before", a mysterious collection of beings that after their belief came down from the stars, each taking home in a celestial body of some kind. These greater beings bringing the secret of chakra to all, the chakra of flight, the chakra of energy, the chakra of growth and so on and so on, the greater beings giving a specific chakra to all beings, big or small, beside the Diamond Dog race, them being the only ones not born with it, but able to learn the secrets of chakra.
Having worked for the cult many a year, taken many classes, and paid many bits of gold and carat of gemstones, had Buttercup gotten enough of never leaning anything, him one day taking the knowledge that he wanted instead of waiting on it. Only one single secret, the one of lightning and vitality did he grasp from the mighty tome he had stolen before he was caught in the act and thrown out on the street, rejected and renounced by teachers, friends and those that he had chosen to call family.
While having been given up by his teachings did he himself never give up on what he had been thought, and over the years to come found he others that had belief in chakra. These new folk teaching him how to harness his body instead of his mind, martial arts and fencing taking up the room that mediation and hard slave like manual labour once had in his life.

Personality: While being a fighter is Buttercup a big fan of pacifism, and while having the size to be a brute is he gentle as a lamb, never one to get aggravated or yell.
In Buttercup world is there no bigger right or wrong, good or bad, only life and death, and all decisions that dosn´t end in death is good ones, be it kidnapping of foals or other things that others see as wrong. That being said can Buttercup kill people if needed, but does it rarely if not at all, only doing it as his last resort and if he knows with 120% certainty that it would save more people than it would hurt.

Current Home: Buttercup current home is wherever he lays his head to rest, him never staying in the same place all too long, although he have a habit to often return to towns that he have a liking of. Some of the more common places to find him being in or near the Everfree Forest, The Crystal Empire and Roam in Zebraca.

Misc: Haves an allergy to shellfish and nuts, both giving him tummy trouble and a rash. Eats both things anyway.
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   Name: Buttercup Fenrir Anuk Hylin, uses his middle name when with friends

Approved.

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Name: Celestial Sight

Race: Earth Pony

Age: 10

Mane: Pale gray with a streak of red in the back.

Coat: Pale gray near the face, turns a shade lighter towards his backside

Cutie mark.: The Twin-Tailed Comet (Looks like this, just without the circle)

Extra details that aren’t needed but are nice to add: His mane is kept in a ponytail.

Distinguishing Features: The colt is blind and his eyes are cloudy due to a fully developed cataract in both his eyes.

Specialty (eg. special spells, unique powers etc): Has divination abilities according to him but they almost always come down to him just being lucky in his prophecies. One could call it a Pinkie Sense 0.2 Alpha build

Weaknesses: When his luck runs out he will be forced to admit that he's no prophet like he claims to be. But even then, he will still have some ability to predict what is yet to come.

Occupation: Has a shop where he offers prophecies to paying customers.

Gear: Nothing besides the band that he uses to tie up his ponytail.

History: Celestial Sight was born as a sightless foal of great prodigy, for the little colt had his cutie mark the instant he was born. Taking this as a sign of greatness, he was named Celestial Sight in addition to being pampered and adored by all his family. Once he was able to talk, he began saying random things like "that flower vase will fall on that pretty unicorn's head" or "that nice stallion is gonna fall through an opened sewer grate" and they always happened. His parents began advertising him as an oracle who could tell your future. What they didn't know that it all was pure dumb luck on Sight's part. He, however knew it. And yet he keeps up this act to this day. Why? Because his parents are so proud of him, he doesn't wanna let them down. Not to mention he likes the attention.

Personality: When doing business, he keeps a face of indifference, as if he knew all the problems of the pony who comes to him for his services. With children his age, he likes to play games with them as long as he doesn't have to run long distances so he doesn't get lost.

Current Home: Canterlot noble district.

Misc: His parents keep the shop up. The shop is like a large stall with a purple cushion on it that he sits on.


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Name: Celestial Sight

This is a good character. I feel incredibly sad for him. Approved.
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Name: Jentoru hanabira
Race:Pegasus-Dragon Hybrid
Age: 32
Mane: Solid raven black mane and tail. The bangs of the mane are braided to keep the silky hair out of her face but the rest of the mane is wrapped about her neck before trailing down her left side. A red ribbon is bound to the near bottom of her hair to serve as a reminder to what happened so long ago. When she is wearing her armor, the mane will be tucked inside the helmet and neck cuff.
Coat: Pure white fur  that shimmers in the morning sun with patches of red scales around her: neck and upper legs, her knees and just above her hooves, surrounding her flank and trails down the upper part of her tail. Her under belly is made of large, stretchy scales that allow some of the moves she is doing. She has one black wing on the right side of her body while the other was cut off when assailants attacked her home.
Cutie mark.: Katana with a pink lilly rose next to it
Extra details that aren’t needed but are nice to add: Given the appearance of a koi fish's scales, her father's looked like a Koi's scales but her mother was raven black to which gave her the wing.
Distinguishing Features: She always wears a necklace that symbolizes the balance between all. Two large, strange looking horns protrude from her head and a head band that is connected. Along where her wing was brutally separated from her body is a light pink scar where it was.  
Specialty (eg. special spells, unique powers etc): Born into a family of samurai her ability with the sword is quite high. Being able to strike down others that dare to come up against her, she holds the very honor of her family’s katana in her hooves. Magically enchanted with light magic the sword can strike harder than its equivalents; slicing through harder substances like butter but limited on how she can use it. The sword has been enchanted with the light magic to allow her to slice the very spells out of the air as they come towards her as she worships the mighty sun itself. After going through extremely tedious training she learned how to be faster with her body and to fight with her hooves though she carries a Yumi Bow for ranged.
Weaknesses:When she was younger her wing was brutally sliced away from her body, she can’t fly and that side is always hurting. Blows to the side cut deeper into her body and cause extreme pain across her body. She can only stop the spell if it comes towards her where she points the sword otherwise the spell can go straight through and hit her. Traveling at speed can make her exhausted if she uses that speed too often or too long. Armor is useful for taking physical hits but provides no resistance to spells.  She can only use the bow when she stands up on her back legs so she can’t move if she does use it.
Occupation: Shrine protector and monk.
Gear: Her armor and Katana
History:Raised in the family of Calmauim, she was brought up with the greatest amount of honor and justice that came from her dragon father while her pony mother taught her about the ideals of civil actions and how to maintain one’s self among other people. The both of them taught her about the god they worship which was Yato, which was the source of all life in the world. (Similar to Celestia)
Peace prospered inside the family but over time others became envious of their wealth and power that came from service to the emperor. One day everything changed to the point that an assailant came into their home to slay their family. Delivering a mortal wound to her mother then cutting off her wing she retaliated back with a stab of her father’s short katana. Catching the assailant completely by surprise she ran him all the way through. Disgusted, hurt, bleeding and weeping she walked all the way to where her father, the temple of Yato, was before collapsing right at his feet.

Healing his own daughter he knew that she wouldn’t be safe from anyone so he taught her to wield the katana as a tool of peace and not for destruction. She learned and grew more powerful with each day that she trained but as time went on so did the ideas. A civil war started in Neighpon between the emperor and the shogun that ruled. Fearing for his daughter’s life she sent her away to Equstria to wait out the war.
Personality: Seems a little cold but she is very kind unless you challenge her on the battlefield. Swift, brutal and fierce is the ways to describe her whenever she fights but at the shrine she set up she is peaceful and calm. Thoughtfully holding the morals of the Samurai code high above the riffraff of others.
Current Home:Ponyville
Misc:She is very strange for one to look at but willing to make friends.
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Name: Jentoru hanabira

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